英语写作讲解ppt课件.ppt
我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物英语写作讲解英语写作讲解我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。并说明你的主张。篇短文。并说明你的主张。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼吸接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康新鲜空气，有利健康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习大脑休息，有利于学习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 学生作文展示学生作文展示 There is an arguement on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing or not.Finally,we get the following results. About 65% of the students think we should go spring outing.Because it may let us touch nature,and we can get fresh air.As we know, it is good for our health.Whats more,going spring outing makes our brains relaxed,which helps us study well .我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 However,about 35%of students are against it. Because college entrance examination is coming, we might not have a good time. And it has a bad effect on our schoolwork. Therefore, they think they shouldnt go spring outing. 评语：文章评语：文章信息完整，结构好，连贯流畅信息完整，结构好，连贯流畅 卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整。书写工整。我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物高考作文类型：高考作文类型：对比观点题型对比观点题型要求论述两个对立的观点要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法并给出自己的看法我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物分四段写：分四段写：Para.1. Introduction: 引入主题句引入主题句 Para. 2. Point1 有一些人认为有一些人认为Para. 3. Point2 另一些人认为另一些人认为Para .4. Conclusion Conclusion 我的看法我的看法The outline of the writing:写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：第一：仔细审题，列举大纲。第一：仔细审题，列举大纲。我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：第二：第二： 围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 1.grade three students of a high/middle school 2.There are 65%students agree it. 3.Have 65%students agree it.- 65% of the students agree with it be in favor of the idea be for the idea 4.They thought go spring outing can touch the nature. - They think we can get close to nature by going spring outingGrade Three-Senior 3 students我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 5.They think going spring outing can make them breath the fresh/ flesh air. 呼吸新鲜空气（呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ) 6.It is benefit to their healthy. It is beneficial to their health. 7. make spirit loose. 精神放松精神放松（relax oneself refresh oneself / make sb relaxed 8.let our brain have a good rest大脑休息大脑休息（rest their brains ）Chinglish,即即中中式英语式英语我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 9. be good for studying be good for study 10. (1) High exam will come. (2)Because of college entrance examination is coming. (3)With college entrance examination is coming. - With the college entrance examination coming.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Key words:高三学生（高三学生（senior 3 students）春游春游(go spring outing）讨论（讨论（discussion）接触自然（接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物精神放松（精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）没心情玩（没心情玩（dont feel like playing outside）耽误学习耽误学习(waste the time)在我看来（在我看来（in my opinion）我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para.1.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?Introduction:（sample） Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 巧用过渡句、过渡词，巧用过渡句、过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系理顺文章的逻辑关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. 写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：第三：添加过度，确保连贯。第三：添加过度，确保连贯。我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that, of them are in favor of the idea thatAbout 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air .我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Reason 2:活动使精神放松，大脑休活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: whats more ,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Conclusion: Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。 Eg: They think it will do good to their study.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点） 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）（承上启下） Sentence pattern: However, others prefer to Some others have just the opposite opinion. On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Reason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that. Eg: They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Reason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. About 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air .whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their study.参考范文参考范文 one possible version我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea. They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study. In my opinion, I d like to say that we should go spring outing.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. About 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their study. On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea. They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物表示观点对比类写作表示观点对比类写作作文模版作文模版 The topic of （主题）（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. People have different opinions on this problem. of them are in favor of the idea that They hold their view for the reason of (理由一）理由一）What is more， (理由二）。理由二）。 Moreover， （理由三）。（理由三）。 However, of them hold the opposite opinion. / People who are against it dont think so. Firstly ,Secondly (besides ) ,Thirdly (finally)， For my part， the former is surely a wise choice .我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Homework: Improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起: Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .On the other hand, people think .D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally/ For my part As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly Thirdly In the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, .表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词 . Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物
