2021届高考英语二轮复习 优化训练短文改错2（含解析）.doc

2015届高考英语二轮复习优化训练：短文改错A短文改错(2014·荣成模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I traveled on the 8:00 a. m. train from Glasgow to London Kings Gross on last Thursday. I was quite angry with the service of your company. The train didnt come on time. It was forty minute late when it left Glasgow. A man at the station minutesapologized to us, but he didnt give us some reasons for the delay. We then had anyfurther delays on the way. Asresult, I missed my plane, which made me adisappointing. The service on the train was very poor. The trip spent more than disappointed tookfive hours or only soft drinks were sold. Besides, something is wrong with the air but wasconditioner and it became extreme hot. Because of your good service, I feel extremely poor/badyou should make up for my loss. B短文改错(2014·沈阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When I first learn to write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main learnedproblem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into everythingEnglish. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and aputting down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself put talkingon paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little myselfstory and showedto my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. it read All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. Words假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”答案：My friend Dick was seven years old, and sister Katherine was five. One day their mother them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the to your sister. But to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger piece to the other person，” answered his aunt. Dick thought this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Man is creative and powerful. During the long history of human beings, the world has been complete changed by man with new invention and huge projects. However, comparing with man, nature is certainly more powerfully. Disasters such as earthquakes, typhoons, volcanoes happen so frequently, which make us believe everything that man creates it can be destroyed by nature and many of them can never be recovered. What's worse, man's damage nature will cause fewer terrible natural disasters. No matter which is more powerful, man or nature must treat each others as friends and live in peace. 答案：Man is creative and powerful. During the long history of human beings, the world has been changed by man with new and huge projects. However, with man, nature is certainly more . Disasters such as earthquakes, typhoons, volcanoes happen so frequently, which us believe everything that man createscan be destroyed by nature and many of them can never be recovered. What's worse, man's damage nature will cause terrible natural disasters. No matter which is more powerful, man nature must treat each as friends and live in peace. 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)Ladies and Gentlemen，May I pay your attention, please？Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr White, he is from America. And he is now leaving Beijing to America by Flight 2748. But we were told that Mr White forgot his passport as well his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed. The manager of the hotel has just telephoned to tell him about it. The manager has been sent his secretary to bring the passport and the wallet here, and she will come sooner. Will Mr White go to gate of our airport and wait for your passport and wallet? She will arrive at about ten minutes.第一句：pay改为have第二句：he 改为who第三句：to 改为for第四句：forgot改为left; well后加as第五句：him改为us第六句：去掉been; sooner改为soon第七句：to后加the第八句：at改为in短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)In my village a lot of children were leaving school for various reason. Some families are too poor to send their children to school, and they have to earn money to support their families. Many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They would rather let their children to stay at home. I feel worried this. I think every child should have a chance to go to school.We should pay many attention to the education of children, for we will play an important part in our socialist construction in the future.Ways must be found prevent children from leave off their studies.第一句： wereare; reasonreasons 第三句： uselessuseful第四句： 去掉to第五句： worried后加about 第六句： a the第七句： manymore; wethey第八句： found后加to; leaveleaving 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in the years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out only to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. 第一句： athe 第二句： suddensuddenly 第四句： hotterhot; iswas 第六句： outout of第七句： dropdrops第八句： house前加the 或my 第十句： loudlyloud 第十一句： 去掉When; brokebroken短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)September 11, 2011SundaySunnyToday is Sunday.I didn't get up early as usually.In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a movie. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3 pm., we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to our school and played the football.After that, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher, Mr Zhao，come into the school. He told us we had made great progresses this term.He also suggested they read more and wrote more.We promised him that we would follow his advice.第二句：usually改为usual第三句：do改为did第四句：classmate改为classmates第五句：And改为But; had后加been第六句：去掉 the第七句：while改为when第八句：progresses改为progress第九句：they改为we; wrote改为write第十句：would改为will短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)I think there is no easy way to succeed in teaching a new language.A good memory is a great help. However, it is not much use learning by heart long lists of words and its meanings. We must learn by using language.“Learn through practice” is a piece of good advice for those which are learning a new language. Practice is very important. We must practise to speaking and writing the language so much as we can. We learn to swim by getting onto the water and swim. And we learn to speak a new language by speaking it and not by being telling about it.第一句：teachinglearning第三句：useuseful; itstheir第四句：language 前加the第五句：whichwho第七句：去掉 to; soas第八句：ontointo; swimswimming第九句：tellingtold- 7 -