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2019年高考英语短文改错题集（中等难度）（附答案）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1. It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2.When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.3. During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.4.The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.5. Organic foods are usually more expensive, makes people unwilling to spend the extra money. Besides, they do have certain advantages. To begin with, farmers doesnt use harmful chemicals on organically grown foods. As matter of fact, this is one of the reasons that organic foods are more expensive. Without such chemicals, they need more care to stay health.Organically grown foods also had more nutrition than regular ones because the soil is careful done in a higher standard. According to study, organically grown foods provide with 21.1 percent more irons and 27 percent more vitamin C than regular ones on the average.6. Yesterday I went to see a film with my best friend Kate. We set off at 1:30 in the afternoon and plan to arrive at the cinema before 2:30 so that we could watch the 3:15 show. The traffic was terrible bad. That made it even worse was that our bus broke up on the way. They stopped a taxi but rushed to the show. “Two ticket for 3:15,” Kate said, put the money on the counter. The film started at the moment we sat down in the cinema. It was an exciting film and we had great time yesterday afternoon.7.Dear John, Im so pleased to receive your email.I feel exciting to know you dream becoming a professional football player.I am looking forward to see an international football star,John.Im surely you will succeed. As for me,teaching was my dream job.The reason for this is why I would like to share my knowledges with my students and help them solve problems.Besides,staying with students helps to keep me young.To realize my dream,I have to devote me to my study and enter an normal university. What will you do for your dream and who is your most favorite football player? Yours,7. While reading the newspaper two months ago, I was learned there was an organization naming Sole4Souls. One of the aims of this organization is to collect shoe to help those in need. My interest for shoes started when I learned there were children all over the world which couldnt attend school because they didnt have shoes. I learned that the pair of shoes could actual change someones life forever. However, I began to collect shoes with some of my friends. Believe it or not, we had collected more than 500 pairs of shoes so far. Im excited to be making difference in the world. At the same time, Im amazed at the support that we have received.9.Recently, Chinas Ministry of Education said that college students should took a year to start a company and do other valuable things. That has reminded people with the idea of a "gap year". If you had gap year, what would you do? The following is what Xiao Xin said that. I would take advantage for the year by learn independent life skills that I dont have at the moment, because I am going to leave home and live hv myself. Next I would take part in some voluntary activity from which I would learn the happy that can come from contributing to society. Whats much, I would spend more time with my parents.10.Dear Jenny, Welcome to my school! When you arrive, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting anything that interests us. The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites. There are many kinds of kites to choose from. So isnt it the good idea to buy some for your friends? Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule. Best wishes.Yours,Zhang11.As is known to we all, Americas national pastime is baseball. It has played in the country since the first settlers arrive. It was a national ball what was liked by many Americans at that time. Although baseball possibly developed from an English game, it is now thought of like an American sport. From the Little League to the Major League, player of all skill levels enjoy testing their power on the “ Field of Dreams”. Famous players, exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs, popcorns and peanuts are popularly among Americans. In a fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays.12. All students from our class go to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition.While listen,we made some notes carefully.We felt excitedly and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were both inspired by the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country. The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations.13. In my school life, a most unforgettable person is my math teacher. Not only did she helped us in class but also after class. I still remember the time that I got a “B” in the final exam. I liked math best but the teacher took pride in me all the time. However, I failed. I felt so disappointing that I lost my energy and confident. Then one day, I happened meet her in the street, and my face turned red right away. She told me not to give up and encourage me to work much more harder. Later, she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math. In addition, she cared for my feelings. With her help, I made greatly progress.14I got on my hike to take photographs of the nature. It was my school project what had to be finished today. I woke up much earlier than usual and left my house. It was still darker outside. When I arrived the lake, it was just at daybreak, The sky was pink but the sun was rising over the water. I sat on a rock next to the lake and watched the fish swimming in the water, listened to the birds singing in the nearby wood. Sudden, I realized I have left my camera on the bike. I returned to get them. Now, I could take pictures.15.Jiaozi (Chinese dumplings), mainly with meats and vegetable fillings, is a traditional Chinese food, dated back to about 1,500 years ago. China had been perfecting the art of dumpling making since the Ming Dynasty. The Spring Festival marks the start of a new year, but people choose to eat jiaozi to express theirs wishes for good fortune. By the tradition, family members get together to make dumplings. Approaches of cooking Chinese dumplings varies from place to place. There is no set rule as to which makes dumpling fillings. Whatever the fillings, the wrapping skill is essential to make jiaozi look attractively.参考答案 1.答案： It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just . Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that leaning from textbooks, and as well." , I raised my hand.解析：本文为记叙文。文章主要介绍了写作课上作者克服恐惧心理主动回答问题的故事。第一处:考查时态构成。根据语境可知,句子用过去完成时,过去完成时的构成是had done,所以begin要改为begun。第二处:考查非谓语动词。根据句子成分分析,本句有谓语为was,而且没有连词,与主语是主动关系,所以wait 要用非谓语waiting,表伴随。第三处:考查连词。句意:每个人都沉默了,等着看谁会被要求朗读他或她的段落。一次只能叫一个人,男女两者是选择关系,故把and改为or。第四处:考查固定搭配。be eager to do sth渴望做某事,故eager后加to。第五处:考查代词错误。句意:我已经完成了自己的作业。表示“我的”用my不用myself,或改为定冠词the也可以。第六处:考查固定结构。be afraid to do害怕做某事,所以that为多余,删掉。第七处:考查比较级。句意:我不敢在一大群人面前说话。这里没有比较的意思,故把larger改为large。第八处:考查主谓一致。that作主语,谓语动词用第三人称单数includes。第九处:考查名词单复数。错误不是一个,所以要用复数。第十处:考查副词。此处要用副词在句中做状语修饰整个句子,故把immediate改为immediately。【点睛】此题中的难点为非谓语动词的考查,如第二处错误,第五处错误,第二处解答时要分析句子结构,根据句中是否有谓语,连词来判断使用谓语还是非谓语,再根据句子主语everyone,与wait 之间为主动关系,所以要用现在分词。而第五处则主要考查be afraid to do 这一短语。2.答案： When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.解析：这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的个人经历。小时候周五夜晚家长不允许作者看卡通片,而是让他和他们一块儿玩扑克牌游戏。长大后作者才明白,这些纸牌游戏在后来的生活中很有用。第一处:考查名词。名词作定语,往往表明被修饰名词的时间、地点、类别、目的或用途、材料或来源等。名词所有格作定语则强调与被修饰的词的所有关系或表示逻辑上的谓语关系。此处表示“星期五晚上”,并不是所有关系,故把Fridays改为Friday。第二处:考查名词单复数。all表示三者或三者以上,后用名词复数。故把sort改为sorts。第三处:考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”,a用在表示泛指的单数名词前,the表示特指。故把the改为a。第四处:考查动词不定式。句意:无论我要求多少次要去看(卡通片)。用不定式表示目的。故把watching改为watch。第五处:考查情态动词。would后跟动词原形,故把to删除。第六处:考查代词。句意:他们会对我说玩纸牌有助于大脑。偷换人称代词,是对“我”说,前面提到的I,而不是we。故把us改为me。第七处:考查固定搭配。be unwilling to do sth.意为“不愿意做某事,不情愿做某事”。本文介绍的是过去的情况,故用过去时。所以在unwilling前加was。第八处:考查介词。play the games with sb.表示“和某人一块玩游戏”,故把for改为with。第九处:考查时态。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般过去时。故把are改为were。第十处:考查宾语从句的连接词。句意:当我是个孩子的时候我父母教给我的纸牌游戏在我日后的生活中证明非常有用。宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语,而是时间状语。故把where改为when。点晴:名词作定语与名词所有格作定语的区别。一般来说,名词作定语通常说明被修饰的词的性质,而名词所有格作定语则强调对被修饰的词的所有(权)关系或表示逻辑上的谓语关系。“the Party members(党员)”中,名词定语表示members的性质;“the Partys calls(党的号召)”中,Party具有动作发出者的作用,calls虽然是名词,却具有动作的含义。a student teacher实习教师,a students teacher一位学生的老师。3.答案： During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond(或) they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip. I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, he agreed.解析：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在去年寒假期间和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶过程中的所见所闻,由此讲述了乡下的巨大变化。1.countryside前加the 考查冠词。去年寒假,我和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶。此处特指去的是乡下,故加定冠词the。2. find改成found 考查动词时态。根据文章中的During my last winter holiday可知,事件发生在过去,故用一个过去时。故将find改成found。3. another改成other 考查形容词的用法。他们住在一个小房子里,院子里有狗、鸭子和其他牲畜。根据句意可知,将another改成other。4. here改成there 考查副词及语意理解。去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故将here改成there。5. chicken改成chickens 考查名词复数。他们拥有一个大的独立住宅,还养了许多只鸡。根据前文的dozens of可知,其后用名词复数形式。6. which改成in which或where考查定语从句的关系词。也门还有一个小池塘,里面养着鱼。此处a small pond是先行词,其在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,故用in which或where7. sell改成selling 考查动名词。去年夏天他们通过卖鱼挣了一大笔钱。此处介词by后用动名词,故用selling。8. happily改成happy 考查形容词作表语。他们的生活有了很大提高,我感到很高兴。此处形容词作表语,故将happily改成happy。9. 删除for 考查介词的用法。时间名词有every,each,last等词修饰时,其前不用介词。故删除for。10. but改成and 考查并列连词的用法。我计划每两年回来一次,他同意了。此处是并列关系,故将but改成and。点睛:本文中第9处改错是学生容易忽视的考点。时间名词有every,each,last,this,that等词修饰时,其前不用介词。例:We are going to fish this morning.I finished the course last winter holiday.4.答案：The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday. We can between staying at home and a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can(or) go to places of interest nearby. I that it is a good idea. It does not cost , yet we can still learn a lot.解析：考察记叙文,“我”和同学们对暑假的旅游计划的讨论。1、how 改为what 考察特殊结构。“特殊疑问词+to do”在本句中作为短语talk about 的宾语,其中what 还要作为动词do 的逻辑宾语。句意:同学们和我在讨论暑假期间做什么。2、chose 改为choose 考察句子结构。“情态动词+动词原形”才可以在句中作为谓语部分,而本句中chose是过去式。3、take改为taking 考查并列结构。本句中动名词短语staying at home与taking a trip构成并列关系,都作为介词between的宾语。4、but改为and 考查连词。句意:如果我们待在家里,很舒服也没有必要花钱。上下文之间是并列关系,而不是转折关系,所以使用and连接上下文。5、about后加the 考查定冠词。在英语中定冠词the通常表示特指,本句中the修饰world表示特指这个世界。6、your改为our 考查代词。应该使用our与本句的主语we保持一致。句意:如果我们出国旅游,我们就拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识。7、knowledges改为knowledge 考查名词单复数。本句中名词knowledge是不可数名词,没有复数形式。8、删除can或can改为should 考查虚拟语气。动词suggest作为建议的时候,后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气“(should)+动词原形”,所以本句可以删除can或can改为should。9、thought改为think 考查时态。本文介绍我和同学们商量暑假旅游的事情,全文以一般现在时为主,所以本句使用现在时think。10、many改为much 考查代词。本句中代词much代