新目标初三英语写作课ppt课件.ppt
Describe the pictureShe is used to using a smart-phone before going to bed every day.She uses a smart-phone before going to bed.智能手机智能手机before going to bedDangerbe bad for伤身体伤身体描述图片描述图片Describe the pictureMany people use smart-phones when they cross the street.Many people use smart-phones when they ride bikesdrive a carwalk.cause traffic accidents 1.eat with familyeat with familyDescribe the pictureSome people use smart-phones when they eat with family.Some people use smart-phones. They eat with family.Dangerinfluencethe relationship with Opinions1.好好利用手机。（make good use of）2.面对面的交流胜过网上交流。 （ face-to-face conversation） Structures: In my opinion I think/believeWed better make good use of smart-phones.Face-to-face conversation is better than chatting online.We can use them at proper time and proper situations小组讨论发表你们的观点：小组讨论发表你们的观点：(firstly, secondly, besides, whats more, finallyOn the one hand, on the other handnot onlybut also)（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已）已被广泛使用。我们身边的被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”写写一篇一篇120词左右的短文。词左右的短文。要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：1. eat with family 2. cause traffic accidents3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. _小组讨论，完成以下任务小组讨论，完成以下任务 1.1.认真审题，认真审题， 理清思路。理清思路。 2.2.列出提纲，初步成形。列出提纲，初步成形。 本篇文章应分为几段，每段都写什么？本篇文章应分为几段，每段都写什么？应选用哪种时态？第几人称？应选用哪种时态？第几人称？需要用到哪些句式结构？需要用到哪些句式结构？（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已）已被广泛使用。我们身边的被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以以“Refuse to be phubbers”写写一篇一篇120词左右的短文。词左右的短文。现现象象弊弊端端观观点点选出每段主题句：1.In my opinion, we should learn to use our smart-phones properly, and we should refuse to be phubbers 2. With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. 3.Being phubbers has some disadvantages.1.现象现象2.弊端弊端3.观点观点几点建议：几点建议：Dont eat fast.Dont eat, fast!I love China.I love china(瓷器瓷器).I very like English.()I like English very much. ()He is very young. He knows a lot. ( Good! ) He knows a lot although he is very young. ( Better! )1.1.注意标点和字母大小写注意标点和字母大小写. .2.2.注意句子的结构正确。注意句子的结构正确。3.3.注意遣词造句，争取文采。注意遣词造句，争取文采。Your opinions(1.make good use of 2.face-to-face conversation, ) 现象现象Phenomenon (1.eat with family2.get together with friends3.be busy doing cross the street）DisadvantagesIn my opinion, We shouldWed betterI think/believe4.the relationship with5.cause traffic accidents6.be bad for/get in the way of Exchange your article with your partner , then underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes. 1.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短语。用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短语。 2.用用英语思维英语思维来表达。来表达。 3.语句要通顺，层次要清楚，上下连贯很重语句要通顺，层次要清楚，上下连贯很重要。要。Some advice for you!Put down the phones, give more time to our families .Homework A组：继续改写本节课作文，使它更加完美。组：继续改写本节课作文，使它更加完美。B组：利用本节课所学方法组：利用本节课所学方法，针对近段时间班上针对近段时间班上有些同学有些同学“抄袭作业或不锻炼身体抄袭作业或不锻炼身体”的现象屡的现象屡见不鲜，写一篇分析原因、危害、解决办法和见不鲜，写一篇分析原因、危害、解决办法和自己的态度的英语作文自己的态度的英语作文 。
