2022年-高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练 .pdf

2019-2020 年高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练（ 1）应用文型基础写作11 专题导读应用文是指日常生活和工作中为某种具体的实用目的而写的文体，主要有书信、通知、海报、请柬、请假条、便条、日记、启事、祝辞、履历表等。应用文的语言力求平实、准确、简洁，表达的内容结构严谨，且易于理解掌握。写作时要注意以下几点：1正式的应用文有比较规范的格式，但高考中的基础写作至今尚未考查过格式，只要求表达正文内容。2注意时态，如日记常用过去时态，通知、请柬通常要用将来时态，而履历表用现在时态。3应用文的写作往往有一些特定的习惯语句或套话，这些语句在考试中可能会考查到，所以要重点掌握。典例导练【xx四川卷改编】最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。【写作内容】1你校开展课外活动的情况；2你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；3为同学选择课外活动提出建议；4为学校开展课外活动提出建议。注意：【写作要求】1只能使用5 个句子表达全部内容；2文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总句数。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯One possible version：名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 1 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - After-class ActivitiesNowadays ，after-class activities are being more and more popular in high schools.In our school ，there are various kinds of activities，which we enjoy very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge ，they also free me from the heavy work of study. As a student ，youd better choose the activities which interest you and on the other hand，the school should organize more activities for students and leave them more time for activities by giving them less homework. Dear friends，please actively take part in after-class activities.新题预测（一）【写作内容】假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter 找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1年龄； 2. 性别； 3. 爱好 ( 旅游、运动、宠物等) 。【写作要求】1只能使用5 个句子表达全部内容；2信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总句数。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。( 一)One possible version：Dear Peter ，I m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine.In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis.Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend, 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 2 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in mon.And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards，Li Hua ( 二) 假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。【写作内容】1简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；2用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；3对她表示美好的祝愿。【写作要求】1只能使用5 个句子表达全部内容；2开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总句数；3留言中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：June 26, xx Dear Li Hua，It s time to say goodbye.It s time to recall those beautiful days we spent together and you ware the very person who gave me a hand when necessary and the most considerate person who knew exactly what I needed. When I suddenly fell ill two years ago, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital.You took good care of me while I was having an injection.Later, 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 3 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - you managed to help me with my lessons, without which I would have failed in the examination. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you and have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams e true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe! Yours ，Wang Ping 【北京市丰台区xx 统一模拟】第一节（15 分）假设你是红星中学高二(1) 班的学生李华，下个月英国Saint Gorge High School的交换学生要来你校学习。学校招募接待家庭。请你根据以下信息，提出申请并说明理由。 1. 家里住宿条件好； 2. 英语听说能力强； 3. 了解英国人的文化习俗。注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam, Yours, Li Hua 第一节应用类作文（ 15 分）一、评分原则： 1. 本题总分为15 分，按 4 个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 4 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - 3. 评分时应考虑：内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否规范。 4. 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5. 词数少于50，从总分中减去1 分。二、各档次给分范围和要求：第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到交际对象的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。13 分 15 分第二档基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求；运用的语法和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。9分 12 分第三档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，未能清楚地传达信息。4 分 8 分第四档未完成试题规定的任务。写了少量相关信息；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。1 分 3 分0 分未传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。三、 Possible versions Possible version 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to host a student from Saint George High School. My house is big enough to give him a room to live in. Also, I am good at English listening and speaking. I have studied a lot about British culture and customs. I can create a weling atmosphere for him. I would be very happy, if you give me this opportunity. 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 5 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - Thank you! Yours, Li Hua (65 words) Possible version 2 Dear Sir or Madam, I feel very excited to know that the exchange students from Saint Gorge High School will e and study at our school. I would like to be a host family. The reasons are as follows: First, my home is big with three bedrooms and two bathrooms. This makes it possible for me to provide the exchange student with good living acmodations. Moreover, I have a good mand of English and I am good at listening and speaking. I would be able to municate with the student easily. In addition, I have a good understanding of British customs and culture, allowing us to have a lot to talk about. Because of the above mentioned reasons I am applying to be a host family. I sincerely hope I will be granted this great opportunity. Thank you very much! Yours, Li Hua (136 words) 2019-2020 年高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练（ 2）说明文型基础写作1-1 专题导读说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化或结果的文章。高考中，说明文常见的话题有：产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。近几年的说明文主要是及时性的说明文。写作这类文章需注意以下几点：1首先要读题审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点，不可遗漏也不能添加。2写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 6 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - 类法和因果法等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。3时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史时，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动语态；若是介绍地点环境等，要善于运用there be结构。真题典例【xx广东卷】以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。基本信息：(1) 书名： Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother (2) 作者： Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授(3) 出版时间： xx 年(4) 内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事(5) 效应：引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：(1) 中文版： xx 年初开始在中国销售(2) 意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法(3) 最新消息： 17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛* 和耶鲁录取*耶鲁： Yale ；* 哈佛： Harvard 真题典例【写作内容】根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1图书的基本信息；2图书的相关报道。【写作要求】只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Version 1：A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in xx.It tells how the author，a Chinese American and professor at Yale University，educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.Its publication has started a debate 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 7 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - as to which way of parenting is superior， the traditional Chinese way or the American way.It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early xx.Unexpectedly， the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale. Version 2：A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in xx.Its author is Amy Chua ，a Chinese American and professor at Yale，who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.Ever since its publication， a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way.The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early xx，but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chuas way of parenting.A recent report says that Amy s elder daughter,17，has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale. 新题预测【写作内容】请根据以下内容提示写一篇欢迎辞。假定英国客人琼斯(Jones) 夫妇将到你校参观访问，他们将把一批图书和电脑作为礼物送给你们。你们将送一幅中国画给他们。现在要你准备一篇欢迎辞(speech) ，内容包括以下几点：(1) 欢迎英国客人来参观我校；(2) 感谢他们送的礼物；(3) 简单介绍你们学校的情况：学校有90 年的历史，现在有两座教学楼、一座实验楼、一个图书馆和一个大运动场；(4) 教师工作认真，学生学习努力；(5) 欢迎客人在参观后提出建议，以改进学校工作。【写作要求】1只能使用5 个句子表达全部内容；2开头和结尾已写好，不计入总句数。名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 8 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：Ladies and gentlemen，teachers and students，I have the honour to make a speech to wele the respected British guests Mr Jones and Mrs Jones. Firstly, thank you very much for your giftsa lot of books and puters and in return we ll send you a famous Chinese picture as a present.Our school is a big one with a history of 90 years.Now it has been equipped with two teaching buildings, a laboratory building, a library, and a playground.The teachers are strict in their work and students study hard.After you have been shown around our school, we hope youll give us advice on how to improve our work so that we can run our school better. Wish you have a good time in our school. Thank you! 【北京市丰台区xx 统一模拟】第二节情景作文 (20 分) 假设你是红星中学高二(1) 班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你们家上周收留流浪狗的真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意： 1. 文章的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。Last Friday，第二节情景作文 (20 分) 一、评分原则： 1. 本题总分为20 分，按 5 个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 9 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - 确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 4. 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5. 词数少于60，从总分中减去1 分。二、内容要点：1. 发现流浪狗并带回家2. 给小狗喂食、洗澡3. 讨论是否留下小狗4. 遛狗、和小狗玩耍三、各档次的给分范围和要求：第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯、结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。18 分 20 分第二档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点：运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求；语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。15 分 17 分第三档基本完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了内容要点：运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。12 分 14 分名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 10 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - 基本达到了预期的写作目的。第四档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容；所用句式和词汇有限；语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。6分 11 分第五档未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容；句式单调、词汇贫乏；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。1 分 5 分0 分未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。四、 Possible versions: Possible version 1: Last Friday, on the way home from school, I found a dirty puppy dog lying beside the dustbin. He was so weak that he couldnt open his eyes. I felt sorry for the puppy and carried him home immediately. After feeding him food and milk, I gave him a shower. I was so glad to see the dog recover. He was so lovely and I wanted to keep him. After discussing the situation with my parents, I decided to adopt him. Today the dog has bee part of our family. We walk him in the park, play with him and take good care of him. He brings us happiness and keeps us pany. (111 words) Possible version 2: Last Friday, a chance encounter changed me and my familys life greatly. After school, I was about to enter my apartment building when a little dirty dog, lying beside the dustbin, caught my eye. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. So I bent down and held him in my arms. I rushed him upstairs and right away fixed him some food. Then, I gave him a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. What a lovely dog! When my parents got home, I asked if I could keep the dog. To my surprise and happiness, they agreed. From that day, he has bee a member of our family. Everyone 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 11 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - has enjoyed his pany. My parents walk him often. He and I play joyfully. Looking at the cute, happy dog today. I realize that I did the fight thing. I brought him to a warm, loving home and he has brought us great happiness and laughter. (161 words) 名师资料总结 - - -精品资料欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 名师精心整理 - - - - - - - 第 12 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - -