2021年高考英语题型训练写作五含解析.docx
题型训练 写作（五）第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 We each is thinking about the future. What is me? I have made up my mind become a middle school teacher. Does it sound surprising? I begin to have this dream when I was only the child. I love children. I dont think that is a waste of time to deal with them all the year around. On the contrary, to me it would mean happiness and joyful. Although teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to become teachers. The main reason for this is that teaching is one of the most stressed jobs. In spite of that, Im determined to give all my lives to the cause of education.第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom在学习中国文化时读到中国成语“囊萤映雪”,向你求助了解其寓意并了解有关知识，请给他回信，要点如下：1. 该成语的寓意；2. 中国成语的特点（简洁有意义，源自文学经典，历史故事，民间口语）注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇： 萤火虫 firefly 中国成语 Chinese idiomDear Tom, Its great to hear from you. Im delighted to know you are interested in Chinese idioms. _Yours faithfully,LiHua.参考答案改错We each is thinking about the future. What is me? I have made up my mind become a middle school teacher. are mine toDoes it sound surprising? I begin to have this dream when I was only the child. I love children. I dont think thatbegana itis a waste of time to deal with them all the year around. On the contrary, to me it would mean happiness and joyful. joyAlthough teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to become teachers. The main reason for this is that teaching is one of the most stressed jobs. In spite of that, Im determined to give all my lives to the stressfullifecause of education.书面表达Dear Tom, Its great to hear from you. Im delighted to know you are interested in Chinese idioms. Nang Ying Ying Xue tells a story- a scholar in ancient time studied so diligently by the light from the firefly in the summer night and the reflection of snow in winter. It indicates that in spite of the poor and tough situation, we should devote ourselves to working persistently for the goal. In fact, Chinese idioms, brief but meaningful, are an important carrier of Chinese culture, which guide us through our life with its unique wisdom. Some idioms are concluded from classical literature while others like the one you feel puzzled about have their origins in historical stories. Besides, using idioms in communication will surely make expressions vivid and powerful.I sincerely hope the above can be of some help and you can feel the charm of Chinese culture through learning idioms.Yours faithfully,LiHua.
