2022年初中英语作文评分标准及必背优秀范文 .pdf

1 初中英语作文评分标准及必背优秀范文（整理版）第四档：（1513 分） 语言流畅，语句通顺，合乎逻辑。适当使用连词成分。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（1210 分） 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确。使用简单的连词成分。达到了预期的写作目的。第二档：（96 分）漏掉一些信息点。有些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。使用简单的连接成分。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第一档：（51 分） 描述不清楚，内容不连贯。语法结构或词汇错误影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用连接成分。不能清楚的表达写作目的。2011假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bob 来信询问你的暑假计划,现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。注意：1. 至少写出你将要做的三件事。2. 回信至少不少于80 词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3. 所给英语词汇仅供参考。参考词汇： summer; grandparents;relax oneself; housework; visit; old friends andrelativesHi, Bob,The summer vacation is coming soon.After a tiring school year, I m gong to relax myself. I will spend my vacation with my grandparents. I will stay withthem for about three weeks. Of course, I am going to help them do some housework. Perhapswe will take some shorttrips. Besides, I am going to visit some of my friends andrelatives. I think we will have a happy time together. Whatsmore , I will be a senior studentin a new term , so I am going to make some preparations. How will you spendyourholiday?Best wishes.Yours, Zhang Lin2012假设你是赵铭你班来自美国的交流学生Robert 患病住院已有三周请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件主要内容包括：询问病情； 介绍班级近期活动或学习情况；表达祝愿。 注意： 1词数 80 一 100 词左右； 2可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯；3信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Robert,It s three weeks since you were ill. How are you feeling now? We all miss you very much. Recently we have had many activities. We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first prize. The matches were exciting and tough. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity! You didn t watch them. I hope you ll get well soon and come back earlier. We re busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practice a song every day in order to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and don t worry about your lessons. I ll help you with them.Best wishes.Yours ,Zhao Ming2013精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 10 页2 假设你是周浩，你遗失了你的英国籍好友Frank 借给你的一本书，请根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信表示道歉，包括以下内容： 1. 怎么遗失的； 2. 对该书的评价； 3. 如何补救； 4. 你的教训。注意：1. 词数 80 100 词左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Frank，I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week. I like the hook very much and I read it every day and plan to finish it next month. Last night when I came to my room, it wasn t found anywhere. I will get a new book for you.Old books are like old friends. Once they are lost ，they can never be replaced. I feel sorry for losing the book. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future. Best wishes.Yours truly,Zhou Mao2014良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益。要求： 1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2）内容完整，书写整齐；3）80 词左右； 4）文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。My good habitMy good habit is early to bed and early to riseTwo years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books inbedEvery day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 o clock The next day I couldn tget up on time. I used to be late for school ,and I felt tired in class It was too badWith the help of my teacherand my parents,Igave up the bad habit.Ever since then, I go to bedearly and get up early .I nevergo to school late againAs a result ,I m much stronger and doing better in school now2015假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2 条） ； 2. 你的希望。注意：1.注意文章的整体连贯；2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 80 词左右。Dear friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, we shouldDear friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant moretreesand flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste watereverywhere. As we all know, water is becoming lessand less.So it?s quite necessaryto savewater. For example, turnthe tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we?d better ride a bike or walk when going out insteadof driving a car.In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 10 页3 Thank you.Wang Dong2016初中生活中，你有些什么改变？你是怎样改变的？请以“How Ihave changed” 为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化，写作内容包括：兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面。要求： 1. 用英语写一篇短文，80 词左右。 2. 任选两方面内容。3. 语言流畅书写规范，卷面整洁。4. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名校名。How I have changedHow time flies, Three years hasquickly passed,and I have changed a lot during thesedays.On onehand, I wasnt good at learning English at first, When my English teacherlearned about that, shetaught mehow to memorize new words, and to read at many passagesis aspossible, soon I madegreat progressand becameinterested in English.On the other hand, I was too weak to do my exercise, but with the help of the teachersand classmates,I do exercisewhenever I am free, and now I can run very fast and I am also good at playing basketball like other boys.Thanks to the middle school life ,I havechanged so much !Thanks to the teachersandclassmates,I have learnedsomuch ! Never will I forget the valuable middle school life !精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 10 页4 必背范文选篇感想 / 学习篇( 一 ) 为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，中学生英语辅导报举行了一次以How to be a good learner? 为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇 80 词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。【How to be a good learner?】As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Its good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don t forget to do sports and keep healthy.I think all these above will be helpful to us.( 二 ) 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。要求： 1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟; 2.词数 80 左右。【My English Study 】How time flies! My three -year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.情感 / 生活篇( 一 ) 父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。 80 词左右，开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数 )。提示： 1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等； 2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do) ，如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。【Father s Day】Father s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 10 页5 No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father s Day. Don t you think so?( 二 ) 今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John 写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下： 1. 表述你与母亲间的情感；2. 为母亲制作一张卡片；3. 帮助母亲做点事；4. 陪母亲散步等。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear John,It s Mother s Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I m sure she ll be very happy.What s your plan for Mothers Day? I m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua( 三 ) 某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要点：1.父母规矩太多， 过于强调学习成绩， 不理解自己等问题； 2.你对这些问题的看法；3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。【 How to keep a good relationship with parents 】In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don t quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they dont allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.写人 / 记事篇( 一 ) 假设 Linda 是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍 Linda 的变化。提示： 1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发;现在个子高多了，长发。2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。3.性格：以前外向 ;现在有些内向。要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥；2.层次清晰，语言流畅；3.80词左右。【 My best friend 】Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 10 页6 to like playing ping -pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.( 二 ) 背景设定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael 给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给 Miachael 回一封电子邮件。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便.现在生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及.要求： 1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述；2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；3.词数80 词左右，开头语以给出 (不计入词数 )。 参考词汇： living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications( 通讯 )， telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policyDear Michael,You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.SincerelyKang Min( 三 ) 假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数： 60-80。【My life 】I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.I really miss my old days.风俗/ 礼仪篇( 一 ) 请根据提示以 “The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的英语短文。提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日；2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚；3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives)；4.孩子们喜欢春节。【The Spring Festival 】精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 10 页7 The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.( 二 ) 假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda 给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。提示： 1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物；2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrapping paper) ；3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚；2.80 词左右。 (信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数)Dear Linda,I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.I hope my advice can help you.Yours,Guo Jia( 三 ) 刚到中国来学习不久的John 应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此 John 向 Bob 请教相关礼仪。 假设你是Bob,请你给 John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80 词左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数 )。Dear John,I know that you will visit your Chinese teachers home. If you do the following, I dont think you will feel uncomfortable.First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, its also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.Good luck!Yours,Bob社会 / 网络篇( 一 ) 随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“ 网购 ” 成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点 1. 足不出户 ;节约时间 ;避免拥挤、劳累。2. 价格通常比较便宜。3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 10 页8 缺点 1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。注意： 1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；2.80 词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：网购shopping online; 避免做某事avoid doing sth; 商品goods; 导致 cause【Shopping online 】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.( 二 ) 现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80 词左右的短文。【 Pop songs】Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired