上海中考英语话题作文专项训练.docx

话题作文一Write at least 60 words about the topic “_left me a new impression.”（请以“_给我留下一个新印象”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你身边有熟悉的同学、朋友、老师，有一天可能因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法。请补全标题，并结合这个事例谈谈她（他）给你留下的这个新的印象。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）二Write at least 60 words on the topic "Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times"(以"在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格).小到个人，大到团队、城市、国家，都会有困难时期，但即便是困难时期，人们还是能感受生活中的小喜悦，感受幸福温馨的片刻，请结合自己或他人的经历，说说困难时期的幸福感。(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分)_三Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)法国“蜘蛛人”阿兰.罗伯特的经历告诉我们， 战胜恐惧也可以是一种勇敢。你对勇敢的理解是如何的呢？请以“The time I was brave(那次我很勇敢)” 为题，根据自身的经历谈谈你对勇敢的理解。（注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读的语篇不得分。）_四Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Life in 2050”（请以 “2050 年的生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：到2050年，我们的生活会是什么样的？请选择下图中(或自拟)1"2个方面展开描述。_五Write at least 60 words about the topic "My opinion on remote lessons" (请以"我对远程课堂的看法"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)疫情期间我们开启了一种全新的学习模式远程课堂(remote lessons)。在此期间你是如何学习的？请结合你自身经历，谈谈对远程课堂的看法。注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否则不予评分。The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)because of the virus            manage time            self-control            effective_六Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The first time I .”（以“我第一次”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）要求：1. 补全作文标题。2. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。_范文及解析一范文：The teacher left me a new impression.Once Iwas not interested in English. Thatwas Miss Wang who changed me. One day, our teacher told us we would have an English speech competition two months later. Everyone was happyexcept me, because I couldn't dare to speak English in public. My English teacher came with asmile and encouraged me. From then on, I practiced every day. The day came, I got the first prize at last. From Miss Wang, I know that if you decide to do something and put your heart into it , you will succeed. The teacher left me a new impression.1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先补全标题，并且根据汉语提示，叙述因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法，给你留下了新的印象。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时；描述故事时，力求描写细致，故事发生的背景、起因等叙述完整，保证条例清晰。二范文Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult timesEveryone may have difficult times. Even in difficult times, people can still feel the small joys in life.One day, it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school. I didnt take an umbrella, so I was wet. Suddenly, a stranger came toward me. He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home. I didnt know him but I was very thankful he helped me. Although the weather was cold, I felt very warm in my heart.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以“Happiness doesn't always disappear during difficult times在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇切题的文章。这是一个难点，学生所选取的生活中的事例应合情合理。写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时态、第一人称为主来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式结构和表达习惯，写完整的句子，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句、非谓语结构等复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。三范文：The time I was braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.            I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher's encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Don't let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先叙述自身的经历，然后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用一般现在时和现在完成时来叙述自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确，叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。四范文Life in 2050Life has changed a lot in 2050. The environment will be better and better. The air is fresher and the water is clearer. In 2050, people will no longer eat traditional food. People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full for a long time. Science and technology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of human beings. Flying machines will replace today's cars. People won't have to go to school to study. They will study at home through computers.1、题干解读：文章要求对2050年的生活的影响，因此时态应用一般将来时态；人称应以第三人称第一人称为主。2、写作指导：例文先是一句话点题；然后分开介绍了环境、食物、科技、交通和上学情况。语言流畅，无语法错误。五范文My opinion on remote lessonsBecause of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks. By communicating with teachers on the online communication platform, I can also solve the problems in the new knowledge in time. It is important for me to keep learning every day. Remote lessons can provide us with a good opportunity to learn. Remote lessons have many advantages over the traditional classes. However, remote lessons also has some disadvantages. For example, staring at the screen for a long time is very harmful to students eyes. And we students need self-control. Then we can finish learning effectively.题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求写出自己对远程课堂的影响，可以结合自身的经历谈。文章注意谈论观点看法时，需要观点明确，有自己的见解。例文点评：本文分成两顿，第一段介绍自己六个月的远程课堂经历，以及如何学习的，第二段介绍了作者认为远程课堂的优缺点。观点明确，行文流畅，句型多样。高分亮点：短语：solve the problems；for a long time；be harmful to；finish doing。句型：it作形式主语It is important for me to keep learning every day.；现在完成时应用Because of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks.六、The first time I succeeded in cookingWhen I was very young, I liked to watch my mother cook. I always found it amazing when colorful dishes appeared on the table. So I begged my mother to teach me to cook. Though I started with some simple dishes, it wasn't so easy as I had imagined. But I kept practicing. Then, one day in the holiday, I decided to make lunch without my mother's help. I tried two of the dishes I had learnt. To my surprise, I made it! At that moment I was proud of myself.1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应注意要首先补全作文题目，然后围绕题目再写作。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时，叙述清晰，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：短语：like to do；on the table；beg sb to do sth；teach sb to do sth；start with；soas；keep doing sth；decide to do sth；to ones surprise。语法：when引导的时间状语从句；并列连词so，but的运用；though引导的让步状语从句；频度副词always的运用；定语从句的运用。