Unit3写作课课件张静静.ppt

- writingUnit 3 A Healthy LifeHow to write a letter of advice1.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 2.Walk a mile after dinner, and youll live to ninety-nine. 3.Wealth is nothing without health. 4.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. 早睡早起使人健康、富有而且聪明。Some proverbs on health:Some proverbs on health: This is Xiao Lei. He haswritten a letter to me askingfor some advice. Please readthe letter and try to find out Xiao Leis problem.Task 1 Find out the problemDear Kenny, Can you help me, please? I have tried to stop smoking several times. I am OK for two days and then I feel really sick and I have to start smoking again. I know smoking is a bad habit, but I just cant seem to give it up. Do you have any useful tips? Your , Xiao Lei He tried to stop smoking but failed. So, he wanted to get some useful tips.Task 2 BrainstormingMy advice for Xiao Lei Break the habit.Prepare yourself.Get help if you need it.Be determined.Relax yourself.keep trying.Dont give up. structure What should be written Part One Part Two Part Three of writing this letter to solve the problem express . Task 1 Fill in the form. purpose advice hope Task 2 Which ones are better? 1. I want to give you some suggestions on.2. Im sorry you are having trouble in. . However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:3. You have asked me for advice on.Now Im writing to offer you some advice.I.How to begin your letter?1. Ill be very glad if you find my advice useful. Looking forward to your early reply. 2. Thats all. Thank you ! 3. I must stop here. Thank you for reading my letter.4. I do hope you can take my advice into consideration and you are sure to make it. .How to end your letter? 【 writing tips 1 】 When writing this letter, we should pay more attention to the tone (语气) of our suggestions. Try our best to make the suggestions in a polite and proper way rather than a tone of order. 1. Why not do some relaxation exercises ?2. You must make up your mind to quit smoking.3. If I were you, I would be determined to stop smoking.4. You must stop smoking while you are young.5. It would be a good idea if you make up your mind to quit smoking.6. You should ask people for some advice about how to quit smoking. .How to express your advice? What expressions can be used to give more than one tip or suggestion ?first(ly)first of allto begin withto start with13 third(ly) finally lastly last but not leastsecond(ly)besideswhats morein addition2【 writing tips 2 】 1.When giving more than one piece of advice, youd better use some linking words to make your composition more logical (有逻辑的). 2.Remember to use some examples or explain your reasons to support your idea.choose a present for your groupI think you can take a deep breath and do some relaxation exercises. As far as Im concerned, it would be better if you take a deep breath and do some relaxation exercises. (3 points)choose a present for your groupSo lucky ! Give you 2 points as a present !choose a present for your group As a middle school student, you must devote yourself to study rather than smoke. If I were you, I would devote myself to study rather than smoke. (3 points)choose a present for your group 1. Quitting smoking is tough for me. 2. I am determined to give it up. Tough as/though it is, I determined to give up smoking. (5 points)choose a present for your groupIt would be better if you take a deep breath and do some relaxation exercises. If I were you , I would devote myselfto study rather than smoke.Why not make up your mind to quit smoking when you feel like smoking ? ( 8 points )要求：小组团队合作，要求：小组团队合作， 共同写出一篇优秀的建议信。共同写出一篇优秀的建议信。【 writing tips 3 】 What makes a good essay? Is it without mistake ? (spelling, grammar) Is there any advanced vocabulary ? Is there any good sentence patterns ? Do you use any linking words ? Content: Are your ideas related to the topic and stated clearly? Do you provide good reasons for your ideas? Have you used any sentence patterns we have learned just now? Organization: Is the structure of the letter right? Have you used linking words properly? Accuracy: Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes? Others: Is your handwriting neat and easy to read?Summary The structure of a letter of adviceHow to begin our letterHow to express our adviceHow to end our letterPay attention to the way we express our adviceExplainationExplainationExplainationHomeworkHomeworkWrite your letter of advice on your sheet ( Page4 ).