2021年高考分类题库考点4 书面表达.pdf

1 考点考点 4 书面表达书面表达 一、一、 提纲作文提纲作文 （2012安徽卷） 假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。 注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数 120 左右; 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 参考词汇:文科 arts; 理科 science Good afternoon, everyone, Welcome to our school! Thanks! 【思路点拨】 1.本文写作体裁是发言稿,由于开头和结尾已经给出,不必再考虑发言稿的格式。 2.发言稿的交际对象是来校访问的外国学生,表示欢迎之后可以按照交际背景把欲说明的情况作一简短介绍。 3.发言稿的主体内容是高中生对文、 理科的选择,由于没有给出具体的选择理由,所以需要自己拟定合适的内容作为中心要点。 2 4.内容要点:自己选择理科,理由如下: 理科毕业生需求量大 可以实现儿时做科学家的梦想 父母认为学习理科前途光明 物理老师是学习榜样。 5.需要的词汇和短语: 面对:be faced with 做选择:make a choice 需求量大:in great demand 实现的理想:achieve the dream of. 前 途 光 明 :have a bright future 某人的学习榜样:ones role model 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone, Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows: First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision. 3 It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice. Thanks! （2012湖南卷） Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。 主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想。 注意:1.词数不少于 120 个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【思路点拨】 (1)由题目要求可知本文主要内容是对物品失而复得经过的回忆,故本部分应用一般过去时,而就本经历的感想部分应该使用一般现在时。 (2)本文的内容主要包括三个部分: 1)丢失的物品; 2)物品失而复得的经过; 3)你的感想。 在写作时,应注意这三部分内容的关系,主要集中在物品失而复得的经过及感想部分。 (3)内容要点: 1.丢失/不见:be lost/ missing 2.张贴通知:put up notices 3.奖励、奖赏:reward 4.做好事:do good deeds 【参考范文】 4 I have a precious pen, which was given to me as a birthday present by one of my best friends. I like it very much, however, this pen once has an unusual experience. When I was a student of Grade Two, I lost my precious pen because of carelessness when our school was holding a sports meeting. I almost felt crazy when I realized that it was missing. I searched the playground carefully and even the road leading to my home. I put up several notices with its titleMy Precious Pen Lost, in which I promised to pay the one who gives the pen back to me 100 yuan. Several days later, I heard my name called by someone. It was a girl with a pen in her hand. I felt excited to see my precious pen back. I thanked this kind girl again and again, who didnt accept the money I gave her as a reward. From the unusual experience of my precious pen, I learn that we should be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others. （2012江西卷） 某英文报社举办以 “I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文: 1.你为什么喜欢读书; 2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、 科学、 文学等)?请给出至少两个理由。 注意:词数 120 左右。 5 【参考范文】 I Like Reading Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading. There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isnt it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? （2012辽宁卷） 假定你是某中学的学生李华。 请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括: 优点:1.话题广泛; 2.图片丰富; 3.有助于提高学习兴趣。 建议:适当降低词汇难度。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。 6 One Possible Version Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Whats more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 (1)本文是一篇提纲式作文,该书面表达为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作。写好此文,需注意以下几点: 一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态。 二是要点要齐全,且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在对于教材优点的介绍上面。 7 三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅。 (2)通过审题,归纳出本文内容要点如下:肯定现行教材;赞赏教材的三点优点;一点建议。这三点为基本点,缺一不可。 (3)内容要点: 话题广泛(a variety of topics) 受欢迎(be popular with) 过去常常(used to do) 建议做某事(suggest doing sth. ) （2012全国卷 I） 假定你是李华,从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam, 8 Regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 (1)本题是一封电子邮件,要用第一人称写。由于文章内容是申请参加一个夏令营,需进行自我介绍,说明参加意图,因此,本文应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 (2)本文要包含以下要点:自我介绍 参加意图 希望获准。最后,写上期待对方答复。 9 (3)内容要点: 参加(take part in/participate in) 讲流利的英语(speak fluent English/speak English fluently) 被接受为(be accepted as) 期待答复(looking forward to your reply) （2012全国卷） 假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加,要点包括: 1.时间:周五晚 8 点至 9 点 2.地点:学生俱乐部 3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4.要求:备小礼物 注意: 1.词数 100 左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。 Hi Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. 【思路点拨】写信是近几年最常见的写作文体,它可以有效地考查考10 生用英语表达自己的能力,增强考试的信度和区分度;提纲式作文让考生有话可说。 【注意事项】 1.书信的格式; 2.表述的逻辑性和连贯性; 3.内容的全面性; 4.使用地道的英语。 【参考范文】 Hi Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And its going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, well light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too. Yours, Li Hua （2012山东卷） 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学11 习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文: 1.参加英语角的益处; 2.坚持写英语日记的作用; 3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。 注意:1.词数:120-150; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【思路点拨】 1.本文要求以李华的名义写一篇文章来介绍一下课外学习英语的经验,所以文章的题材应属于介绍经验类文章。时态应以一般现在时为主。 2.写作时应列举出参加的三个主要活动及益处,保证要点全面,并尽量使用所积累的高级词汇,如 participate in, take part in, manage to do, in addition, whats more 等。 3.注意文章结构的合理及层次的清晰,不是简单罗列汉语部分的信息,而应做到层次清晰并有一定的逻辑性,并可适当扩充,使文章内容更丰富。 4.要应用常用句型,如定语从句及强调句等。 【参考范文】 My name is Li Hua. I feel honoured to have the chance to share my 12 out-of-class English learning experience with you. First of all, I often participate in English Corner, where I can talk and communicate with students and foreign teachers. Not only can I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western countries. Secondly, I insist on keeping a diary, which can improve my ability of expressing myself in English and help me to put what Ive learnt to use. In addition, I often surf the Internet and browse Enjoy Reading, which enlarges my vocabulary and helps to improve my reading speed and my reading comprehension ability. Furthermore, it opens a window for me to see the world. Its because of this and my effort in class that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school. I hope my experience will be of some help to you and I also wish for your advice. （2012四川卷） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师 Ms Li 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。 1.对英语学习的认识; 2.自己目前的英语水平; 3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题; 4.对英语教学的两点建议。 13 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.信的开头和结尾已给出。 Dear Ms Li, Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. Thank you! Li Hua 【思路点拨】 1.审题: 文体:应用文书信 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称 2.要点: (1)对英语学习的认识 (2)自己目前的英语水平 (3)自己英语学习中存在的主要问题 (4)对英语教学的两点建议 3.参考词汇和句式: (1) play an important role/part in (2) Its necessary for.to do 14 (3) Its difficult/hard for.to (4) make great progress 【参考范文】 Dear Ms Li, Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you! Li Hua (2012天津卷) 假设你是李津,你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国际学校。他热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。8 月 5 日下午 2:00 在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台 。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris 写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。 提出邀请并简述原因; 15 提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等); 请求对方回复。 注意: 1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于 100; 2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 越剧 Shaoxing Opera 梁山伯与祝英台Butterfly Lovers 天津大剧院 Tianjin Grand Theater Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. Yours, Li Jin 【思路点拨】 (1)本题是一封电子邮件,所以用第一人称。由于是计划去看越剧,观剧后还有一些活动,因此以一般将来时为主,同时结合一般现在时。 (2)要包含提示要点介绍越剧上演的时间和地点提出邀请,简述原因观剧后的活动建议请求对方回复。 16 (3)内容要点: 邀请你去(invite you to.) 上演(put on) 喜欢(be fond of/have an appetite for) 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. Id like to invite you to see Butterfly Lovers, a famous Chinese Shaoxing Opera, which is to be put on at the newly built Tianjin Grand Theater at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. As you know, as your close friend, I know you are fond of Chinese culture, especially opera culture. Of course, besides going to the theater, we can do some other meaningful things, such as visiting the museum or the art gallery nearby, which both contain a lot of items of great value. Im sure that we will have a good time. Im looking forward to receiving your reply. Best wishes. Yours, Li Jin 二、图画作文二、图画作文/漫画作文漫画作文 （2012北京卷） 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好17 事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。 注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于 60。 Saturday, June 2 Fine This morning, 【思路点拨】 (1)本题通过四幅图介绍了李华在路上做的好事。 文章要求用日记的形式叙述,因此应写成以过去时态为主的记叙文。 (2)四幅图主要是讲述了李华偶遇路人并向路人提供帮助的事情,是生活中熟悉的话题。写作时,应把时间、地点、人物、事件及过程写得具体而详实,最后应对此事谈一下自己的感受。 (3)内容要点 发现路人(see two travelers) 询问情况(ask what happened) 18 告诉路线(tell how) 挥手告别(wave goodbye to ) 【参考范文】 One possible version: Saturday, June 2 Fine This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction. （2012福建卷） 假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容要求: 1.描述漫画内容; 2.发表个人感想。 19 注意: 1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数 120 左右； 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:告示牌 sign Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. 【思路点拨】 1.首先对漫画进行语言描述。 一男一女在湖中划船,岸上木牌明确写道:湖中勿丢垃圾!但两人一边感叹“啊,多美的景色!”一边随意乱丢垃圾。因此可用第一人称的视角,用记叙文的形式来写。 2.第二段可对这种行为发表个人看法。 环境需要大家共同维护,只有人人把保护环境作为己任,我们才能有更美好的生活。 20 【参考范文】 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. (2012陕西卷) 假定你是李华。 下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动,请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。 21 写作要点:1.活动的策划； 2.教室的布置； 3.活动的内容； 4.你的感想。 注意:1.短文词数不少于 100； 2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数； 3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当； 4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. 【思路点拨】 (1)本文要求根据一幅画和写作要点提示描述教师节那天你们班为英语老师组织的一次庆祝活动。 22 (2)审题:属于半开放性的记叙文；时态主要是一般过去时；人称:第一人称。 (3)内容要点: 活动策划:As Teachers Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate. 教室的布置:decorate our classroom with. 活动内容:stand in line, clap hands and say loudly “Happy Teachers Day!”; present her with the prepared flowers; sing songs 感想:cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance 【参考范文】 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. As Teachers Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10, some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers Day!” Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. 23 Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their kung fu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li. Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. （2012上海卷） Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩 Amy 所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括: 对两堂绘画课的具体描述； 你从中获得的启发。 【思路点拨】 首先,本文属于图片作文,提供的图片有两张,提高了对于描写的要求。高考英语作文已经不再仅仅考查学生的议论能力,它有些借鉴中文作文,要求学生夹叙夹议。在叙述中,如果只是平铺直叙那显然得24 不到高分。描写的关键在于捕捉事物的特征,而高考作文往往要求学生在短短几句话中描写到位。 其次,图片的含义并不是显而易见的,需要看出每张图背后的意义并将两张图