中考英语总复习课件：写作复习.pptx

大乘中学：王珍大乘中学：王珍分值高分值高（15 15分）分）难度大难度大要求要求：语言流畅，语法正确，：语言流畅，语法正确， 逻辑合理，能达到交际目的逻辑合理，能达到交际目的 主要考查学生主要考查学生语言基础知识、语言基础知识、语言组织能力语言组织能力及及书写能力书写能力中考英语中考英语书面表达书面表达提示作文提示作文表格提示表格提示(chart)图片提示图片提示(pictures)汉语提示汉语提示英语提示英语提示根据所给要求、提示写一篇短文根据所给要求、提示写一篇短文（日记、书信、通知等）（日记、书信、通知等）词数约词数约80100字字考试要求考试要求据实描述据实描述+适当发挥适当发挥据实描述即据实描述即提示、要求提示、要求适当发挥即适当发挥即细节、观点细节、观点近年中考书面表达近年中考书面表达写作特点写作特点夹叙夹议夹叙夹议 BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句（细节、例子、数据或引文）（细节、例子、数据或引文） topic sentence 主题句主题句开门见山，开门见山，紧扣主题紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应首尾呼应总总分分总总1.1. Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )u Style (体裁体裁）u Person（人称人称）u Tense（时态时态）2.2. An outline drawingu List key points(列要点列要点)u Arrange and Add (布局加首尾布局加首尾) 1. .春节是中国最重要的传统春节是中国最重要的传统节日节日; 2。春节期间人们的主要活动。春节期间人们的主要活动根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 List key points List key points列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！有漏点，扣分最多！ List key points1.Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China. 2. Days before the festival, people clean their houses. 3. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. How are you? Im really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. It usually lasts for 15 days. （the beginning） Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. It usually lasts for 15 days. . (the key points) How happy we are. （the ending）加加(add)3.3. Sentence Making and Beautifying word word phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying内容和语言表达内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点内容全面，表达有新意或亮点 There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. A few people work. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.(the ending) There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. 美美(beautify)方法一方法一: :善用意义相近的善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调高级词汇，避免行文单调Which is better?1.1.我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2. 2.我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3.3.我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.方法二方法二 : : 活用多种句型活用多种句型, ,避避免重复和呆板免重复和呆板, ,增加文采增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求以正确、通顺为最基本要求方法三方法三: : 妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 8.All roads lead to Rome. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子4.4. Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）连连(connect) How are you? that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. 方法四方法四: :妙用关联词，使行文连妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。1.表示并列表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示递进表示递进: besides, whats more 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, since, for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示条件表示条件: if, unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next, later, since then, from then on9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, in a word, generally speaking, 4.4. CheckinguSpelling(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammar (语法语法)uHandwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号标点符号)5.5. Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁书写规范，卷面整洁誊改连列审书面表达认真审题，勾画出要点并认真审题，勾画出要点并适当分析适当分析.据据文章要点及中心思想文章要点及中心思想，列出主要句型、关键词，列出主要句型、关键词，加上加上首尾，首尾，形成提纲。形成提纲。根据写作提纲和要点，根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤按步骤写出写出每一部分每一部分的具体内容，用的具体内容，用关联词关联词把文章各部分把文章各部分连连起来成文。起来成文。 认真誊写，认真誊写，书写规范书写规范，注意，注意卷面卷面整洁整洁How can we write a good composition？ 巧用关联词巧用关联词美美善用高级词善用高级词汇汇活用多种句型活用多种句型妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 1.记记。系统地熟读和背诵。系统地熟读和背诵课文课文中关于话题的一些句中关于话题的一些句子、句型和短文子、句型和短文,积累写作素材积累写作素材。大量的大量的背诵和阅读背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的是提高写作能力的有效办法有效办法。复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 2. 练。练。对考纲上和课本中列出的所有对考纲上和课本中列出的所有话题话题逐一逐一进行归纳训练。进行归纳训练。对热点话题进行针对性的练习。对热点话题进行针对性的练习。复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 3. 写。写。有计划地进行限时训练，提高有计划地进行限时训练，提高应试能力。应试能力。要求在要求在20分钟内写出分钟内写出100个词的短文，个词的短文，并且并且质量高、内容全、形式正确质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。