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examineKey pointsinto sentencesinto paragraphscheckcopy 假如你是张华，假如你是张华， 住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔友友Bob Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封emailemail。EmailEmail须包括下表中的内容：须包括下表中的内容：Person:first personStyle: emailTense：present tense自然情况自然情况位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住成就成就经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等道路等存在问恶存在问恶水、空气污染水、空气污染交通拥挤交通拥挤对哈尔滨发展的看法对哈尔滨发展的看法内容由考生自定内容由考生自定注意：词数注意：词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：经济参考词汇：经济economyThe styleMain personMain tenseThink about 假如你是张华，假如你是张华， 住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔友友Bob Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封emailemail。EmailEmail须包括下表中的内容：须包括下表中的内容：自然情况自然情况位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住成就成就经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等道路等存在问恶存在问恶水、空气污染水、空气污染交通拥挤交通拥挤对哈尔滨发展的看法对哈尔滨发展的看法内容由考生自定内容由考生自定注意：词数注意：词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：经济参考词汇：经济economyBe located/stand;scenery;pleasant to liveDevelop rapidly;buildPollute ;traffic;heavyIn my opinion/As far as Im concerned 1.位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住Be located/stand;scenery;pleasant to live2.经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等Develop rapidly;buildIt is located/stands on the Songhua River.The scenery of the city is beautiful.It is pleasant to live in.Its economy develops rapidly.Many factories,houses and roads have been built. 3.3.水、空气污染水、空气污染 交通拥挤交通拥挤Pollute ;traffic;heavy4.4.对哈尔滨发展的看法对哈尔滨发展的看法 In my opinion,/As far as Im concerned,Water and air are polluted.The traffic is heavy in rush hours.Your plan your hope your advice It is located/stands on the Songhua River. The scenery of the city is beautiful. It is pleasant to live in. Its economy develops rapidly. Many factories, houses and roads have been built. Water and air are polluted. The traffic is heavy in rush hours. In my opinion,/As far as Im concerned,Combine the sentences using good sentence structuresAdd some information or transitional words to make a good passage Combine the sentences Combine the sentences using good sentence structures using good sentence structures书面表达书面表达评分标准评分标准“最高档最高档”要求要求应用了应用了较多的语法结构或词汇较多的语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑使全文结构紧凑 独立主格和分词结构 倒装句 强调句 各种从句独立主格和分词结构 Combine the sentences Combine the sentences using good sentence structures using good sentence structures一去一去二看二看三改三改连词连词主语是否一致主语是否一致谓语动词谓语动词非谓语动词非谓语动词When he was walking on the street ,he met Mary.If weather permits , we will go camping tomorrow.Walking on the streetWeather permitting状语从句变独立主格或分词状语从句变独立主格或分词 Because I am a student, Id like to know the price for students. If such is the case , you should apologize to her.Being a studentSuch being the casepractice常用倒装句常用倒装句1.否定词位于句首：否定词位于句首：我们不会放弃我们不会放弃2.Only2.Only短语或从句位于句首：短语或从句位于句首：只有通过锻炼我们才能保持健康只有通过锻炼我们才能保持健康只有努力学习你才能通过考试只有努力学习你才能通过考试Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.Only if you study hard will you pass the exam.天空中繁星点点。天空中繁星点点。In the sky hang little stars.Never will we give up .3.3.地点状语开头：地点状语开头：1.强调谓语动词强调谓语动词：可能的话，希望你能来。2.强调句式强调句式： 就是这个年轻人帮助了老奶奶。 他直到昨天才来这的。 强调句强调句I do hope you can come if possible.It was this young boy who(that) helped the old granny.It was not until yesterday that he came here.主主宾宾表表同同各种从句各种从句定语从句定语从句状语从句状语从句名词性从句名词性从句It is located on the Songhua River with beautiful scenery so that it is pleasant to live in.1. It is located/stands on the Songhua River. The scenery of the city is beautiful. It is pleasant to live in.Located/standing on the Songhua River, the city is pleasant to live in, whose scenery is so beautiful.On the Songhua River stands the city,which is pleasant to live in with beautiful scenery.2. Its economy develops rapidly.Many factories,houses and roads have been built. (With)Its economy developing rapidly, many factories, houses and roads have been built. So rapidly does its economy develop thatmany factories, houses and roads have been built in the past few years.Due to the fact that its economy develops rapidly, many factories,houses and roads have been built. 3. Water and air are polluted. The traffic is heavy in rush hoursWater and air are so badly polluted and meanwhile traffic is heavy in rush hours.Water and air are badly polluted andtraffic is heavy in rush hours ,which lead to serious environmental problems. So badly are water and air polluted and so heavy is traffic that people suffer a lot.4. In my opinion,/As far as Imconcerned, (对哈尔滨发展的看法对哈尔滨发展的看法)time.logical relationshionDevelop the passagein order of Ten days after that/ Several days ago, Then, LaterTo begin with , Besides / Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ Whats worse/ Even worse/ Worse still/ To make matters worse /As a result/ Therefore Develop the passage by adding some Develop the passage by adding some information or transitional words . information or transitional words . Please refer to the studentspage恰当的过渡词恰当的过渡词Proper transitional words Dear Bob, Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Idlike to tell you something about my hometownHarbin. The city stands on the bank of Songhua River. It isa beautiful place to live and its economy has beendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years. Newfactories, houses and roads have been built. Moreschools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic in rushhours. In my opinion, Harbin should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also think that thegrowth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in life. 98 wordsRewrite the passage It is located/stands on the Songhua River. The scenery of the city is beautiful. It is pleasant to live in. Its economy develops rapidly. Many factories, houses and roads have been built. Water and air are polluted. The traffic is heavy in rush hours. In my opinion,/As far as Im concerned,抄抄查查连连扩扩抓抓审审书面表达Rome is not built in one day .Practice makes perfect.SummarySummary