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2014文都考研何凯文作文预料班讲义2014文都考研何凯文作文预料班讲义目 录第一部分 考研英语大作文话题类型与写作 . 2 第二部分 考研英语小作文分类讲解 . 17 2014 考研英语作文预料班辅导讲义 1 2014 考研英语作文预料班辅导讲义 预料考试内容是一个考试辅导老师应尽的职责和义务，对于考试内容的把握其实就是这个老师对于考 试命题思路的理解，更是责任心的体现。我们不把全部的渴望都寄予在预料上，因为我们始终都在努力， 但是我们必需预料。多年以来，我的预料也得到了事实的检验。这份讲义从敲下第一个字起先到最终的完 结，整整花了一个月的时间，每天关注各种热点，在书桌旁，在站台上，在候机厅，在列车上，在机舱内 写下这份尽可能详实却负担不重的讲义，为了给大家更多选择，更多欢乐，有时同一个含义给了近十种表 达，在这份讲义中所提和的内容几乎涵盖了全部的可能话题。只要大家能细致背诵，稍加灵敏的运用就一 定能帮到大家。所以失败只有两种：不背和背错！ 只要努力了就确定会成功！ 当这个时代被打上喧嚣，焦虑，彷徨，迷茫，迟疑，徘徊的烙印时，考研人群注定只能和孤独为伍， 与坚持为伴；我们也想去狂欢，想去放纵，想去矫情，想去放弃但是我们走到了今日，我们甚至不敢相 信我们真的已经走到了复习的终点；我们不情愿信任十几天后我们将不会再回到熟悉的自习室，在安静地 复习了一天后和小伙伴们一起披星戴月，拖着乏累的身体但却无比充溢地回到宿舍，那碗泡面的味道会承 载着这段时间，留存在我们的脑海里。 我们会记得“说话，是不是”，你会记得“I have a dream”,会记得因为A 所以B,选A 不选B，汤老师 精辟的思路讲解，还有那时常冒出的奇异的英文；你会记起蒋老师精彩的时政解读。但不远的将来这些都 将变成并不清晰的痕迹，但是正是这岁月留下的痕迹，会在你不经意地回眸中带给你最奇异的回忆，不是 去追忆一个人，一件事，而是那些属于青春的记忆碎片。在这些碎片中我们收获的志气和感动将伴我们一 路向前！ 所以，考研这场战斗到了现在，不用害怕，不用惊惶，曼德拉曾经说过这样的一句话：It always seems impossible until its done. 很多事情在它被完成之前,看上去都是不行能完成的。而且，我们只是在兑现对自 己青春的承诺。虽然2013 年是青春泛滥的一年，但是当“致我们终将逝去的青春”，“中国合伙人”，甚至 “小时代”把那样的青春呈现在我们面前的时候我们照旧会被感动，因为我们有一样的过往，能感动我们 的是那份坚持，与时空无关。 KK 想和作为准探讨生的你们共享两种始终我虽不能至，却心向往之的情怀： 1.为天地立心, 为生民立命, 为往圣继绝学, 为万世开太平。 As Zhang Hengqu noted, “To ordain conscience for Heaven and Earth；To secure life and fortune for the people；To continue lost teachings for past sages；To establish peace for all future generations”. 2. “有两种东西，我对它们的思索越是深厚和许久，它们在我心灵中唤起的惊异和敬畏就会日新月异， 不断增长，这就是我头上的星空和心中的道德定律。” As Kant said, “Two things fill me with constantly increasing admiration and awe, the longer and more earnestly I reflect on them: the starry heavens without and the moral law within.(Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the more often and steadily reflection is occupied with them: the starry heaven above me and the moral law within me.”) 我会陪着你们走到最终，不离不弃！ 祝福大家2014 考研成功！ 何凯文 2014 考研英语作文预料班辅导讲义 2 父母和孩子之间缺乏沟通 (1992 年考题类型“无形社会问题”） 电视广告 (1993 年考题类型“有形社会问题”) 挚友的结交 (1994 年考题类型“无形社会问题”） 渴望工程 (1995 年考题类型“有形社会话题”) 健康问题 (1996 年考题类型“有形社会问题”） 世界性的吸烟问题 (1997 年考题类型“有形社会问题”) 广告不必要的承诺 (1998 年考题类型“有形社会问题”） 生态失衡 (1999 年考题类型“有形社会问题”) 商业捕鱼 (2000 年考题类型“有形社会问题”） 奉献爱心 (2001 年考题类型“无形社会话题”） 文化沟通 (2002 年考题类型“无形社会话题”） 温室里的花朵经不起风吹雨打 (2003 年考题类型“人生哲理”） 终点又是新起点 (2004 年考题类型“人生哲理”) 养老足球赛 (2005 年考题类型“无形社会问题”） 青少年盲目崇拜 (2006 年考题类型“有形社会问题”) 自信 (2007 年考题类型“人生哲理”) 合作 (2008 年考题类型“人生哲理”） 网络的“远”与“近” (2009 年考题类型“社会现象”) 文化“火锅”，既美味又养分 (2010 年考题类型“社会现象”) 旅游之余 (2011 年考题类型“有形社会问题”） 乐观和悲观 (2012 年考题类型“人生哲理”） 选择 （2013 年英语一考题类型“人生哲理） 手机订阅人数变更 (2010 年英语二考题类型“有形社会话题”） 国内轿车市场份额变更 (2011 年英语二考题类型“有形社会话题”） 员工满意度调查 (2012 年英语二考题类型“有形社会问题” 高校生兼职 2013 年英语二考题类型“有形社会话题） 第一段写作方略： 第一句：图画描述句 第二句：图画影响句 1. This picture generates a great concern among the public. 这幅图画引起了公众的极大关切。 2. This picture invokes the general public's interests. 这幅图画引起了公众的爱好。 3. This picture has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo, the most influential social media in china. 这幅图画在微博上引起了热忱的探讨。（中国最有影响力的社交媒体） 4. This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the We Chat, the most influential social network, these days. 最近，这幅图画在微信上引起了热忱的探讨。（中国最有影响力的社交网络）5. This picture captures the online community's great attention and abundant imagination. 这幅图画引起了网络群体的关注和想象。 6. People were drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture. 第一部分 考研英语大作文话题类型与写作方略 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 3 人们被这幅图画所揭示的事实所吸引。 第三句：图画意义句 1. Simple as the picture is, the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than what we may sense at the first glance. 虽然图画很简洁，但是作者却在传递着比我们第一眼看到的要困难很多，深刻很多的意义 2. This simple picture touches a deep cord of the complex social fabric. 这幅简洁的图画深深触和了困难社会结构的一环。 3. The drawing truly displays a status quo that is worthy of our attention. 这幅图画的确呈现了值得我们关注的现状。 4. We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture. 对于图画所呈现的问题我们无法忽视。 5. It is tempting to accept the picture by its simple appearance, but to neglect the profound implication that its author tries to convey. 读这幅图易望文生义，忽视其深刻主旨。 第一种类型：当下所面对的“无形社会问题”的写作步骤： 负面的绽开： 适用于不好的社会问题，社会责任，传统美德，品质的缺失 可能用到的主题词： 1.爱国主义（Patriotism） 2.努力工作（hardworking） 3.勤俭（plain living）, 4.信任科学（belief in science）, 5.为人民服务的意识（consciousness of serving the people）, 6.团结互助(solidarity and helping each other), 7.恳切守信（honesty，credibility and being trustworthy）, 8.遵纪遵遵守法律律（ observation of the law） 9.中华传统美德（traditional Chinese values） 勤 hardworking 俭Thrift 信 honesty, ,孝 filial piety/ filial duty/filial respect 礼courtesy, 忠loyalty, 仁 benevolence , humanity and humaneness 爱 affection 10. 现代美德（modern virtues） 志愿者精神（volunteer spirit） 契约精神（spirit of contact, observation of the law, abiding faith of the law） 第二段的绽开： 第一句： The picture does reveal that lack of credibility is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal life ,but to the further development of the whole society. 第二句： In no country other than China, it has been said, is this problem more urgent and serious. 或者： The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost. 或者： The past three decades have witnessed our overwhelmingly excessive emphasis on material benefits and unawareness of the importance of credibility which have been increasingly becoming indispensable to the health 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 4 of economy, the stability of polity and the pursuit of happiness. 过去的三十年中，我们过分的强调物质利益，忽视了诚信的重要性，而诚信对于健康的经济，稳定的 社会和对于华蜜的追求而言都是必不行少的。 第三句 More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of dishonesty when undergoing the dramatic social transformation. 更具体的讲，在阅历猛烈的社会转型的过程中，个人，企业，组织甚至是整个社会都没有能留意到诚 信缺失带来的危害。 或者 这种品质对于这个国家的发展而言是重要的因素，它的缺失会不行避开的给我们造成危害。 1. 或者 毫无疑问，这种宏大的品质铸就了这个社会的支撑结构，假如这种宝贵的财宝以任何一种方式被忽视， 我们的社会都无法稳定发展。 第四句和最终一句 It is not hard to notice that without honesty/credibility, hardly can individuals or organizations make money, take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world, I argue. That will be a sorry state of affairs. 我认为，不难发觉，要是没有诚信,在这样一个竞争激烈的现代社会中，从长期来看个人和组织是很难 赚到钱，赚到利润的，更不必说获得财宝了。那将是一个缺憾的局面。 或者： 第四句和最终一句 No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that the commitment to national and individual prosperity requires a prevailing and flourishing trend of this driving force. Put it another way, were there no credibility, we would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run. 任何一个有识之士都会承认，假如要致力于国家富强和个人华蜜，就须要诚信这种驱动力形成流行和 旺盛之势。换句话讲，假如没有诚信，我们就不行能真正体会到真正的华蜜和成功。这种品质是社会发展 的基础,是我们不行能缺失的。 或者 Honesty and integrity, any perceptive observer would never hesitate to admit that, if become a general feature of the society, would contribute to both the well-being of individuals and a nation as a whole. 任何一个有识之士都会承认，假如诚信成为这个世界的总体特征，那么将不仅对个人利益有扶植而且 对整个国家也有好处。换句话讲促进人类社会往正确方向前进的力气，真诚的缺失会导致前进的列车出轨， 会使得这个世界陷入一篇无望的荒芜之中。 1. 2. 3. Put another way, as a force propelling the human society forward in a virtuous direction, the absence of the it will even cause the train of progress run off track, leaving the world in a wilderness of desperation. 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 5 第三段：（超级无敌结束段） Confronting with such an intimidating reality, we are expected to enhance the sharp awareness of consequently damaging effects of ignoring honesty. It is imperative that this negative/unfavorable/evil trend, constituting a permanent menace to harmonious society construction, be harnessed and curbed by the corresponding laws and regulations. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost. (72 字) 面对如此可怕的现实，我们应当醒悟的相识到因为忽视诚信而带来的严峻后果。对于不断危害到和谐 社会建设的这样一种负面潮流，我们应当用相应的法律和法规对其加以限制和限制。只有在一个理性的， 旺盛的，和健康的环境下我们才能见证一个志向的场景：人民能最大程度地享受他们的生活。 道德问题解决的第三段表达： The importance of such an apparent crisis in morality reflected by the drawing has been realized by the public and the government. This is a promising start. We have been under growing pressure to establish a social credit system nation wide in a bid to create an honest and faithful society. Adding to the effort mentioned above are other solutions, such as developing public service, promoting voluntary service and the like. With those accomplishments, peoples sense of responsibility and the willingness to be candid and charitable will definitely be restored, I firmly believe. 正面的绽开： 为评价一种好的社会现象。 文化融合（Cultural integration） 社会公德（public morals） 第二段的绽开： 第一句： The picture tells us that volunteer spirit is and remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing modern society. 这幅图画告知我们在如此快速发展的现代社会中，志愿者精神将始终是不行或缺的部分。 第二句： 1.It is the modern virtues that spark and fuel the sustained social progress and continuous betterment of culture when we are undergoing the ever most rapid economic growth. Volunteer spirit emerges as the most thriving one among them. 当我们在阅历着最快的经济增长的时候，正是一些现代社会的美德，引发和促进了持续的社会进步和 不断的文化发展而志愿者精神正是其中最醒目的。 或者 2.这一人类品质是这个国家社会发展的重要部分，这种品质的缺失会给我们造成巨大的损失。 或者 3 这一宏大的品质铸就了我们社会的支撑结构，假如这种宝贵的品质以任何一种可能的方式被忽视， 我们的社会都不能稳定发展。 或者 4. 这一品质是促进我们社会发展的和提升我们整体生活水平的中坚力气。假如没有这一力气，我们进 步的列车有可能会停止，甚至会出轨，使我们陷于一片无望的荒芜中。 或者 54. . Decades of nonstop economic development in China have led some people to worry about moral degradation in the newly rich society. However a set of virtue codes have steadfastly held the ground, bringing about ever responsible citizens of the society and nurturing the growth of culture at the same time. Volunteer spirit is surely one of the most prominent. 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 6 几十年不停滞的经济发展使得一些人很担忧在当下旺盛社会中的道德缺失。但是一系列的道德规范稳 住了局面，为这个社会塑造了有责任的公民，同时还培育了文化的增长。而志愿者精神就是其中最显著的。 第三句 People in the need can obtain financial aids, material support, mental comfort or spiritual back from volunteers work. 有须要的人能从志愿者的工作中获得经济上的扶植，物质上的支持，精神上的抚慰和精神 第四句 1.With the influence of this spirit, people who have benefited from others good deeds will treat others with love, sincerity, sympathy, enthusiasm, hospitality or generosity. 在这种精神的感召下，那些从善行中受益的人将会用爱，用真诚，用怜悯用热忱好客和慷慨来对待其 他人。 或者 2.Being the beneficiary of a kind of volunteering deeds inspires us to act that way toward a third person and provides a huge boost to the sound evolution of a nation. 受益于这种志愿者的行为，会使我们用这样的方法对待第三个人，这样就为国家的健康发展供应了巨 大的促进。 最终一句 1.In other words, were there no volunteer spirit, we would never taste the civilization of the modern society. 或者： 2. Simply put, it inspires and boosts the sound evolution of our nation. 简洁讲，这种力气激发并促进了我们国家的健康发展。 第三段的绽开： 超级无敌结尾段： 版本一： Any thinking man would admit that our ardent love for life will further guarantee the prosperity of this life-affirming force which will usher a completely new horizon for the great renewal of our nation. In view of the importance of such a positive phenomenon, we must, doubtless, establish a coordinated mechanism to ensure its everlasting rewarding effects on our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，（I argue.）(90 字) 任何一位有识之士都会承认，我们对于生活的深深的酷爱，将会进一步确保这种生命正能量的旺盛， 这种力气将会为我们民族的复兴开创一个全新的局面。正是考虑到这种正面现象的重要性，毫无疑问，我 们将确立一个协调的机制来确保其作用于我们社会的许久的回报效果。只有在一个理性的，旺盛的和健康 的环境中，我们才有可能见证到一个志向的场景，人们能最大化的享受他们的生活. 版本二： 第一句： To make the world a better place, the positive momentum of this kind shall be made known and followed by people in every profession and in every corner. 为了让这个世界变成更好的地方，这种正能量应当被这个社会每个行业，每个角落的人所知晓和遵守。 第二句： It would not be a stretch to say that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this becomes a common practice that happens daily. 不夸张的讲，假如这样的善行能成为每天都发生的行为，那么这个世界将变成一个有爱的大家庭。 第三句： And once it takes root in the heart of every member of this society, the fruit will be the dazzling light that dispels darkness and creates harmony. 一旦这种品质在每个社会成员的心中扎根，产生的果实将会是炫目的明灯，去除黑暗，创建和谐。 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 7 幻想和目标的第三段： Taking this topic a step further, a nation must as well draw strength from a higher goal that all of its members share so that it can grow steadfastly and stably both in economic and in cultural terms. Above all, individuals and organizations alike all need a star, a goal, or better put a dream to navigate us in the great voyage of life. 传统文化： 第二段 第一句： The picture does demonstrate that, traditional Chinese festivals, the invaluable cultural heritage embodying our shared belief, spirit and history, have been increasingly neglected by us. 正如上图所示，体现了我们共同的信念, 精神和历史的中国传统节日我们无价的文化遗产，正逐 渐被我们所忽视。 第二句： It is mournful that such time-honored holidays are playing an ever insignificant role in our lives and gradually declining to the background, 这种历史沉淀的传统竟然渐渐淡化，在我们的生活中扮演越来越不重要的角色，实在令人感伤。 第三句： Because if they finally become just dead symbols or abstract concepts to be found in dusted books, we would be in danger of lost our uniqueness as a people who persist into this day with records of continued civilization and become just another state wholly consumed by the prevailing pop culture. 因为假如它们最终只是成为无生命的符号或尘封在书本中的抽象概念的话，我们就会失去作为一个文 明始终未中断的民族的独特性，和世界上很多其它国家一样，仅仅成为一个拥有流行文化的地方。 或者 Traditions like them are powerful cohesive forces that bond us together, giving us clues of our ancestors struggles and achievements and infusing sense of pride into us as the direct lineage of great heroes. 它们这样的传统是联系我们的强大凝合力，它们留有祖先奋斗的痕迹和成就，让我们高傲，告知自己， 我们是英雄的传人。 第三段： 版本一 第一句： Since human civilization evolves by building on the past and probing into the future, the first crucial step for a society aiming at further growth is to preserve the existing traditions and cultures. 人类文明以基于过去, 展望将来的方式不断发展，因此对于一个有志于进步的社会来说，爱惜好现存 的传统和文化是重要的第一步。 或者 As so often, the past holds the key to the future，the existing traditions and cultures have to be preserved to answer the possible questions to come. 因为过去总是拥有关于将来的答案，所以传统和文化必需爱惜以回答将来的问题。 第二句： Fortunately, we have noticed that a series of courses on traditional Chinese culture have been introduced to the high school classrooms and Confucius Institutions have been established in many countries. This is a good start. 幸运的是我们已经留意到，一系列传统中国文化的课程被引入了中学课堂；孔子学院在很多国家建立。 这是一个好的起先。 版本二 第一句： Therefore, it is crucial that resources and efforts be devoted to promote these traditions. 2014 考研作文预料班辅导讲义 8 因而，尽人力和物力来提升这些传统是特殊重要的。 第二句： Much can be done. Government agencies, NGOs and the common sector join hands together by