浙江省绍兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05 作文.docx

浙江省绍兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编05作文一、材料作文1. （2021 浙江绍兴）上个月，你们班为Children，s Home的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请 根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的体会。Things you didThings you' ve learnedhand out noticesmake things like sell the thingsgive away the moneydevelop life skills 注意：（1）短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；（2）你的体会至少两条；（3）词数:80100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：义卖活动charity sale短文首句：Last month, our class had a charity sale.2. （2020 浙江绍兴）学生喜欢在家还是在电影院看电影？就该话题你在班中做了调查（结果见下列图）。 请你据此写一篇短文在校英语社团主题活动中进行交流，并谈谈你的选择和理由。Watch movies at home or in the cinema?第1页共5页二、电子邮件3. （2022 浙江绍兴）假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请 根据下表信息给某英文报切旌栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。Uncivilized behaviorsSuggestions threw rubbish everywhere picked flowers climbed trees put rubbish into bins注意：（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；（2）你的建议至少两条；（3）词数：80100；（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavior；编辑editorDear editor, I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.第2页共5页第3页共5页Yours sincerely,Liu Jun参考答案：1.例文：Last month, our class had a charity sale. Two days before the sale, we handed out notices to make our sale known by others. Then we made different things like food and toys. It was so much fun! When everything was ready, we started to sell the things. To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time! At last, we gave away the money we made to Children' s Home.I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn how to communicate with others well. Last but not least, helping people makes us happy.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：题目要求根据表格信息写短文，谈谈班上组织的爱心义卖活动及自己的感受。要包含所 有要点，可适当发挥。2 .写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，以一般过去时介绍班上的爱心义卖活动，以一般现在时为主 表达自己的感受。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。3 .高分范文Recently, I' ve done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema. 64% of the students like to watch movies at home. For one thing, they can spend less money. For another, they will have more choices of what to watch.However, others prefer going to the cinema. From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and fell excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience.As for me, watching movies in the cinema is a better choice. I can hang out with my friends and it' s really exciting. At the same time, it' s a good way to develop friendship.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇应用文写作，考查语言运用能力。本文属于典型的观点类作文，是关于在家还 是在电影院看电影话题的调查，并谈谈你的选择以及理由。审题清楚后，发现其实作文难度不大，但在表 达个人观点的时候理由还是要充分些，所以要花些时间思考。同时，注意文章的语句衔接，表达清晰，建 议学生们平时应多积累观点类文章书写的固定框架句型及相应的连接词汇并注意生活素材的积累。2 .例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，结构清晰，表达条理。文章采用三段式结构， 第一段点明文章主旨，并阐述了一些学生的观点及理由；第二段阐述另外一些学生们的观点和理由；最后 一段阐述了自己的选择和理由。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完第4页共5页 整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中像for one thing. . . for another, at the same time等都能让文章衔 接顺畅。3 .高分亮点：短语：For one thingfor another； from one' s point of view； as for； hang out； at the same time0句型：Recently, I' ve done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema. ； For one thing, they can spend less money. For another, they will have more choices of what to watch. ； From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and fell excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience.； As for me, watching movies in the cinema is a better choice.。4 .例文Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.Yours sincerelyLiu Jun【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增 加细节。2 .写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现 的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑 清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。第5页共5页