人教版(新教材)高中英语选修3Unit2 Healthy Lifestyle优质学案：Writing——建议信.docx

Writing建议信点拨写作技巧一、写作分析建议信属于半开放性作文，大多要求考生根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办 法或者提出合理的建议，材料多为征求建议的信件。二、篇章结构建议信一般采取三段式结构：首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，亦可说明自己的意图。中段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用委婉的语言提出自己的建议、方法。末段：表达希望，希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。三' 语言特点.建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；要充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达时 应选择得体的语言，语气要诚恳，有礼貌，切忌用语生硬呆板，泛泛而谈。1 .可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接。积累写作素材 一、常用词汇.have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth 做某事有困难1 .follow the advice 遵从建议.advise/recommend sb to do sth 建议某人做某事2 .attach importance to food quality 注重食品质量.develop a healthy eating habit 养成健康的饮食习惯3 .build up a body 增强体质.take in too much fat摄入过多的脂肪4 .keep a balanced diet 保持均衡的饮食.guarantee the safety of food 保障食品平安5 .take regular exercise 有规律的锻炼二、常用句式引出话题l.Fm sorry you have trouble in.1.1 am writing to share some advice with you.3 .You have asked for some advice concerning.and I will try to give you my suggestions.建议方法3.1 think it would be a good idea if.2.In my opinion, it would be wise to.3.2 f I were you, I would.4 .Why not.? /Why don5t you.?提出希望4.1 hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.2.1 would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.例如分步写作为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了 “HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学 向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请 用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1 .表示理解并给予抚慰；2 .提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；3 .信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4 .信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper儿脾气；情绪Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.Yours,Jamie第一步审题谋篇体裁建议信时态一般现在时和将来时主题有关生活和学习的建议人称第一和第二人称布局首段：对问题表示理解和抚慰； 中段：具体建议及理由； 尾段：希望和祝愿。第二步要点翻译1 .这是一个让你的愤怒发泄而不伤害别人或自己的好方法。This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.2 .这样一种积极的生活态度可以帮助提升你的精神。Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting youi spirits.第三步词句升级1 .用so合并句子。The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong.You don't have to worry so much.f The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.2 .用so that和定语从句合并句子。The important thing is to learn to control your temper.You may not do or say anything and you will regret it.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do orsay anything you'll regret.3 .用as合并句子。Go outdoors and play team games with your friends.Physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.f Go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of enger.第四步连句成篇Hi Worried,I'm sony to know that you're having such a bad time at the m oment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third, remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie演练话题美文为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波， 用英语向校长写一篇100词左右的建议信。注意：1.文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Suggestions for aBetter School Lifeour school / :*opcn the library more often* organize more after-class activities*give us more time for sportsorganize fewer exams*.our teachers*make classes more interesting*talk less but more clearly in class* finish classes on time*give us less homework*.Dear Headmaster,I'm very glad to write a letter to you.These days we are talking about how to have a better school life.Here are some of my suggestions.First, I hope our school willHope my suggestions will be helpful.Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely,Liu BoK参考范文1Deal Headmastei,I'm very glad to write a letter to you.These days we are talking about how to have 抱 better school life.Here are some_ of my suggestions.First, I hope our school will open the library more often.Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities.Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music.And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice.Whafs more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.Hope my suggestions will be helpfuLThanks for reading my letter! Youis sinceiely, Liu Bo