人教版(新教材)高中英语选修3Unit 3 Environmental Protection优质学案:Writing——有关环境问题的报告.docx
Writing有关环境问题的报告点拨写作技巧一、写作分析报告是一种应用文体,是在对特定对象深入考察了解的基础上,经过归纳整理, 分析研究,进而揭示事物的本质,得出符合实际的结论,用文字形式表现出来。 二、篇章结构首段:陈述事实,简要说明反映的问题;中段:详细介绍问题的内容;尾段:说明自己的观点并提出建议。三' 语言特点写作时要注意知识的科学性,行文的条理性和语言的准确性。积累写作素材 一、常用词汇.be/live in harmony with 与和谐共处1 .bring.under control 把控制住.be/become aware of 意识至U2 .raise the awareness of 提高意识.live a low carbon life 过低碳生活6 .develop new and clean energy 开展新型清洁能源.harmonious environment 和谐的环境7 .contribute to 对起作用;对作贡献二、常用句式介绍问题1 .With the global warming becoming more and more serious, .will probably.2 .Nowadays, the issue of.is becoming more and more important.3.are being polluted so that the environment in which.is destroyed.4.1. .has caused people much inconvenience and trouble, especially for those who.解决问题1 .Measures have been taken to deal with.by the government.2.Only in this way can we create.3.We should balance advantages against disadvantages of.4.1 fs time to raise people's awareness of .and appeal to.例如分步写作假设你是新华中学的学生李华,请根据以下提示,针对你的家乡近两年频繁遭受 沙尘暴袭击的情况,向某英语报社投稿,呼吁大家植树造林,保护环境。1 .过去家乡树木成林;2 .如今人们毁林种地建房;3 .气候变化,土地荒漠化;4 .植树造林,人人有责。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。Dear Editor,I'm a student at a middle school of Shanxi.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua第一步审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时为主主题环境保护人称第一、三人称布局首段:对家乡过去的介绍; 中段:对家乡现状的描写; 尾段:提出建议。第二步要点翻译1 .我写信是想表达我对家乡环境的看法。I'm writing to express my views concealing the environment in my hometown.2 .茂密的森林和绿草随处可见。Thick forests and green grass could be seen everywhere.3 .为了防止沙漠化的进程,我希望所有的人保护森林,种植更多的树木,而不是 砍伐它们。To prevent the process of desertification, I hope all the people take good care of the forests and plant more trees instead of cutting them down.第三步词句升级1 .用because引导原因状语从句合并句子。People in my hometown have been cutting down trees and digging up grass in order to build houses and plant more crops.Land gradually becomes desert.f Because people in my hometown have been cutting down trees and digging up grass in order to build houses and plant more crops, land gradually becomes desert.2 .用非限制性定语从句合并句子。Sandstorms often strike my hometown.People suffer a lot from sandstorms, f Sandstorms often strike my hometown, from which people suffer a lot. 第四步连句成篇Dear Editor,I'm a student at a middle school of Shanxi. I'm writing to express my views concerning the environment in my hometown.My hometown used to be a beautiful place*Thick forests and green grass could be seen everywhere*However, nowadays, because people in my hometown have been cutting down trees and digging up grass in order to build houses and plant more crops, land gradually becomes desert.Sandstorms often strike my hometown, from which people suffer a lot.To prevent the process of desertification, I hope all the people take good care of the forests and plant more trees instead of cutting them down.Then our living conditions will soon be improved.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Youis,Li Hua演练话题美文随着哥本哈根世界气候大会的召开,越来越多的人关注气候变化。请你写一篇词 数100左右的报告,简要描述过量排放二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)的危害(严重的 风暴、干旱、全球变暖),并提出具体建议,号召人们选择低碳生活 (low-carbon life) 方式。K参考范文RWith the levels of carbon dioxide in the air increasing rapidly, the global temperature continues going up.lt would be a catastrophe.The temperature rises, resulting in a higher sea level, more severe storms, floods, droughts, even the extinction of species. The UN Conference in Copenhagen focuses on future actions on climate changes, which has attracted more and more people's attention.lt is realized that living a low-carbon life is necessary.Turn off the lights, the TV, the computers and so on if we are not using them.Recycle cans , bottles , plastic bags and newspapers if circumstances allow us to.Walk or ride a bike if we can.Together, individuals can make a difference.If all of us think about the problems and live a low-carbon life, we shall have a better and cleaner planet in the future.