人教版(新教材)高中英语选修3Unit5 Poems精品学案：Writing——诗歌改写.docx

Writing诗歌改写诗歌改写是用不同形式表达同一内容，使之成为与原文意思相同而表达方式、文 体不同的作品。改写可以改变文章人称、顺序，也可以改变原文的体裁、结构。 同时,要注意灵活运用自己的语言，尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文的内容。I .Pre-writing(I )Structure of the composition(II )Preparation for writing-words and phrasesencourage v.鼓励flexible adj.灵活的admire o.羡慕 generous adj.慷慨的courageous adj. 勇敢的 hard-working adj. 辛勤的befond of喜欢compare.with 与相比©inparticular尤其 make contributionsto 为做 出贡献II .While-writing下面是唐朝诗人李绅的诗悯农(Sympathy on the Farmers),请写一篇短文解释 一下诗的意思及诗歌所表达的含义。悯农锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土。谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。注意：1.不得逐字翻译原文；.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；2 .必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯；.短文不能写成诗歌形式。Step 1 List the outline of the passage.首段： 李绅；生活年代：唐朝；影响：深受欢迎中段：介绍诗歌所表达的内容尾段：诗歌的写作意图及现实意义Step 2 List the words, phrases and sentences.1 .Words and phrasesfrequently adv.频繁地 delicious adj.美味的treasure a 珍惜 soil儿 土壤©generation n.一代，一辈be popular with 深受欢迎waste food浪费食物 remind sb of sth 提醒某人某事2.Sentences悯农是唐朝诗人李绅写的一首诗。（使用过去分词作定语）The poem entitled Sympathy on the Farmers is written by Li Shen in the Tang Dynasty.夏日正午时刻，外面天气炎热；农民依然在田间劳作。（让步状语从句） Although it's so hot outside at this summer noon time，the farmers are stilL working in the fields.他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。（定语从句）They are wet all over and their sweat is frequently falling into t he soil, wheie the crops g】ow.我认为对于当代年轻人来说理解这首诗并珍惜粮食是很重要的。（动词不定式 作主语）I think it's very important for the young geneiation today to unde Stand the poem and Jreasuie eveiy giain.Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.which, as, where, butHere is a poem entitled Sympathy on the Fanners by Li Shen in the Tang Dynasty, which enjoys great popularity among Chinese readers.lt goes like this: Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still working in the fields.They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow.But who on earth knows exactly all the delicious dishes on our table come from the hard work of the farmers?Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers hard work.Nowadays, many young people waste a lot of food.I think, it's of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.Ill.Post-writing-polishing the passageExchange your composition with your partners, and pay attention to the following points. 1.Does the writer describe the author and the content of the poem. 2.Are there any grammatical or spelling mistakes? 3.Does the write include all the main points? 4.1s written English correctly used?壳点表达1 .Here's a poem with the title.by., which enjoys great popularity among readers.2 .Young as we are, we come to realize that as long as we try, nothing is impossible.3 .She often encourages me to face everything, sad or happy.4 .Remember, the best love is to love others unconditionally rather than make demands on them.5 .Fm deeply moved by the above peom reminding me of the importance of trying to seize every chance to do what we should before it's too late in our life.6 .We should call on people to change our living ways before all hopes have gone. 人物描写小贴土.选材要有重点，着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，不可面面俱到。1 .对人物的评论要简短、客观公正。可以引用名人的评述。2 .可以适当引用人物的典型话语，以增强说服力。