人教版(新教材)高中英语选修4Unit1 Science Fiction精品学案：Writing—A sci-fi short story.docx
Writing-A sci-fi short story技法点拨/文体分析 把握写作动脉*【写作指导】写科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展 原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中 间过程。想象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型与语句间的连接 成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感。写科幻故事需要遵循以下步骤：1 .仔细审题，确定文章结构科幻故事的写作一般可分为三局部：第一局部为故事的开始；第二局部为故事开展的过程及 结果；最后一局部提出故事的教育意义。2 .根据需要确定时态科幻故事通常发生在未来，因此应以一般将来时为主。3 .筛选词汇科幻故事一般为虚构的故事，为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动、富于虚幻性。【常用表达】.is one of the greatest fantasy stories ever written.1. The hero is a boy called.and the heroine is a girl called.2. There arc many extraordinary adventures.3. Robots play an important role in our future life.4. Both adults and children will enjoy these stories.写作训练弄清文络写作妙笔生花N某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头（不计入总词数）, 续写篇80词左右的幻想小故事参赛。Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, u Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead.If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happincss.Put on me and I will help you.”。审题谋篇【审题】.确定体裁：幻想故事属记叙文范畴。1 .确定人称：主体人称为第三人称。2 .确定时态：以一般过去时为主。【谋篇】本文应分为三局部：第一局部：介绍故事的开始。第二局部：讲述故事开展的过程。第三局部：表达故事的结局及意义。遣词造句【核心词汇】1 .犹豫做hesitate to do.2 .把戴上 put.on.看不见的invisible3 .靠近 approach.在的帮助下 with the help of.4 .和一起 together with【连词成句】1 .年轻人亳不犹豫地戴上了那枚戒指。The young man didn' i hcsilatc to put the ring on his finger.2 .他吃惊地发现自己消失了，其他人都看不见他。Surprisingly, he discovered that he disappeared and was invisible （o other people.3 . 一靠近城堡，他就戴上了戒指，进入了城堡。As soon as he ar）Droached （he casile, he put on the ring, and entered the castle.4 .在戒指的帮助下，他在一个金盒中找到了魔棒，并成功地将其毁掉，解除了女巫对女孩施 的魔咒。With ihe help of ihc ring, he found the magical stick in a golden box, destroyed it successfully, and thus removed the magic spell put on the girl by the witch.【句式升级】.用含有动词-ing形式作状语、形容词短语作状语的句子合并第I句和第2句。The young man didn，t hesitateduI Ihe ring on his finger, surprisingly discovering hat he disappeared, invisible to other people.1 .用“on +动词-ing形式”改写第3句。On approaching the castle, he put on the ring, and entered the castle.2 .用动词-ing形式作状语改写第4句。Wilh【he help of Ihe ring, heound【he magical stick in a golden box, and destroyed il successfully, (hus removing ihe magic spell du【on ihe giH byhe wilch.。组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短 文。【参考范文】Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.He ju" stood, wondering and ihcn the ring said, “ Young man, a kind girl is iraDDed by a wilch in ihe castle ahead.If you are brave enough【o rescue her, you will gain haDpiness.Put on me and【will help you.”The young man didn' t hesitate to put the ring on his finger, surprisingly discovering that he disappeared, invisible to other people.On approaching the castle, he put on the ring, and entered the casile.He learned (hat the girl couldn' ( move forever unless someone destroyed the witch' s magical stick.With the help of the ring, he found the magical stick in a golden box, and destroyed it successfully, thus removing the magic spcil put on the girl by the witch.The young man, together with (he girl, defeated the witch, and (hey lived a happy life together.
