初中英语九年级写作.ppt
九年级学生英语写作实践训练九年级学生英语写作实践训练 八洞初中:刘艳八洞初中:刘艳 九年级学生英语写作实践训练九年级学生英语写作实践训练 Lets sing a songTwinkle, twinkle ,little star.How I wonder what you areLike a diamond in the sky 九年级学生英语写作实践训练九年级学生英语写作实践训练 1.How many steps do you need to write a composition? 2.What are they?假定你是李华, 你的美国朋友Ann一直和父母生活在一起, 今年初中毕业后考虑高中住校, 现发来电子邮件寻求你的建议。请你结合提示给予回复。提示:1. 支持她住校; 2. 原因:节约时间和精力, 专注学习; 学会独立生活, 照顾自己; 与同学相处, 增进了解。要求:1. 词数80词左右; 2. 短文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等信息; 3. 开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。参考词汇:住校live in school;精力energy话题作文话题作文 对于住校的意见对于住校的意见写作实践一写作实践一 1. 审审清题目清题目1. 审文体:审文体: 应用文中的书信应用文中的书信2. 审人称:审人称: 第二人称第二人称3. 审格式:审格式: 书信的格式是;称呼、问候语、正文、结束语、落书信的格式是;称呼、问候语、正文、结束语、落款款4. 审时态:审时态: 一般现在时态(主体时态)和一般将来时态一般现在时态(主体时态)和一般将来时态2.1 列出要点列出要点(1)支持住校且对你有好处)支持住校且对你有好处(2)原因)原因 节约时间和精力, 专注学习; 学会独立生活, 照顾自己; 与同学相处, 增进了解。 2.1 列出要点列出要点Its wise of you to because it is good for you.save much time and energylearn how to live on your own life/live aloneget along with your classmates and know more about themconcentrate on study/pay attention to studytake good care of / look after yourselfI think that 2.2. 扩扩展成句展成句1.I think it will be wise of you to choose to live in school, because it will be good for you.2.If you live in school, it will save you much time and energy, which you can use to concentrate on study.3.Living in school is a good chance for you to learn how to live on your own and take good care of yourself.4.It will also help you get along with your classmates more easily and know more about them.If引导的条件状语从句Its +adj +of sb to sth句型的运用 九年级学生英语写作实践训练九年级学生英语写作实践训练 书面表达中考评卷标准:书面表达中考评卷标准:评评卷卷标标准准内容完内容完整整6分分表达正确表达正确5分分字数合乎要字数合乎要求求3分分行文连贯行文连贯2分分大小写正确大小写正确及书写工整及书写工整 2分分有自有自主发挥主发挥2分分得得分分 3.完成完成写写作作注意过渡词的使用Dear Ann, Im glad to hear from you. Here Id like to tell you my advice. I think it will be wise of you to choose to live in school, because it will be good for you. Firstly, if you live in school, it will save you much time and energy, which you can use to concentrate on study. Secondly, living in school is a good chance for you to learn how to live on your own and take good care of yourself. Whats more, it will also help you get along with your classmates more easily and know more about them. So will they. I believe that you will have a wonderful high school life and make many new friends. Yours, Li Hua summary写作写作四步四步法:法:一、审清题目 审文体(审文体(包括包括格式),审人称,格式),审人称, 审时态,审内容要点(审时态,审内容要点(含含字数)字数)二、列出要点三、完成写作四、查错改错 写作技巧:1.不会表达的,迂回表达。2.如果有刚复习过的句子,用得上也可把它用在文中恰当的位置。3.表达个人见解,有个人情感。4.在词句落实的基础上,可写出高质量的句子。5.注意在写的过程中,书写工整、规范,并巧用衔接词,如,or, and, because, at first, then, on the other hand, but, although, not onlybut also 写作实践写作实践2 (homework) 注意: 1.文章必须包括表中的全部内容,并适当发挥; 2.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名