高考英语第二轮复习书面表达图表式作文.ppt

图表式作文的几种形式图表式作文的几种形式:一是以一是以表格表格形式形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。即统计表。二是以二是以图形图形形式形式 A 表示数据变化的表示数据变化的曲线图曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的的柱状图柱状图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图扇形图。Warming upGraph表示两组数的关系表示两组数的关系-通常为通常为函数关系函数关系图图Pie Chart饼状图饼状图Table矩形的矩形的竖行竖行和和横行横行进行排列的表格进行排列的表格 Item19941995199619971998Food65%60%48%42%35%Clothing8%9%12%15%17%Recreation 3%5%7%8%10%Others24%26%33%35%38%Total100%100%100%100%100%Bar Chart / Graph 柱状图柱状图图表式作文写作分三步图表式作文写作分三步:第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题 即即 conclusion常使用的词汇有常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe/ tell, show, represent等等常用句型：常用句型：1.The graph/chart/table above shows 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.3. As is shown in the graph, .4.The chart/table shows the differences between第二步：第二步：分析数据间的分析数据间的主要差异及趋势主要差异及趋势，然后描写，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层次。意层次。 即即 facts and reasons常用常用转折，对比及比较的转折，对比及比较的词汇：词汇：While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,asas, the same as, be similar to, be difference between, among, more than, less than常用描写趋势变化的词汇：常用描写趋势变化的词汇： Increase, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach, remain, by/to, slowly, slightly, gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of, fromto及比较级，倍数句型等。常用句型：常用句型：Facts: 1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in3.It is 20% lower/higher than4.The number /rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.5.The number is times as much as that of.6.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by/% / two thirds.7.By comparison with,it decreased/increased/fell fromtoReasons:1.The reason foris that2.One may think of the change as a result of3.The change inlargely results from the fact that4.There are several causes for this significant growth in.First,.Second,5.This brings out the important fact that第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。常用词汇：常用词汇：1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking2.Its clear from the chart that3.In summary, it is important4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that 5.Obviously, if we want to,it is necessary6.There is no doubt that attention must be paid审题：（格式审题：（格式/人称人称/时态时态/要点要点/篇章结构）篇章结构）篇章结构：篇章结构：conclusion: tense facts : 描述抓关键；描述抓关键； tense reasons： tense-your own opinion/suggestions : tense-do/ will do有明确过去时间状语有明确过去时间状语 用用过去时过去时；无明确年份，反映一种普遍现象或介绍情无明确年份，反映一种普遍现象或介绍情况的况的 用用现在时现在时dodo（ 上海春季）某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，上海春季）某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。（上海春季）某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简（上海春季）某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。0 0101020203030404050506060707080801997年1997年1999年1999年2001年2001年2004年2004年审题审题-人称人称: 第三人称第三人称 时态时态: 一般过去时一般过去时 要点要点: 1. 1997年年10%的人的人 有手机有手机2.1999年年20%的人有手机的人有手机 3.2001年年50%的人有手机的人有手机 4.2004年年80%的人有手机的人有手机 篇章结构篇章结构:1.Conclusion2.Facts and reasons3.You own opinion/ suggestionsPara1.整体描述整体描述ConclusionThe chart above shows the increasing number of mobile phonesPara2.具体描写，要体现出数据之间的变化具体描写，要体现出数据之间的变化Facts1.According to the first column, only 10 percent of the population owned mobile phones in 1997.0 0101020203030404050506060707080801997年1997年1999年1999年2001年2001年2004年2004年2.In 1999 the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100.(1). It increased by 10% in 1999.(2) It is 10% higher than that of 1997.3. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997. (2).The number became larger and larger20% in 1999 and 50% in 2001.0 0101020203030404050506060707080801997年1997年1999年1999年2001年2001年2004年2004年(1).There was a great rise in 2001 the rate reached up to 50%.4. Three years later, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. (1).By comparison with 2001,it increased from 50% to 80%.(2).In 2oo4, nearly 80% people enjoyed the convenience offered by the mobile phones. Para1-2 The chart above shows the increasing number of mobile phones. According to the first column, only 10 percent of the population owned mobile phones in 1997. As time went on, in 1999 the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. In 2001,the people owning mobile phones were 5 times as many as those in 1997. Three years later, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. Para3.Reasons There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, peoples income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make peoples communication easy and convenient . Para4归纳总结并得出结论。归纳总结并得出结论。 It can be estimated that the population of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.书面表达评分标准（总分书面表达评分标准（总分3030）: :1.1.书面不洁书面不洁/ /字迹潦草，小组长让其重新誊写；字迹潦草，小组长让其重新誊写；2.2.词数大概少于词数大概少于8080或多于或多于120120， -1-13.3.要点有无遗漏要点有无遗漏 3-4/3-4/个个4.4.整篇文章时态错误或混乱整篇文章时态错误或混乱 -5-55.5.整篇文章人称错误整篇文章人称错误 -5-56.6.拼写；标点符号；应用词汇拼写；标点符号；应用词汇 错误错误 -2/ 3-2/ 3个个( (圈出）圈出）7.7.动词；语法动词；语法/ /句子结构句子结构 错误错误 -2/ -2/ 个个 （横线划出）（横线划出）8.8.上下文如有适当的连词，上下文如有适当的连词， 可适当提高可适当提高1-21-29.9.上下文如果优美的表达准确的词句：名词性上下文如果优美的表达准确的词句：名词性/ /定语从句、定语从句、倒装句等，可适当提高倒装句等，可适当提高2-32-3