人教新课标高中英语一轮复习 写作公开课——How to polish an article 导学案 （无答案）.docx

How to polish(润色) an articleLearning aims:To get the knowledge of the structure of “letter for suggestions”;To learn to polish an article by using some advanced sentence structures; Step 1: Leading in1、 建议信的基本结构：1. 开头开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。2. 主体提出自己的建议，并陈述提出该建议的理由。3. 结尾呼应开头，重申观点。2、 写建议信要注意的问题。Step 2: Self-learning Finish the following exercise according to the requirements. 请写出你在给别人提建议时常用到的表达：1.建议信开头常用表达（至少写出三个）：_2.表达建议的常用句式（至少写出四个）：E.g. You should do sth._3.建议信结尾常用句式（至少写出三个）：_4.请写出你在作文中常用到的衔接词（至少写出三个）：E.g. Firstly,. Secondly,. Thirdly,._5.请写出你在作文中常用到的高级句式或从句：E.g. There is no doubt that. 毫无疑问_Step 3: Feeding-back 1Show the answers of step 2Step 4: DiscussionFind out the shortcomings in the following article and polish it with advanced expressions or sentence structures together with your group members so as to make it more native and get higher points .上周，你班的某同学在英语写作课上写了一篇作文，但是得分非常低，请你根据写作要求对他的作文加以修改和润色，使文章的语言准确、连贯。假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件提出建议。1. 学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2. 多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3. 积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节；3.注意文章的连贯性和语言的准确性。Dear Susan,Firstly, you should work hard at English. It can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. If you speak English fluently, you will be confident. Secondly, you should make some friends. Friendship can help you forget loneliness. Friendship can help you live happily, too. Thirdly, you should take part in all kinds of activities at school. The activities can make your life more interesting. Yours, Li Hua Task 1: What are the shortcomings of this passage?_Task 2: Now please polish the article above to make it more native so as to get higher points._Step 5: Feeding-back 2Show your works and evaluate it together.Step 6: Homework