七年级Writing英语培优.ppt
Company LogoWriting以写人为例Company Logou书面表达评分原则：u （1）内容要点；u （2）是否有单词，语法错误u （3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性； u （4）上下文的连贯性。u （5）是否有闪光点Company Logou注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。u1) 语态、时态要准确无误。u2) 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。u3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。u4) 注意冠词用法，u例如： He is an/a honest student.Company Logomy mother I have a good mother.Her name is Yu Bihua.She has a short and black hair .She eyes are big,round and black and has small mouth. she likes talk so much.She is not so tall.She often wear a brown coat,black trousers and black shoes.She is 37years old,but she looks young.Hertalking sand she has a small mouth.Company Logo My mother works in a hospital and she is a nurse. She is very busy.Every morning, she gets up early. she goes to work on foot. Her work begins at 7:30. She has lunch at 12:30. She rests. and then goes to work again. At 6:00 p.m. She goes home. In the evening ,she often watches TV,after that, goes to bed. My mother is an ordinary, hard-working woman, but Im proud of her.Then, she takes a walk to school.After lunch, she has a short rest She comes back home. Company Logou1). There was no people to take care of the children.u改：_u2). There are a desk and two chairs in the room.u改：_u3). Watch TV too much is bad for our eyes.u改: _was- wereare-isWatchingCompany Logou描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：u1) 外表特征：utall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。u2) 服饰颜色：ured, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等u3) 内心境界：uglad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested u4) 感情描写：ulove, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, 等。u5) 动作描写：ucome, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。Company Logo方法一方法一: :善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Company LogoWhich is better?A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Company LogoWhich is better? 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.Company LogoWhich is better? 他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Company LogoWhich is better? 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.Company LogoA I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English . 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.Company Logo方法二方法二: :活用多种句型活用多种句型Company LogouHe cant find jobs, or make money.uHe can neither find jobs nor make money.uI am very surpriseuWhat a surprise!uI like her very muchuI am fond of her very much.Company Logo方法三方法三: :妙用关联词妙用关联词Company Logo1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more, not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although though,after all, anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, for, as a result5.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end6.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially,
