人物介绍英语作文写作.ppt

Writing Introduction to a person,Procedures： 1. 认真审题（Analyze） 2. 选词造句（Words and expressions） 3. 连句成文 (Structure),你校英文报“Famous Scientists”专栏正在征文，请根据表格所给信息用英语写一篇介绍著名物理学家史蒂芬霍金的短文并投稿,Step 1 Analyze,你校英文报“Famous Scientists”专栏正在征文，请根据表格所给信息用英语写一篇介绍著名物理学家史蒂芬霍金的短文并投稿,Topic：Introduction of Stephen Hawking,Five points,主题？,什么内容？,基本时态？,Step 2 Words and expressions,1概况age, birth-place, background 2性格appearance ,character, hobby 3教育education 4生平big events in ones life ( in order of time ) 5评价evaluation,1. age, birthday and birthplace (个人概况) was / were born in(place) on(date) at the age of the son of a poor family was born into a peasant / intelligent family/ a family of scholars live / lead a happy / difficult life,1)出生于某地某时 2)在某人多少岁时 3)来自穷苦家庭的儿子 4)出生于一个农民/知识分子家庭/书香门第 5)过着幸福/艰苦的生活,Step 2 Words and expressions,有信心的 爱社交的，外向的 乐于助人,2. character (性格特征),confident sociable be willing/ready to help others,Step 2 Words and expressions,有毅力的 有能力的 热心肠的 随和的 精力充沛 慷慨的 聪明的 杰出的 有吸引力的 有天赋的,determined / perseverant capable warmhearted / kind-hearted easy going energetic generous intelligent / clever out-standing attractive / charming gifted / talented,Vocabulary Accumulation,李咏不但很有天赋而且很随和。 李华是个很有能力的班长。,Li Yong is not only gifted but also easy-going.,Li Hua is a very capable monitor.,sentence-writing practice,3. education background (教育背景) 1)考取大学 2)从某大学某系毕业 3)获取硕士/博士学位 4)出国深造 / 去日本留学 5)读大学时他主修英语。,be admitted touniversity graduate fromdepartment ofuniversity receive / get a masters / doctors degree go abroad / to Japan for further studies When at college, he majored in English. =, he was an English major.,Step 2 Words and expressions,4. big events in his or her life (生平经历),serve as (a keyboard operator) devote oneself / ones effort/ones life to = be devoted to make up ones mind / be determined to do have a gift / talent for,1)做 (/电脑操作员的)工作 2)致力于(教育事业) 3)决心做 4)有的天赋,Step 2 Words and expressions,5. evaluation (评价) 1)国内外著名的 2)在取得很大/快速进步 3)获得一等奖/第一名 4)为树立好榜样 5)高度赞扬 6)被授予(的称号) 7)为作出巨大贡献,famous / wellknown at home and abroad make great/rapid progress in gain /win/be awarded the first prize/place set a good example to sb/set sb a good example speak / think highly of be honored as make great contributions to,Step 2 Words and expressions,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,Step 2 Words and expressions,同义替换,（1）这人很变态： BT? be different from normal people strange/odd/peculiar （2）难民 difficult people？ the people who suffered from a disaster,X,X,（3）老百姓 old hundred name the general public ordinary people people from all walks of life,X,Step 2 Words and expressions,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,（2）上义词（hypernyms）、下义词 （hyponyms）代替 上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明 下义词是事物的具体表现形式。,Step 2 Words and expressions,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,铁锹、锄头、镐： the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖： The tool which is used to help the disabled to stand/walk 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide 一氧化碳： carbon oxide poisonous gases,spade, hoe, pick,stick,上义词,残疾人： the people who can not move/speak/think normally,大众媒体,大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio, newspaper, internet,the disabled,mass media,下义词,Step 2 Words and expressions,Step 3 Structure,1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all. 3. 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand, just like 4. 表示因果关系 so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to,5. 表示时间、顺序关系 shortly afterwards, next, finally, in the end, eventually 6. 表示递进、强调关系 besides, furthermore (此外), whats more, in addition, moreover (而且), worse still, to make matters worse 7. 表示解释、说明关系 namely (也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this 8. 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally,Step 3 Structure,Conclusion: 1. 认真审题（Analyze）：审要求，审内容，审时态等 2. 选词造句（Words and expressions）：列出关键词组和句型 3. 连句成文(Structure)：用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子，加以恰当的关联词，形成篇章。 注意检查：看拼写、单复数、主谓一致等,你校准备新建的名人长廊为每一位名人配上英文简介，请根据提示，用英语介绍我国著名科学家钱学森。,