【AAA】最新出国留学申请推荐信写作技巧及范文(35页).doc

-【AAA】最新出国留学申请推荐信写作技巧及范文-第 35 页最新出国留学申请推荐信写作技巧及范文推荐信(Recommendation Letter)申请北美的硕士研究生或博士研究生项目一般需要23份推荐信。推荐信是除自述外最重要的出国留学申请文件，起着从侧面介绍、证明的作用。由于其客观性，推荐信能起到自述所起不到的作用。谁是最好的推荐人呢？录取评审委员会最看重那些与被推荐者有着或曾有过密切的工作关系的人或其他熟悉你的科研能力、学术水平、组织能力和领导才能的人士。许多申请者喜欢请地位高的人士推荐自己，比方说大学校长、大集团公司的领导等。但如果不能令人信服地证明他们了解你的学术成果、工作能力和领导才干，就起不到积极的效果。在大学比较了解你的教授，在工作单位里的顶头上司或是你参与的其他社会组织，如各种学术和慈善团体的负责人，是理所当然的最佳推荐人人选。你也应当尽量避免请同一类型的人士给你写推荐信，比如说三位大学教授或说三位公司里的领导。你需要录取评审委员会对你有一个完整而全面的了解，不能只局限于在校的学习成绩或是工作上的表现。所以，假设你需要3封推荐信，最好的办法是请一位大学的教授、一位公司的经理再加上一位你曾经参与工作的“北京市民援助张家口地震灾民行动委员会”的负责人。这样三位人士曾经亲眼目睹你的表现，而且具备观察你的独特的角度。这样在录取评审委员会面前，你的形象就丰满了。除了推荐者的选择，推荐信的内容也有格外需要注意的地方。一封好的推荐信不仅需要出自一位在某一方面了解你的人士之手，而且这封信对你的评价必须要有具体的例子来佐证。中国学生的许许多多的推荐信都犯着一个雷同而且是致命的错误，那就是几乎每一句话都堆满了赞美的形容词或名词，如“intelligent”, “ambitious”, “personable”, “natural born leader”等等，但却不举一件事例来证明。这样的推荐信是苍白无力的，它不增加评审委员会对你的任何了解，甚至会让读者产生疑问：你的教授，你的顶头上司，为什么不能说出你的任何一件具体的成就!如果没有具体的事例，评审委员会就不能将你与其他数千个，甚至成千上万个申请者区别开来。许许多多的中国学生不知从哪里得来的错误信息，认为推荐信只应是二至三段话，全信连收件、发件人地址绝不能超过一页。如果只二三段话，而且只有赞美词，没有具体的例证，这样的推荐信只是说：“我本来不想写这封推荐信，只是应付一下了事。”只要不犯啰嗦的毛病，一封推荐信写到第二页又有何不可呢？!当然，即使是十分了解你的推荐者也不能保证完全了解或是记得你的具体成就和能力，他们也可能不清楚在推荐信上详细介绍你的重要性。你所应该做的是与推荐者交谈一次，提醒他们你所具有的能力和已获得的成就并表明你希望他们能够提到这些事实。据编者了解，许多为申请留学的推荐信把被推荐者的成就和水平捧得过高。其实静下心来想一想，申请留学的目的不就是为了深造和发展自己吗？如果推荐信把你捧成大师了，又何必要去留学呢？还有，推荐信与个人自述一样，没有必要刻意回避事业上的挫折和能力上的不足。关键是以什么角度来看待这些挫折和不足。一个不怕困难、百折不挠的人是最具有成功品质的人。要到北美去留学，往往是因为发现在某些方面的不足而需要去进一步深造。推荐者如果恰当地而又正面谈到申请人的不足，就会增加推荐信的真实性，而且也显示出对被推荐者深刻的了解。这样的推荐信就会更加有分量。有大量的中国留学生是以推荐者的名义和口吻自己用英文把推荐信写好，然后请推荐者过目并签字。出现这种情况的原因是推荐者英语水平有限或者要求他、她写推荐信的人太多，实在是忙不过来，或者是两者都有。在这样的情况下，申请者可以先提供一份中文的稿件，或者是提供一个提纲，经同意后再开始正式的写作。由自己执笔替自己写推存信，看上去有些荒谬，但这也符合我们的实际情况。尽管申请者代替推荐者替自己写推荐信，上面谈到的如何选择推荐人、通过推荐信从不同的角度来展现你的能力和品格以及提供具体例证来支持对你的判断这些要点一样地适用。编者发现，许多申请者在细节上相当马虎，他们去替推荐者打印给自己的几封推荐信时，不仅行文的口气、格式完全没有变化，连使用的纸张、信封、字型、字号也一模一样。国外的评审委员往往不了解中国的特殊国情，他们可能据此判断你在伪造推荐信。下面是编者经过了解得出的许多申请者的推荐信所犯的错误，综合起来归为下列几种：一、推荐者与被推荐者缺乏可信的、有说服力的关系。推荐者往往地位很高，但并不了解被推荐者。申请者应注意，推荐者的地位和知名度在跨国度时常常失去意义，因而一味追求推荐者的地位和知名度往往得不偿失。二、篇幅过短而且只有赞美词却没有具体的实例来佐证被推荐者的能力和品格。三、推荐信往往溢美过度。这样，推荐人不能合理地解释被推荐者为什么需要进一步深造。有时，由于推荐信中对被推荐人的无限吹捧，推荐人自己显得低级甚至愚蠢，致使推荐信的价值大打折扣。四、被推荐者在代替推荐者打印推荐信时，语气、用词、格式往往雷同，易给人以造假的印象。一、教授推荐信范文：推荐信范文机械工程ChairpersonDept. of Mechanical EngineeringClarkson UniversityPotsdam, NY 13699U.S.A.Dear Sir:At the request of Mr. Li, a graduate student of mine in the Department of Thermal Engineering, I am very pleased to write this letter of recommendation in support of his application for admission and financial aid for his study in your Department.I knew Mr. Li in January 1990, when I was the header of the Thermal Measurement Laboratory. We led a project and needed a research assistant. I contacted with the advisor of his class and wanted to choose an excellent student to take part in it. She recommended Mr. Li to me because of his exceptional achievement in his class. So Mr. Li came to our research group to finish his diploma project under my instruction. In the diploma project, his serious attitude and diligence made a favorable impression on me. At last, he completed high quality paper “The Mathematical Model of Heat Exchange Cycle In Large Scale Fossil Power Plant” which earned a high grade 90.Because of his ability of research he demonstrated in his diploma project, he was selected by us to work in our group. In the following two years, he had worked under my instruction, His research work concerned with the simulation of flow network and heat-exchanger in power plant, which is the key technology in the power plant simulation and he resolved it very well. His work was always perfectly finished ahead of schedule and his ability to organize research independently is very outstanding. He participated in the developing of four sets of simulators and some of his work has been published on ACTA SIMULTA SISTEMATICA SINICA ACTA and JOURNAL OF TSINGHUA UNIVERSITY in two years.From Sep.1992, Mr. Li began his graduate study and I was his adviser. Because he possessed much experience of work, he had strong motivation toward his study and his aim of study is very clear. Besides thoroughly studying of all assigned works, he also took part in a lot of research work in our group. Up to now, he has published three papers during his graduate study. I appreciated his work very much. According to my observation, Mr. Li has the potential of a promising student.Meanwhile, Mr. Li is a versatile young man. He likes sports very much. He is the top player of both Department Table Tennis Team and Department Football Team. He and his team-mates won the first place in the Tsinghua University Graduate Student Football Competition in Fall 1992 and the third place in the Tsinghua University Table Tennis Competition in 1993 and 1994.I recommend Mr. Li to you without reservation and I believe that he will produce outstanding work in your institution as he did in ours. Your serious consideration of his application will be greatly appreciated.Sincerely yours,推荐信范文化学工程Dept. of Chemical EngineeringTsinghua UniversityBJ; 100084P.R.CHINADear Sir,Mr. Lu wishes to continue his study at your college. As his teacher, I am willing to offer myself as his reference.Mr. Lu studied in my class for two courses, “High temperature Mechanics” and “ Physical properties of Materials”. His performance in the courses is out of the ordinary. He rarely took notes. Sometimes he showed loosing patience to attend the lecture and read other books. But in discussion periods, he was one of the most inquisitive and vocal students. His comments showed great power in grasping fundamental theories of the subject and applying them creatively. In the laboratory, he always completed the experiments most quickly and excellently.Through my talking with him, I noted that he paid attention to overall view rather than minor details and he has a sound background knowledge in the subject through additional reading. For example, I often meet him in the library reviewing the latest publications from international periodicals. I think these distinguished him from others. At the semester final, he achieved excellent scores, and in most of them, he got the first.Last year, Mr. Lu joined our group to work for his diploma project. His inquisitiveness and creativeness always impressed me. Furthermore, his skill and kindness were appreciated by the group members. Based on his excellent academic records and outstanding performance in research, Mr. Lu is qualified to further study as a Ph.D student in our department and I would accept him as my student enthusiastically. However, Mr. Lu has his own idea about the future. He told me that he preferred to be a research assistant at the laboratory for some time so as to obtain more practical experience in the field of structure materials, and then pursue Ph. D degree in USA where he can learn more advanced theories and technology. In my assessment, he is sufficiently mature for education at a higher level in USA as far as his academic preparation and language proficiency are concerned.I strongly support Mr. Lus application for admission and financial aid. If more information about him is required, please do not hesitate to contact me directly.Yours truly,Professor XXXDept. of Chemical Engineering推荐信范文经济学范文1School of Economics Beijing UniversityP. R. China Nov.11, 2000To whom it may concern:It is a great pleasure for me to write this recommendation letter on behalf of Miss Yang, a promising student of our School of Economics. During her first two academic years, I was her advisor and now, I am teaching her course COMPARATIVE ECONOMIC SYSTEM.Due to Miss Yang s high intellect and incessant assiduity, she is an unquestionable top student. Her solid mathematical and theoretical backgrounds are quite worthy of mentioning. Among the 150 students in her grade, she is one of the three who have never got a grade lower than 90 (in 100 scoring scale) in MATHEMATICAL ANALYSIS and LINEAR ALGEBRA. Also, her scores in MACROECONOMICS and MICROECONOMICS were the highest in her 32student specialty class. At the same time, Miss Yang grasped every chance to satisfy her strong desire for advanced learning. Every time those alumni who had abstained ph. D degree in Ivy League came back to lecture to the graduate students, she audited without exception Their influence, in addition to her own ambition, helps her choose the way to pursue further study.Moreover, Miss Yang impresses me with her ingenious and creative way of thinking. She often discusses with me about the development of the world economy. Through her logical canalization and stimulating ideas, I am sure she has the talent to combine intellectual independence with wellgrasped knowledge appropriately. This can also be demonstrated in our seminars. Profound insight and systematic expression always make her comments attractive and scintillating.Miss Yangs English is very good. In the highest level of College English testGrade 6, only she was awarded “Excellent” certification of 32 students. In my assessment, she has full preparation for graduate study in an Englishspoken country.According to her outstanding performance and responsible personality, the School of Economics recommended her to work for CHINA IMPORT during her spare time, where she got experience and high evaluation. A few days ago, we nominated her as a graduate student, but she gave up the chance because she has admired your university. I can understand her and wish her success.If further information about her is required, please dont hesitate to contact with me.Yours Sincerely,Dean, School of Economics 推荐信范文经济学范文2Dear Professor:Miss Fang began her study at the Department of Economics in 1994. It was in one of my lectures that I got to know her. What made her impressive was her sensible and creative questions. Although she has never been a student in any of my courses, she often consulted with me about problems related to economics. So, I am quite familiar with her.Miss Fang is a hardworking, sincere and intelligent lady. Her good performance in undergraduate study can demonstrate her potential ability. More recommendable, she shows an intense inner drive to improve herself and never satisfied with her own achievements.I have noticed that Miss Fang does not direct all her efforts to exams but to extensive reading in related fields. History, Sociology, Behavior Science and even Ethnography are all intriguing to her. As a matter of fact, she has a wide range of general knowledge.Miss Fang is good at expressing her thought concisely and interestingly. Having almost fifty years teaching experience, I am sure of her potential as a good teacher. Also valuable is her proficiency in English. Every time my foreign friends talked with Miss Fang, they all took her English as pure and idiomatic.As to personal character, honesty and cooperativeness may be two main points in Miss Fang .In fact, her optimistic and easygoing nature has made her a central figure among her classmates.I recommend Miss Fang without reservation and shall appreciate your favorable consideration of her application.Sincerely,Professor, School of EconomicsDirector, Foreign Economics Research CenterVice President, Chinese Association of Foreign Economics 推荐信范文经济学范文3Dear Sir:Miss S has studied under my guidance as one of the brightest students, and I now stand ready to render all my possible support to her application for the scholarship at your program.Five years ago I taught Miss S in the course of Macroeconomics when she was a sophomore, and have been her advisor since she began to pursue a Masters degree in our department. Thus I have known her very well in terms of personality and academic performance.In my assessment, Miss S is one of the best students of mine. Through the nation-wide competitive examination for university entrance in 19XX, she was matriculated into the Department of International Economics at Peking University, one of the national leading universities in China. Even in such a highly selective group, Miss S made herself distinguished. Her overall grades ranked the second of a class with nearly 50 students at graduation. And her Bachelor thesis, entitled “JIT: Application of a Japanese Production System in the U.S.”, was published in World Economics and Politics Journal (December 1996), one of the leading academic journals edited by Academy of Social Science of China. Miss S was granted a B.A. degree in 1995, then was admitted to our three-year Master program excused from a highly competitive examination, which was a privilege only for a few promising students with outstanding performances in their under graduate studies. Again, she is very brilliant and always on the top in her class.From my observation, I am confident that Miss S is most suitable for independent study and research. She has established a very solid groundwork in quantitative methods. The intelligent nature and the sense of logical analyzing make her powerful in mastering complicated theories. Miss S is inquisitive and is keen to probe into new problems and knowledge. In her active participation in the research activities, she has demonstrated her intellectual independence, impressive ability to work creatively and to organize and express her ideas clearly, and good analytical skills. Besides, her fluent English, which helped her adapt herself well to the study at the Graduate Economics Training Center with English instructions, will enable her to adjust to a new environment in the United States within a short period of time.Beyond her ability, Miss S has an excellent character, including a high sense of responsibility, team-work spirit and dedication to her profession, which, I believe, constitute the several key factors that may decide whether a person can succeed in his or her future career.All in all, I believe that Miss S has some strong personality components conductive to academic success. Thus I enthusiastically recommend her for admission to your program, and would be delighted to furnish additional information if needed.Thank you very much for your favorable consideration!推荐信范文语言学No. 20, Building BJ Science & Technology University Beijing, 100083P.R.C.XXX, X 20XXDear SirMadam:Ms. Hao has asked me to recommend her for admission to graduate study in the field of linguistics at your university. I am more than happy to do so.Since I am the person in charge of teaching and scientific research, I know Ms. Hao very well. In the summer of 19XX, we selected her to the staff from among 20 other job hunters. Her excellent work proves that our decision to employ her was correct. When you first met her, you may consider her a typical oriental girl always with a shy smile, but if you know her better, you will find that she is a cheerful and thoughtful young lady. Fo