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2022年高考英语大二轮复习讲与练（通用版）25应用文表达升级（求助信、建议信、询问信及回复询问）【高频考点回顾】L询问信题型简记三段式谋篇思路询问信是针对某项活动或相关情况，请求收 件人或收信机构介绍所询问的信息的书信体 应用文首段：自我介绍，说明要询问的活动或某情 况主体段落：提出要询问的某项情况或某项活 动的几个方面的问题尾段：希望对方回复，表示感谢【总分值句背诵】开头句1. I have seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your six -week English course.我看了你们的广告，我想更多地了解你们为期六周的英语课程的情况。2.I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning .我写信想看看你是否能提供关于的具体信息。3.1 wonder if you could provide some specific information about 我想知道你是否能提供一些关于的具体信息。4.1 wonder/am wondering if you could/would let me know something about.不知道你是否能够告知有关的情况。中句1.1 would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.我想知道我上这个课程需要付多少钱，是否提供食宿。6. Another point I am not certain about is .我还不确定的另外一点是结尾句7. Could you be so kind as to send me some . on the above-mentioned aspects?能否针对上述问题寄些相关的给我？8. Thank you for your kindness, and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.谢谢你的好意，你对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。【范文例如】Dear Elizabeth,I'm the president of the Student Union of our school. Delighted that your group will come for a visit, I'd like to【参考范文】Dear Tom,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. With the college entrance examination approaching, I feel great psychological pressure. So I'm writing to you, asking for help on how to relieve the pressure and get excellent results in the college entrance examination.I'm encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don't want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.Faced with the above problems, I'm anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校心理老师Tom写一封信，求助如何缓解压力，在 高考中取得优异成绩。1 .词汇积累即将到来：at hand/aroung the corner 寻求帮助：ask for help/turn to sb. for help 使某人失望：make sb. sad/disappointed/upset 渴望做某事：be eager to do/be anxious to do/can't wait to do 2 .句式拓展句式优化原句： First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. 优化后：First, spending much time on my homework, I hardly have time to take sports.5.假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy即将到你所在的中学做一年交换生，想提前了解一些情况，故写信 向你求助。请你给他写一封回信，提供有关天气、当地饮食习惯、学校生活等方面的信息。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Andy,I'm glad to hear that you are coming to study with us for a year as an exchange student. Please allow me to give you some information that may help to make your stay here more pleasant.First, the weather will be very changeable in the following days with temperatures between 15 and 30 according to the forecast. Therefore, you need to bring some coats in case of rain. Second, as for food, we mainly eat a variety of wheat-flour products and rice. Of course fresh fruit, vegetables and all kinds of meat are also available. Finally, you may find teachers here talk more in class and you will need to get used to longer school hours. Remember, whatever problems you have, we are all willing to help.Looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Andy回一封信，提供有关天气、当地饮食习惯、学校生活等方面的信息。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1 .欢迎其来学校做交换生；.介绍相关信息；2 .表示期待。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）study with； according to； in case of； as for； a variety of ； all kinds of； in class； get used to； be willing to； look forward to第三步：连词成句.Fm glad to hear that you are coming to study with us for a year as an exchange student.1 .Please allow me to give you some information that may help to make your stay here more pleasant.2 .First, the weather will be very changeable in the following days with temperatures between 15 and 30 according to the forecast.3 .Therefore, you need to bring some coats in case of rain.4 .Second, as for food, we mainly eat a variety of wheat-flour products and rice.5 .Of course fresh fruit, vegetables and all kinds of meat are also available.7 .Finally, you may find teachers here talk more in class and you will need to get used to longer school hours.8 .Remember, whatever problems you have, we are all willing to help.9 .Looking forward to meeting you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）.本文使用 了 表文章结构顺序的衔接词：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second. And then, Finally, In the end, At last1 .本文也使用了表因果关系的衔接词：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，6,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按以下要点写一封信：1 .本人简介；.求助内容；2 .约定时间注意：1.词数80左右；3 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Pm writing to ask for help.I came here last month and find the courses interesting. However, I have some difficulty with note-taking. Besides, I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students. Therefore, Tm eager to get help from you. I am available on Tuesday morning and Friday afternoon. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here is my e-mail address . And my phone number is 12345678.Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua 【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。李华学习遇到困难，希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助，写信预约。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一局部是文章的开头段，本人简介，并说明写邮件的原因；第二局部是支持段，说明求助内容，并约定 时间；第三局部是结尾段，希望得到对方答复。要求：1 .本人简介，并说明写信的原因：希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助.说明求助内容并约定时间求助内容：做笔记有困难，不知如何使用图书馆约定时间：周二上午或周五下午2 希望得到对方答复。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)a Chinese student； take summer courses； ask for help； find the courses interesting； have some difficulty with.； have no idea of； provide . fbr sb.； be eager to； be available第三步：连词成句(l)Fm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.(2)rm writing to ask for help.(3)1 came here last month and find the courses interesting.(4)1 have some difficulty with note-taking.(5)1 have no idea of how to use the library.(6)1 was told the Learning Center provides help for students.(7)1'm eager to get help from you.(8)1 am available on Tuesday morning and Friday afternoon.(9)Please let me know which day is OK with you.(10)You may e-mail or phone me.(ll)Here is my e-mail address .(12)My phone number is 12345678.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇.表递进关系：besides1 .表转折关系：however3,表因果关系：therefore7.假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件，询问怎样才能与同学和睦相处。请你根据要点提示给 Tom回一封电子邮件，提出你的建议。1 .尊重别人；.宽宏大量；2 .原谅别人的过错。写作要求：1 .词数80左右；.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：心胸开阔的 broad-minded adj.Dear Tom,Yours,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Tom,You have asked me for my advice on how to get along well with other students. My suggestions are as follows.To begin with, we should keep it in mind that any good relationship is based on understanding, trust and respect. As long as we treat them sincerely, we are sure to gain their respect in return. Whafs more, we should be broad-minded, which means that we should respect opinions and behavior that are different from ours. Last but not least, it is also necessary to stand in others' shoes and learn to forgive their faults.I hope you will take my suggestions into serious account. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Tom写封回信，就“如何与学生和睦相处”提出自 己的建议。1 .词汇积累建议：tipadvice/suggestioni己住：rememberkeep it in mind诚挚地：genuinely一sincerely考虑：consider一 take.into account.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： My suggestions are as follows.拓展句：Since I have encountered the same situation and I survived, my suggestions are as follows.8.假定你是李华，你们学校负责英语角的外教老师要为学生们购买一些英语方面的书籍，现在征集学生们 的意见。请写一封信提出自己的建议，内容包括：1 .写信的目的；.个人建议及理由；2 .希望建议被采纳。注意：1 .词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2 .信的开头已为你写好。Dear teachers,I'm Li Hua, a student in our school. Knowing that the teacher in charge of our school English corner wants to buy us some books about English,【参考范文】Dear teachers,I'm Li Hua, a student in our school. Knowing that the teacher in charge of our school English corner wants to buy us some books about English, I am writing to express my opinions about what books you should buy.First of all, interest is most important for learning English, so the books should be interesting. Second, many students' English is poor so you should buy some English books including simple English words and sentences. Last, you should buy some classic English novels so that the students can enjoy the beauty of real English.I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给负责英语角的外教老师写信，就购买英语方面的书籍 一事提出一些建议。1 .词汇积累购买，采购：buy - purchase看法，观点：opinion 一 idea考虑至ll： take.into consideration 一 take.into account建议：suggestion > advice.句式拓展原句：First of all, interest is most important for learning English, so the books should be interesting.拓展句：First of all, interest is most important for learning English, so the books you buy should be interesting. know something specific before your arrival to make your visit go smoothly.To begin with, I would appreciate it if you could share your schcdule （如果你告知你们的日程我将 非常感激），in which case we could get prepared for it accordingly. Whafs more, we would like to know if there is something that any of you are allergic to. Last but not least, I'd also like to know whether you have any other speciaLrequest （我还想知道您是否有其他特殊要求）.Your early replY to thisetter wiH be highly appreciated （我将十分感激您的尽早回复）.Yours,Li Hua2 .回复询问信题型简记三段式谋篇思路回复询问信常用于回复对方询问有关中国文 化习俗、礼仪或学校活动等方面的书信体应 用文首段：说明回信目的主体段落：具体介绍与礼仪、文化习俗或学校某活动有关的信息尾段：表达祝愿或邀请对方体验某习俗或活动【总分值句背诵】开头句1. Delighted to know you show great interest in .（某文化习俗/：舌动）,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.很高兴得知你对兴趣浓厚，我写信告诉你相关细节。2. Learning that you are interested in .（某传统文化/：舌动）,Fd like to/am writing to share with you some details.得知你对很感兴趣，我想/写信告诉你一些细节。3. As for your last letter asking aboutPm delighted to tell you something in detail.对于你在上封信中问及的，我很高兴地告诉你一些详细的情况。中句4. The dumpling is a traditional food in China, which has a long history.饺子是中国的传统食物，历史悠久。5. It is the activity that adds to our understanding of the history and development of our city.就是这次活动使我们更好地了解我市的历史和开展。6. Through this activity I realize that small things can make a real difference.通过这次活动我认识到小的事情也会起到重要的作用。结尾句7. Pm convinced you will have a good time/enjoy yourself.我相信你会玩得开心。8. Do come to China and experience the traditions and customs in person.务必来中国亲自体验这些传统风俗。【范文例如】（2018全国卷I ）Dear Terry,How is everything going? It's great to learn you are invited to a Chinese friend's home. As for some Chinese table manners,Here is some relevant information （下面是一些相关信息）.Firstly, arrive on time or a little earlier because being punctual is considered polite in China. Besides, if you'd like to bring a gift,fresh fmits will be a good choice （新鲜的水果将是不错的选择）.Most importantly, at table, it is the elderly who are usually the first to eat since they are well respected in China. If they insist on asking you to eat first, just go ahead.Just relax and you will enjoy yourself （放松, 你会玩得开心的）.Yours,Li Hua2 .求助信题型简记三段式谋篇思路求助信应开门见山，直截了当说明自己遇到 的难题或困惑，并向对方求助。应注意：态 度要诚恳，语气委婉。2018年浙江高考11月 卷考查求助信首段：自我介绍，说明写信目的主体段落：具体陈述请求的内容，请对方帮忙尾段：希望收信人提供帮助，并致谢【总分值句背诵】句1. I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour我写信是想问您能否帮助我。2. I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.很抱歉打搅您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。3. I have some difficulty in doing .which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。中句2.1 can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。5. Faced with/Facing so many difHculties, I have to turn to you for help.面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。6.1 don't feel quite accustomed to the life here.我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。结尾句7. I would be very grateful if you could help me /! would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and .如果您能帮助我我会非常感激。8. rd appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account.如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。【范文例如】（2018浙江高考）Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Li Hua, a passenger of your flight FL735 from Hangzhou to London this afternoon. Unfortunately, I found my wallet lost when arriving at the airport of London. Therefore, I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favour to find my wallet back （我 写信问 您是否 能帮我 找到钱包）.My lost wallet is red with my name attached to the back, which contains my ID card and two bank cards. I am very anxious about it and wondering whether it was left aboard.Fd appreciate it JLyou could take the trouble to help me find it （如果您能费心帮我找至ll钱包，我将 不胜感激）.You can reach me by calling 097 83654.rm eager for your timely help （我渴望您及时的帮助）.Yours,Li Hua4.建议信题型简记三段式谋篇思路建议信是写给某人或某个组织就某事或其服 务改进方面提出建议和忠告的应用文。建议 信应目的明确，合情合理。2019年北京高考 考查建议信首段：说明写信缘由主体段落：陈述具体的建议和理由 尾段：希望建议被考虑和采用【总分值句背诵】1. Since/Now that you are worried about the cultural differences, I'm writing to/I'd like to offer some suggestions about how to .因为你担忧文化差异，我写信/我想就如何提些建议。2. I am sorry to learn/know that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.得知你现在与他人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独，我很难过。中句3. In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.另外，看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。这样做会使你自己平静下来。4. rd like to suggest/advise that you should make use of time to master the present subjects.我建议你利用时间掌握现在的课程。5. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily. 只有用这种方式，你才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易适应这里的生活。6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important. 至于如何与同学相处，记住，友善很重要。结尾句6.1 hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.我希望你会发现这些方法有用/实用/有帮助。8.1 am convinced that with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.我相信，有了你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。【范文例如】Dear James,Knowing youTe having such a tough time at the moment,feel very sorry （得知你现在彳艮难，我彳艮 难过）.Actually, everyone may have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong. Therefore, it's unnecessary to be wonied. The following are my suggestions.To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.Another effective suggestion ishat you take more physicalexercise （另外 一条有效的建议是你应该多锻炼），which can lift your spirits. Additionally, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.I hope my suggestions will be helpful （希望我的建议有用）.Yours,Li Hua【高频考点强化】