高考英语书面表达—邀请信学习课件.ppt
高考书面表达邀请信,A Letter of Invitation,一、观察学习并思考:如何写一封邀请信? 段落结构? 内容构成? 语言运用? 连贯性? 语气与得体性?(上级,长辈,朋友间?) 增分亮点?,假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛,希望附近某大学外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。 英语演讲比赛 主题:人与自然 时间:6月15日下午2:00-5:00 地点:501教室 赛选手:10名学生 联系人:李华(电话:44876655) Dear Ms.Smith, I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. _ Best wishes to you. Li Hua,Dear Ms.Smith, I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge. The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will be ten students taking part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Li Hua,假设你是李华,暑假通常你会和Lisa一起去度假。今 年你们打算邀请在北京学习的美国朋友Ben和你们去海 南三亚度假。请根据下面的要点写一封email向Ben 发出邀请。 要点: 1海南三亚度假两周;2.参加一周的潜水课程;3周四之前回复是否加入; 4Lisa负责预订航班和酒店。 注意: 1词数为100左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 Dear Ben, Time goes fast. Another summer is coming again. _ Yours, Li Hua,Dear Ben, Time goes fast. Another summer is coming again. Lisa and I will go on vacation as usual. We always want to go to Sanya in Hainan Province and have planned to spend two weeks there. We would be delighted if you could join us on this trip. The first week we will take a diving course. Just imagine swimming under water with the fishes! I cant wait! Dont worry about the details, as Lisa will take care of booking the plane tickets and reserving the hotel. If you want to participate then I need you to reply by Thursday. We hope you decide to come along. It will be wonderful to see you again and we will have a great time. Yours, Li Hua,邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,包含以下几个方面:,1. 邀请对方参加活动(内容、时间和地点); 2. 与该活动有关的注意事项; 3. 期待对方接受邀请,并可表示感谢。,提炼邀请信格式模板: Dear _, How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a _ (内容) at/in _ (地点) on _ (时间). We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us. The _(activity) will start at _ (具体时间). This will be followed by a _ (进一步的安排)At around _ (时间), _ (另一个安排) Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? My phone number is _I really hope you can make it. Looking forward to _ Yours sincerely, Li Ming, 词句模板 1段首常用语: (1) I am writing to invite you to (2) I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in (3) I wonder if you can come (4) How would you like to join us in? (5)We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us.,2段尾常用语: (1)Would you please drop me a line(写信给我) to let me know when it it covenient for you? (2)Your participation will surely add color to the activity. (3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. (4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.,第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 1主题:环境保护; 2展览时间; 3投稿邮箱:. 注意: 1词数100左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,二、修改提升自己的作文,1、认真审题,确立话题,归纳要点,主题:切中题意,切忌跑题 层次:一般是三大层次,忌“挤牙膏”式,想到哪儿写到哪儿,缺乏全局观念。 格式: 人称: 时态:,文字提纲式作文写作指导:,“邀请外国朋友参加摄影展”,发出邀请注意事项希望接受邀请并感谢,书信,不要写成“求助信”,第一第二人称,将来时为主,2. 理顺要点,增加细节,连贯表达,适当增加细节:,为什么发出邀请?,作品优秀 呼吁环保 有机会与更多的摄影爱好者交流学习 ,理顺要点:简单引出有摄影展-邀请参展为什么邀请注意事项-希望接受邀请,发挥有度:围绕主题,切忌游离主题的任意发挥,注意字数,3. 化解难点,灵活表达,4. 错落有致,多用短语句型, 连接恰当,遇到难以表述的内容,从另一个角度运用自己学过的熟悉的知识去灵活表达,同样能写出想要表达的内容。,投稿截止日期:,send tobefore,错落有致: 句型多变,简单句并列句复合句交叉使用;使用高级框架结构的句子。 连接恰当: 使用恰当的关联词、过渡句等。,提供作品:,take part in/ participate in,此文主体段落使用 first, second, third,简单引出有摄影展-邀请参展为什么邀请注意事项-希望接受邀请,简单引出有摄影展,will hold an International High School student Photography Show,will be held by,邀请参展,invite sb. to do,take part in/ participate in,submit/hand in some works for the show/exhibition,Knowing that you are interested in/fond of taking photos, I am writing to,When I learned the news that, you are the very person to come into my mind.,为什么邀请,impress sb. deeply leave a deep impression on sb.,作品优秀,I bet that the visitors will be amazed at your distinguished works.,I have never seen a more outstanding photographer than you. I have never seen more impressive photos than yours.,have a talent for a talented/giftedphotographer,呼吁环保,motivate/encourage/inspire sb. to do,appeal to sb. to do,have some good influence on,Your works are bound to arouse/strengthen peoples awareness of environmental protection.,take actions to protect our environment,注意事项,The exhibition will start on, lastingdays.,You are expected to hand in your photos before/within,sendto,You can submit your entries(参赛作品) by email and our e-mail address is,希望接受邀请,5. 查漏补缺,修正错误,誊写清楚,We are looking forward to seeing your distinguished works.,I would like to meet you at the exhibition and please let me know your decision soon.,Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lihua,