高考英语书面表达训练：05 网络-（含答案）.doc

专题05 网络1（2021·河北衡水中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，当今网络已经把世界变成了真正的“全球村”，请你给某报社写一封信，就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.网络对教育的影响（利与弊）；2.你的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。2（2021·宁夏·银川一中高一期中）假定你是李华，由于疫情，你的美国朋友Tom正在上网课，他在邮件中向你询问如何提高上网课的效率。请你用英语给他写封回信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 上网课时，远离其他电子设备，专心听课。2. 制定学习计划，合理规划时间。3. 多和老师同学沟通。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：疫情 pandemic网课 online course 效率 efficiency 电子设备 electronic deviceDear Tom,_Yours,Li Hua3（2021·浙江台州·高二期中）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Charles被一所大学录取，但由于疫情，他正在犹豫是否应该通过网上课程来学习。得知你上过网课，他写信向你寻求建议，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.远程学习的优点和缺点：2.你的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（疫情：epidemic）_4（2021·吉林农安·高二期末）假如你是李华，在新冠肺炎(COVID-19)疫情期间，你的美国笔友Tom也在家上网课。他想了解你上网课的体会，请你给他写一封电子邮件，说明你的感受与想法。要点：1.网课对你的帮助；2.网课的缺陷；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：online class网课；additionally另外；self-control自我控制；interaction互动Dear Tom,How are things going with you?_Yours,Li Hua5（2022·河北武邑中学高一期末）自本学期开学以来，受多次新冠疫情的影响，学生不得不在家中上网课。请你为校刊写一篇短文，叙述你对网课的看法。内容如下：1. 网课背景；2. 网课的利与弊；3. 你应对弊端的做法（至少两点）。注意：1. 不需要写标题；2. 词数80左右；3. 参考词汇：网课 online classes；新冠疫情 COVID-196（2021·甘肃·天水市第一中学高一阶段练习）新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间，学生停课不停学，在家进行了网课学习。现你校英文报以Study Online为主题征文，了解学生的网课学习情况。请根据以下要点写稿参加：1.网络学习的利弊；2.个人观点与看法。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：新冠病毒肺炎COVID-19注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；7（2021·浙江浙江·高三阶段练习）随着互联网的发展，许多网络课堂应运而生。假如你是李华，学校拟举办一场英文演讲比赛，现面向全校学生征文，文章的题目是“网络课堂”，请以The online course为题写一篇演讲稿，主要内容如下：1.简析网络课堂的好处；2.简析网络课堂的坏处；3.你认为网络课堂未来的发展前景怎么样。The online course_8（2021·全国·高三专题练习）学校英语报举行主题为“关于线上上课”的征文比赛。请你写篇短文参赛，谈谈你对 “线上上课”的看法。要点如下：1.“线上上课”的优点；2.“线上上课”的缺点。注意:1.标题和开头已为你写好；2.词数100左右。On Online LearningWith the introduction of the Internet, many changes have taken place in our lives._9（2021·广东中山·高一期末）你班将举办主题为"How to Stay Safe Online"的英语沙龙活动。请你结合自身体会拟写一份英语发言稿，内容包括：1.健康上网，远离不良网站和信息；2.控制上网时间，注意自我保护。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.发言稿开头已为你写好Hello, everyone! It's my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online._10（2021·全国·高三二模）假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的美国笔友 Jim 对你校社团的近期活动非常感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封信，向他介绍你们社团为边远地区的学生提供在线课程的情况。具体内容包括：1. 该活动的目的；2. 该活动涉及的内容；3. 你参与该活动的感受。注意：1. 词数不少于 50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：在线课程 online coursesDear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua参考答案：1Dear Sir/ Madam,The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education. Here, I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one.The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses. Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs regardless of time and space. As a result, learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easier than ever. The downside is just as noticeable. Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults. And parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某报社写一封信，就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈考生的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累转换：transform turn积极的：positive active困惑：puzzle confuse建议：suggest advise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education.拓展句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, which is altering all aspects of our life, especially education.【点睛】【高分句型1】Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.（运用了关系代词that、关系副词where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults.（运用了that引导宾语从句）2Dear Tom，Im sorry to learn that you need to take the online course because of the pandemic. When taking the online course, improving your study efficiency is of great importance. Im writing this e-mail with the purpose of offering some useful suggestions to you. To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. In addition, it is a good idea to make a study schedule, which can help you make better use of your time. By doing so, Im sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved. Last but not the least, why not keep frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face. The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of your time. Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the pandemic.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给由于疫情你正在上网课的美国朋友Tom写封回信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累重要：important of great importance有用的：helpful useful建议：advice suggestion首先：Firstly = To begin with2.句式拓展简单句变为复合句原句：By doing so, Im sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved.拓展句：If you do this, I'm sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved.【点睛】高分句型1 To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型2 The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of your time.这句话运用了the+比较级，the+比较级的结构。3Dear Charles,Congratulations on your success! Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic, I'm writing to offer you some advice.Admittedly, we can benefit a lot from distance education. For example, we don't need to worry about getting infected with novel coronavirus or getting stuck in traffic. However, distance learning requires self-discipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance. Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills. Therefore, I suggest you complete your degree at university instead of studying at home.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经被大学录取正在犹豫是否应该通过网上课程来学习的英国笔友Charles一些建议，就网课学习谈谈利弊，给予相关建议。【详解】1.词汇积累了解到：learnknow建议：suggestionadvice适于：be fit forbe suitable for机会：chanceopportunity2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills.拓展句：Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, which makes it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic, I'm writing to offer you some advice. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和whether引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】However, distance learning requires self-discipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)4Dear Tom,How are things going with you? Hearing that you are also having online classes at home, I'd like to share with you my opinion about it.Since the outbreak of the COVID-19, we have experienced more than a month of online classes, which have benefited us a lot. First, it is a good opportunity to improve our ability of self-control. Additionally, we can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions. However, online classes also have disadvantages. There is a lack of learning atmosphere just like in the classroom. Sometimes you may get bored easily. I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates. I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，说明你在家上网课的感受与想法。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态： 一般现在时 结构：总分法第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，说明你在家上网课的感受和想法；第三部分是结尾段，希望得到对方的答复。 要求：1. 说明写信的原因：和Tom分享你在家上网课的感受2. 说明你在家上网课的感受和想法 网课对你的帮助：提高自我控制能力，能与老师随时沟通 网课的缺陷：缺少在课堂的学习氛围，会感到无聊 你的建议：多和同学互动效果会更好3.希望得到答复 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） have online classes；share sth. with sb.；the outbreak of the COVID-19；benefit sb.；a good opportunity to do；communicate with；disadvantage；a lack of；get bored 第三步：连词成句(1) Hearing that you are also having online classes at home, I'd like to share with you my opinion about it.(2) Since the outbreak of the COVID-19, we have experienced more than a month of online classes.(3) Online classes have benefited us a lot. (4) It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of self-control. (5) We can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions. (6) Online classes also have disadvantages. (7) There is a lack of learning atmosphere online. (8) Sometimes you may get bored easily. (9) I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates. (10) I am looking forward to hearing from you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇 1.表文章结构顺序：first additionally2.表转折对比关系：however【点睛】高分句型1We have experienced more than a month of online classes, which have benefited us a lot.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of self-control.（it作形式主语的句式）5Due to the frequent outbreaks of COVID-19 since the beginning of this term, we have to spend a long time learning online.Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students academic progress. But the negative aspects are also apparent. For one thing, lacking face-to-face interaction, online classes make it easier for students who are poor at self-discipline to be distracted. For another, long time exposure to the Internet environment has a negative effect on our health.To cope with the problems, I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively. During leisure time, I often do indoor exercise to keep fit.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就因为疫情不得不在家上网课这一事，发表自己对网课的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累因为：owing to/because ofdue to明显的：obviousapparent影响：influenceeffect处理：deal withcope with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students academic progress.拓展句：There is no doubt that online classes are the perfect solution to ensure students academic progress.【点睛】【高分句型1】For one thing, lacking face-to-face interaction, online classes make it easier for students who are poor at self-discipline to be distracted. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】To cope with the problems, I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语和过去分词短语作后置定语)6 Study OnlineWith the outbreak of the COVID-19, a lot of students have to study online at home. As for online studying, it has two sides. On the one hand, it not only can release teachers from repeating the same contents and students can replay the teaching materials as well. On the other hand, online teaching lacks teacher-student interactions and people doubt whether students have self-discipline without supervision.As far as Im concerned, although online classes are a better option when it comes to the special situation at the moment, I prefer to study in class because what students acquire at school is more than knowledge.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间，学生停课不停学，在家进行了网课学习。现你校英文报以Study Online为主题征文，了解学生的网课学习情况。【详解】1.词汇积累解放：free fromrelease from获得：obtainacquire选择：choiceoption目前：at presentat the moment2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：On the other hand, online teaching lacks teacher-student interactions and people doubt whether students have self-discipline without supervision.拓展句：On the other hand, since online teaching lacks teacher-student interactions, peopl