2015届高考英语二轮复习高效书面表达专题卷10Word版含解析.doc

2015届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷10（含解析）1学校体育课与体育锻炼现代社会人们越来越重视健康和体育锻炼，学校更是重视体育课的开设，规定高中生体育课至少两节。请根据以下提示写一篇关于短文：写作内容1. 你校每周有几节体育课？2. 体育课的内容；3. 你校另外还有哪些体育锻炼形式；4. 谈谈你或的同学对体育锻炼的看法和做法。2书面表达（满分30分） 保持健康的方法题目要求：健康对我们任何人来说都是最为重要的。为了保持健康，我们需要一些普通的知识要点如下：1注意你的饮食。吃大量的水果和蔬菜, 不要吃太多富含脂肪的食物2经常性的锻炼身体3养成良好的生活习惯，保证睡眠，不抽烟要求：1词数100左右。 2可适当添加细节。 3开头已给出，不计入总词数。The Ways to Stay HealthyHealth is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge._ 3假如你是高一学生王刚，在放寒假之前你想写一封信给你的英文老师Mrs. Chen。信的内容应包括以下几个方面： 1） Mrs. Chen的课堂生动有趣，自己进步很大；2） 自己在学习中的困难；3） 给老师的教学建议(至少两条)；注意：1）不要逐条翻译;2）字数为120左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3）不得使用真实姓名。Dear Mrs. Chen, How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year._Best wishes to you! Yours, Wang Gang4请用英语写一篇100个词左右的短文，记述一件发生在你身上（边）的助人为乐的事迹。要求如下：1. 描述事情经过； 2. 谈谈你的感想。_5最近，你们班上将要组织一场以 “To be self-confident” 为题的主题班会。你是英语课代表，请根据以下内容准备一篇120词左右的文章作为发言稿。提示：1. 简述自信的重要性。2. 假设你以前缺乏信心(1) 谁给了你鼓励？ （2）什么事让你改变？3. 适当加入自己的评论试卷第2页，总2页参考答案 1Nowadays people focus more and more on the physical training, and the students in the school especially enjoy more physical training. We high school students have two PE classes every week and we have many forms of training, such as running, playing basketball, football, table tennis, and so on. Besides, some students get up early in the morning to run, some even run to school every day, many boy students often play basketball or football and after school or at weekend. In fact, we students all like to have PE classes very much. But sometimes we are so busy with our studies that we have little time to take part in sports.【解析】_2参考范文：The Ways to Stay Healthy Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.      Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Dont have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Dont drink too much coffee, either.      Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who dont.      Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Over work and little sleep will lead to illness. Whats more, stay away from cigarettes.      These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy. 【解析】略3Dear Mrs. Chen, How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.To begin with, I want to say thanks to you for your hard work . Besides, we all enjoy your lively and interesting class. And with your help, we have made such great progress in English. To be honest, I still have some puzzles. I cant keep so many new words in mind and dont know how to use them correctly. Whats more, grammar is a big problem to me. I often mix up its rules. Would you please help me with these problems? Mrs. Chen, as we hope to improve our listening ability, could you please speak more English in Class? And we cant bear so much homework of all the subjects, so would you please reduce the amount of English homework? Best wishes to you! Yours, Wang Gang【解析】试题分析：这是一篇英文书信，写一封信给你的英文老师Mrs. Chen。信的开头结尾都已经给出了，只要写好正文，正文的内容是：1） Mrs. Chen的课堂生动有趣，自己进步很大；2） 自己在学习中的困难；3） 给老师的教学建议(至少两条)；写信与写文章一样，要分段写，每段有一个中心思想，内容要表达清楚，语言要简单明了，态度要诚恳礼貌。给亲友的信还应亲切热情。考试时必须把规定的内容写清楚。正文结束时，还可写一两句表达心愿的话，如：Best wishes to you Remember me to your family Hoping to hear from you soon等。考点:考查英文书信点评;写作正文时就和写提纲作文一样，要点不能省略，要完全包括在内。要注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇和短语，也可以使用不同的句式。4One possible version：Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment. Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman. Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe wed have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于记叙文的写作范畴,在写作时要注意记论文的六要素,即时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等,都要在文中给予清楚明白地表达。在叙述事情经过时，要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等,但是要详略得当,分清主次。同时要注意使用一般过去时来叙述过去发生的事情,而且应使用第一人称。.此外要尽量发挥想象力,使用自己熟悉的词语与句型将其扩展成篇,扩展时要注意要求的字数，防止由于字数不够而引起的扣分。【亮点说明】文章在结构安排上简单明了,使用两个段落分别讲述发生的事情和自己的感受, 结构清晰,层次分明。作者使用了多种句式使文章语言生动,形象.富于变化,比如疑问句Why not help him collect litter? 让步状语从句Dog-tired as I was,定语从句 As the saying goes,等。.此外谚语helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高级词汇 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮点,显示了作者词汇的丰富和对词语的准确把握能力.考点：考查话题作文.5Boys and Girls,Life is but a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I would like to say, “ No matter what happens, be self-confident.”Id like to share my own experience with you. When I was 14, I suffered from a lack of confidence. I didnt dare to answer teachers questions in class and was afraid to speak in public. Later, something happened and changed my life. It was a speech contest held at our school. My mother persuaded me to participate, and she had great confidence in me. I chose a topic most appropriate to meSelf-confidence and Success. I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror. With my mothers great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!Since then, I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success. So, dear friends, be self-confident and have a brighter future.Thank you!【解析】略第 5 页 共 5 页