高考英语新题型策略指导：应用文写作（二）课件.pptx
高考新题型策略指导应用文写作（二）,一、 典例分析,题型示例1,假如你是李华，你以前一直对英语语法和写作感到困惑，李老师给了你很好的建议和帮助，甚至帮你训练口语。现在你的英语成绩进步很大，请写封信感谢李老师。,Problems?,Grading standards 第五档（1315分） 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,Principles of score 评分原则 3.词数少于60和多余100的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,content,language,coherence,handwriting,What makes perfect writing?,1. Complete content 内容完整,3. Advanced language 语言高级,2. Clear coherence 条理清晰,Complete in Content (内容完整),01,What makes perfect writing?,二、应用实践,（2019全国卷1）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者， 内容包括： 1.写信目的 2.个人优势 3.能做的事情,Beginning,Body,Ending,a letter of application,4. Conclusion (add by yourself),Complete content：1.Structure,Beginning（background+purpose）,I am Li Hua and I am delighted to know that volunteers are needed for a Chinese painting exhibition.,Im writing to_.,apply for the position,Complete content：2.Beginning,应用文开头格式 . Im writing to.,交代背景,简介题干信息 + 写明来意，体现文体,假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览, 写一封信申请做志愿者。,Id appreciate it if you could consider my application.,Ending (Thanks/Hope/Expectations),Complete content：3.Ending,More examples,More examples,More examples,Student A: 个人优势; 能做的事情 First, I am interested in Chinese paintings. Also, I can communicate with others in English fluently. Student B: 个人优势; 能做的事情 First, I am interested in Chinese paintings so my related knowledge will help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. Also, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.,details explaining the result,details explaining the reason,2 main points,2 main points,Pair work:Compare and see which is better? Why?,Complete content：4.Body,Body,1. main point,2. main point,3. ,How can we come up with the supporting details in Body part?,reason,result,example,effect,How?,Fill in the blanks with proper conjunctions.,Visiting a Chinese family can be a very good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Here are some advice. _, Chinese people are not very strict with being punctual, _ you dont have to worry about the time of arrival. I suggest that you arrive five to ten minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. _, it would be better if you could bring some gifts, _ make sure you wouldnt bring a watch or a clock. _, table manners are what you should pay attention to. _, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food.,To begin with,so,In addition,but,Lastly,For example,Clear coherence (条理清晰),What makes perfect writing?,More examples:,（一）用于“开始”词汇有：,Firstly, first of all, in the first place, above all, to begin with,(二) 表示“递进”： besides, in addition, whats more, moreover, furthermore, meanwhile, last but not least, lastly, finally,Poor vocabulary and sentence patterns!,Problems?,题型示例2,问题描述：语言平淡，缺乏亮点 应用文写作得分得分低的写作特点： 1.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子 2.仅使用简单的词或短语 3.句式单一，不会使用从句、非谓语、倒装句、强调等句型。,Advanced language (语言高级),What makes perfect writing?,策略1多用高级表达方式，少用普通表达方式,策略1多用高级表达方式，少用普通表达方式,The film Ne Zha is popular among people. It makes people more interested in Chinese culture.,The film Ne Zha, _, makes people more interested in Chinese culture. The film Ne Zha is popular among people, _ people more interested in Chinese culture.,which is popular among people,making,策略2：用高级句型,Change into relative clause定语从句.,Change into non-finite verbs非谓语.,Many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease. Their action really touched me.,_ really touched me _ _ many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease. _ _ many doctors _ _ to fight the disease _ touched me.,great efforts,It is,was that,What,that,Change into noun clause名词性从句.,Change into emphatic sentence强调句.,Advanced sentence patterns,Everyone should attach great importance to garbage classification. Then our society will be cleaner.,Everyone should attach great importance to garbage classification _ _our society will be cleaner. _ _ everyone attach great importance to garbage classification _ our society be cleaner.,so that,Only if,will,Change into adverbial clause状语从句.,Change into inverted sentence倒装句.,Advanced sentence patterns,Ways to get advanced sentence patterns,Relative clause 定语从句 Noun clause 名词性从句 Adverbial clause 状语从句 Non-finite verbs非谓语 Inverted sentence倒装句 Emphatic sentence 强调句 .,Summary:,Tip: As we only need to write about 80 words, two or three advanced sentences will be enough.,假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。,Analyses:,Style:,A letter of reply,Paragraphs:,3,三、即时巩固,Paragraph 1: Background+purpose,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗+回复相关信息,In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest toa Chinese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevantdetails.,Paragraph 2: 邮件内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。,Main points:,Conjunctions:,Advanced sentence patterns:,1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。,to begin with, besides, whats more,定语从句；状语从句；非谓语,To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arriveearly, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningfuland interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, like a book or aChinese knot. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoidmaking noises while chewing food.,Last paragraph:,Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have theconfidence that you will have a great time.,祝愿或期望,One possible version,Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest toa Chinese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevantdetails. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arriveearly, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningfuland interesting.,Besides, youd better bring some gifts, like a book or aChinese knot. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoidmaking noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have theconfidence that you will have a great time.Best wishes!,
