1997-2016年度全国卷高等考试真命题英语短文改错汇编(含答案解析).doc

,1997-2016年全国卷英语短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。NMET 1997Dear Bob,Hello.I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. Id like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li HuaNMET 1998My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. NMET 1999The Problem with TelevisionNow I cant watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a days work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settle the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.2000 春季Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. Id like very much come but had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it. Ill spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So Im really sorry that I wont be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. Ill take this chance wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! Yours, Li MingNMET 2000The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didnt matter that I would win or not. When I was in the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.2001年（全国卷II）Like most of my schoolmates. I have either brothers nor sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.2002年（全国卷II）Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows. its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animal. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.2003年（全国卷II）When I first learned write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. she liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one . Their word were a great encouragement to me. 2004年（全国卷II）Dear Ralph,Im a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesnt seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei2005 年（全国卷III）Dear Mr. Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help.Before you came to teach us, I had not interest inEnglish. My pronunciation was terribly. I couldonly speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from yourencouraging words. I will always remember what yousaid, “If you try to, you can be No. 1!” I hope youvehad pleasant journey home and will come to Chinaagain sometimes in the future. I will write againand send you the photos we take together. Yours sincerely, Li Min2006年（全国卷III）An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quick and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.2006年（全国卷II）We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I came in the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. He was looking for a glass the cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, “What can I do? We are guests after all.”2007年（全国卷II）Dear Grandpa,Thank you for your letter. My school is organizing a basketball team and theres just a chance which I can join it. Im little of course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out in the playground in the afternoon with the tree around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing and shout. These are the happier girls Ive ever seen and I m the happiest in all! I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things I m doing at school, but the bell was ringing, so I just have to stop here. Love, Judy2008年（全国卷I）Dear Alice, I have just got some good mews to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. Id like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well. Weve been writing to each for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine youll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could go out do some sightseeing together. Best, Lily2008年（全国卷II）If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture or show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. 2009年（全国卷II）Hi Susan,Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street, I happened to see an accident. The little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope you understand.Thank you!Li Ling2010年（全国卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the firstprize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to dowas to write a story or present it. My teachershave been telling me how great my writing was.So if they had said was true, I would have a chanceof winning the prize. What were better, I had usefulhelp. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman livingnear my house, who was a very much famous writer.He agreed to reading my story and give me someadvices on how to write like a real writer.2010年（全国卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together.Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to showmy best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, weve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school inXinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going toschool. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunchbell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall treeand had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was usedto share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind ofcake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. NowAigulie andI study at different colleges or we can only see each otherduring the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I missthe food and the good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. Yours, Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That wont easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. Whats more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013年新课标2The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in BritainIt is said to have started in the early 1800sHave tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at nightThis custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industryTea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handlesWhen tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habitsThis made for the grow in the porcelain industry2013年 (全国一卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013年 (全国二卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I d