2021年高考英语真题和模拟题分类汇编专题23书面表达新高考含解析.doc

专题23 书面表达（新高考）I、2021年高考真题 （2021·新高考I卷·书面表达）第一节 应用文写作你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。Youth and Me_【答案】Youth and MeIt has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.【解析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。1.词汇积累建立：foundestablish沮丧的：upsetdepressed得到：receiveobtain赏析：enjoyappreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon. 高分句型1 When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)第二节 读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Fathers appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didnt expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【解析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：帮助指导积极献礼感动3.词汇激活行为类帮助：help/assist.指导：guide/conduct.献礼：present a gift/give a gift情绪类.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions.感动：moved/touched高分句型1. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (使用not onlybut (also)句型及强调句型)（2021·浙江卷·书面表达）第一节 应用文写作昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 观展感受；3. 推荐观展。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】 ln order to enrich students after-school life ,an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school litrary.Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art. Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。1. 词汇积累绘画：drawing painting激发：spiritspark欣赏：appreciateadmire欢迎：greetwelcome2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.合并句：The exhibition will last for two weeks,during which every student is welcome to visit.【高分句型1】an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型2】 Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。【高分句型 3】 Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures,but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. not only.but also连接的并列句。第二节 读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses. I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号). The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The pay arrived at last.Paragraph 2：I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.【答案】The pay arrived at last. Although the job was very tiring, I was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work. The toil of labor was forgotten for the time being. I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. “How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income. The next morning, my dads livestock truck started running. I saw my fathers hard-working figure and thought of his words “A jobs a big step to growing up”.I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to think that was fair. I thought, “Ive only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。2. 续写线索：高兴计划不情愿发现奉献自豪3.词汇激活行为类计划：programme/plan.奉献：give/devote发现：see/find情绪类.不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant.自豪地：proudly/with pride 高分句型1. I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. (运用了疑问词加动词不定式作宾语) 高分句型2. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had (that引导的宾语从句以及过去完成进行时)II、2021年高考模拟试题 （2021·诸暨市5月模拟·书面表达）第一节 应用文写作假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧(sitcom)，并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr. Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括:1.提出请求；2.指导内容；3.期待回复。注意:1词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,We are to put on an English sitcom during the Art Festival. So Im writing to ask if you would be kind enough to give us some guidance.The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen. Its plots and lines have been in place, but considering the possible problems, we long for your expertise to polish them. Additionally, the performers being inexperienced, we expect your guidance with performing skills.Your help with the sitcom will be much appreciated. Looking forward to your favorable reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，班级计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧，并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr. Smith给予指导，要求考生给他写一封邮件。1.词汇积累事情：thingsincidents完善：makeperfectpolish此外：What is moreAdditionally好的：goodfavorable2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen. Its plots and lines have been in place, but considering the possible problems, we long for your expertise to polish them.拓展句：The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen, whose plots and lines have been in place, but considering the possible problems, we long for your expertise to polish them. 高分句型1 The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2 So Im writing to ask if you would be kind enough to give us some guidance. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)第二节 读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I reached into my backpack, feeling for my cellphone. I was tired of Aunt Letty talking on and on about her chickens, horses and cows. Worse, I was afraid of having to spend spring break at her farm.In spite of my protest, my parents decided that spending time at the farm would be a great experience for me. My parents both grew up on farms and believed that responsibility, hard work and respect for the land were valuable lessons. “Lessons you need to learn, son,” they said.“So, have you ever ridden a horse?” Aunt Letty asked, trying to turn my attention away from my phone.“Hmmm, no. But Ive seen horses on TV,” I answered, absent-minded.“Well, weve got a nice horse I think youll like. Hercules sounds like a beast, but hes a gentle giant. The other animals have names too, but dont worry, you wont have to remember their names. If you show up at the gate with feed, theyre happy!” she said smiling.I glanced at my aunt, angry that I was expected to work. Vacations were meant for sleeping late, playing video games, and maybe skateboarding. I tried to text a friend.“Phones dont work well out here. With all the hills and valleys, its hard to get a connection.”I continued texting, but she was right there was no cell reception.The next few days were busy. We had breakfast before dawn. Then we went out to the barn to get the feed while the animals waited to be fed. The afternoons were occupied with hauling hay, clean-up, and caring for the animals. The animals depended on Aunt Letty, but they also provided her with affection and necessities such as eggs, milk and cheese.At dusk, when the farm was finally quiet, Aunt Letty stretched her arms out and said, “Just take a deep breath of the sweet country air!” I, exhausted, was unable to appreciate my work.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。On the fourth day, Aunt Letty announced, “Its time to meet Hercules.”_After the ride, time at the farm seemed to be different._【答案】Para 1:On the fourth day, Aunt Letty announced, “Its time to meet Hercules.” “You must be joking!” I responded, a flush of fright sweeping over me. Aunt Letty, grinning, headed to the stable. Then in front of me was Hercules, standing over 2 meters high. A horrible dark giant! I backed away, shooting an angry glance at my aunt. “Oh, man, come on! Hes anything but a beast!” she encoura