2014高考英语 短文改错 2013暑假自测题（1）.doc
2014高考英语短文改错：2013暑假自测题（1）及答案或解析Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.参考答案：SocauseseasilywaitingistheircitiesaTraffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.*结束 Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he wasvery excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.参考答案：Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to soa big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. known anMr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, wholooking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the wascompany, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the idea waitingworkers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he Luckilywas the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give becausethe job to whoever he believed was helpful.*结束 (2010·河南五校联考)After I finished the school this year, I began to1._look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2._found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3._I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4._He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5._studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6._his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7._will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would8._take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9._what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10._答案与解析：1去掉thefinish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。2monthmonthsmonth是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。3interested后加inbe interested in是固定搭配，表示“对感兴趣”。4himhimselfcalling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。5dodid根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。67beatenbeatinga beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。8willwould这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。9surprisedsurpriseto one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。10said后加waswhat he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。 Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.参考答案Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. 1namedRecently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even 4chattingtalking about love affairs online.5.in On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in 6.whereinformations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 informationplace for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it 8 a placewill give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make 9do 10 measuressure that students use cyber cafes positively.*结束短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965 When I was a child, I dreamed of flying in the sky I joined the army in June, 1983 In 1992, I was sent to the air force base In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 . 20090318I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts laterOn Oct15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled around the earth about 14 circle and then returned I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space 参考答案短文改错1farmer改为farmer,s2 去掉1965前面的in 3 an air force base。4 把hardly改为hard5把because改为so6在chosen后加as7 manned8 flew 9 把circle改为circles 10 在have后面加been *结束- 7 -
