高中英语地点写作精选文档.ppt

高中英语地点写作本讲稿第一页，共十九页【写作任务】【写作任务】巴黎是法国的首都，也是一个梦幻般的城市，每年吸引世界巴黎是法国的首都，也是一个梦幻般的城市，每年吸引世界各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点以各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点以Paris为题用英为题用英语写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。语写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。内容要点如下：内容要点如下：1.地理位置：法国北部；地理位置：法国北部；2.人口：大约一千一百万；人口：大约一千一百万；3.气候：不太热也不太冷，春秋天最好；气候：不太热也不太冷，春秋天最好；4.基本情况：欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商业中心。基本情况：欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商业中心。时尚与浪漫之都，很多重大活动在此举行。有悠久的历史和时尚与浪漫之都，很多重大活动在此举行。有悠久的历史和丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔(the Eiffel Tower)、凯旋门凯旋门the Triumphal Arch)和圣母院和圣母院(Old Notre Dame)等。等。注意：注意：1)不要逐条翻译，但是可增加细节，以使文章连贯、不要逐条翻译，但是可增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；通顺；2)词数：词数：120左右左右本讲稿第二页，共十九页根据写作提示，进行根据写作提示，进行适当总结和评论适当总结和评论。准确掌握表示方位的词或短语准确掌握表示方位的词或短语注意说明顺序，详略得当，重点突出注意说明顺序，详略得当，重点突出主要采用主要采用一般现在时一般现在时注意行文的连贯性，要求用适量的注意行文的连贯性，要求用适量的过渡词过渡词。本讲稿第三页，共十九页【范文展示】【范文展示】Paris,a very beautiful city in the world,the capital of France,is located in the north of France.It has a population of about eleven million.It is the second largest city in Europe.As for the weather,it never gets too hot or too cold.And it is at its best during the spring and autumn months.Paris is the culture,education,business center of France.It is a city of fashion and romance.So many important events have been held here.It is well known that Paris is a modern city with a long history and rich tour resources.There are so many places for people to visit.The most famous are the Eiffel Tower,the Triumphal Arch and Old Notre Dame.In a word,Paris is really a great and attractive city.本讲稿第四页，共十九页【思路指导】【思路指导】地方介绍类说明文地方介绍类说明文-旅游景点的描写旅游景点的描写客观介绍景点客观介绍景点locationareaclimatehistoryresident/peoplenatural resourcesbreath-takingscenery本讲稿第五页，共十九页1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（Location）be located inbe situated inlie in坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部stands at the foot of/on the top of 常用词语常用词语本讲稿第六页，共十九页2.介绍人口（介绍人口（Population）:has a population of,（a city）with a population of北京是中国的首都，是一个有北京是中国的首都，是一个有12001200多万人多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,the capital of China,is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.本讲稿第七页，共十九页3.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers（a city）with an area ofsquare kilometers城镇城镇 面积面积 100 100多平方公里多平方公里Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers本讲稿第八页，共十九页4.介绍历史（介绍历史（History）:has a long history(of years)with a long history(of years)历史悠久历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。It is a modern city with a long history.本讲稿第九页，共十九页5.介绍交通（介绍交通（Transportation）take a bus,a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到坐汽车、火车、飞机到交通便利交通便利has convenient transportation（a city）with convenient transportation both on land and water本讲稿第十页，共十九页6.6.名胜古迹名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹：有很多名胜古迹：places of interest/historical spots承德是全国承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是个历史文化名城之一，也是44个个风景名胜之一。风景名胜之一。Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China.本讲稿第十一页，共十九页1.,which is well-known/famous for breath-taking scenery,attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.2You can go on the tours to enjoy the sights,taste the local food,explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and culture.3.is home to.Thus，a walk around is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.4You are sure to have a wonderful time in.5Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed.本讲稿第十二页，共十九页因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误不扣分。因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误不扣分。As far as I know,It is well-known to us all that It iswas that It iswas adj.n.for of sb.to do sth.so that too to with n.prep.v-ing.v-ed.,How adj.adv.subjectbe!Whatadj.n.subjectbe!教师点拨教师点拨本讲稿第十三页，共十九页【模板展示】,averybeautifulcity/countryintheworld,islocatedin.Ithasapopulationofabout.Itisthesecondlargestin.Asfortheweather,it.Itiswellknownthatiswithalonghistoryandrichresources.Therearesomanyplacesforpeopletovisit.Themostfamousare,and.Inaword,isreallyagreatandattractive.本讲稿第十四页，共十九页Writing:WriteashortpassagetointroducetheWestLakeinHangzhouaccordingtosomekeywordsbelow.Hangzhoucapital of Zhejiang Province；old capital of six dynasties（六朝古都）；The West Lake60 square kilometers area;well known both for its picturesque landscape(风景如画)and for cultural heritage wonderful ten-views of the West Lake(西湖十景)White Snake LegendXuxian and Bai Suzhen;a rainy day met on Duanqiao BridgeBai Suzhen borrowed an umbrella from Xuxian,the man she loved本讲稿第十五页，共十九页HangzhouisthecapitalofZhejiangprovinceanditspolitical,economicandculturalcenter.ThecityofHangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChinaandfacestheeastsea.itisfamousforitsbeautifulWestLakewithalonghistory.wheneveryoucometothismoderncityyouwillseemanyparksandsomeplacesofinterestaroundthewestlake.duringtheholidaysorfestivalsorattheweekends,peoplelikeboatingonthewaterorwalkingonthepathsofthewoodsorsittingonthegroundtohaveapicnic.Whatagoodtimetheyhave!sincethepoliticsofthereformingandopeningwerecarriedoutbythegovernmentofHangzhou,plentyoftallbuildingshavebeensetupandgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinthiscity.杭州本讲稿第十六页，共十九页EnlargementWest Lake(in Hangzhou)西湖是我国著名的旅游胜地，被誉为西湖是我国著名的旅游胜地，被誉为“人间天堂人间天堂”。西湖景区由一山（孤山）、两堤（苏堤、白堤）、三岛（阮西湖景区由一山（孤山）、两堤（苏堤、白堤）、三岛（阮公墩、湖心亭、小瀛洲）、十景（曲院风荷、平湖秋月、断公墩、湖心亭、小瀛洲）、十景（曲院风荷、平湖秋月、断桥残雪、柳浪闻莺、雷峰夕照、南屏晚钟、花港观鱼、苏堤桥残雪、柳浪闻莺、雷峰夕照、南屏晚钟、花港观鱼、苏堤春晓、双峰插云、三潭印月）构成。春晓、双峰插云、三潭印月）构成。西湖的美，在于晴中见潋滟，雨中显空蒙。无论雨雪晴西湖的美，在于晴中见潋滟，雨中显空蒙。无论雨雪晴阴，在落霞、烟雾下都能成景；在春花，秋月，夏荷，冬雪阴，在落霞、烟雾下都能成景；在春花，秋月，夏荷，冬雪中各具美态。中各具美态。本讲稿第十七页，共十九页TheWestLakeisafamousfreshwaterlakelocatedinthehistoriccenterofHangzhou,thecapitalofZhejiangprovinceineasternChina.ThelakeisdividedbythecausewaysofST(苏提/蘇堤),BiT(白堤),andYnggngT(杨公堤/楊公堤).Therearenumeroustemples,pagodas,gardens,andartificialislandswithinthelake.TheWestLakehasinfluencedpoetsandpaintersthroughouttheagesforitsnaturalbeautyandhistoricalrelics,andithasbeenamongthemostimportantsourcesofinspirationforChinesegardendesigners,asevidencedbytheimpactithadonvariousChineseclassicalgardens.1ItwasmadeaUNESCOWorldHeritageSitein2011,andwasdescribedtohaveinfluencedgardendesignintherestofChinaaswellasJapanandKoreaoverthecenturies,andreflectsanidealizedfusionbetweenhumansandnature.本讲稿第十八页，共十九页InthefalloftheWestLakeisoneofthematurelandscape.Tenshoreofthesweet-scentedosmanthusfragranceyoureallymakepeopletoandfromthelingering;thelake,thelotusleafastheshylittlegirl,thelowerthehead,wentintohiding,andwaitingforthemtoremindpeopletotakeunderFlanagansLotusthen.Atthistime,HuaZhaolightoftheboat,hummingadittyofleisurely,gentlytakethenextlotusroot.Thatonlyalotusrootit,Baibaipanpang,anakedtruthofDollXiaoPang,peoplelove.Ifyouarefromthebasket,onarandomselection,thebiteonacleanwash,Cuishengsheng,ithasbeenabletotastesweettoyourheart.WestLakeinwinterisnoexception.Althoughtheflowershavetothank,butthelakebottomisclear,theplumblossominfullbloomisverybeautiful;snow,snow-wrapped,theedgeoftheembankmentinthecheerfulchildrensplay,laughter,thesoundXuefei,theco-Together,turnedintoabeautifulsymphony.Ah!WestLake!Youreabright,brightpearlyou!U.S.West本讲稿第十九页，共十九页