五年高考2016届高考英语专题十八书面表达全国通用.doc

专题十八 书面表达20152011年各省市高考题考点一提纲类Writing 1(2015·新课标全国 )假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍。2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约400词； 4.交稿日期：6月28日前。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter，I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Peter，I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have our article before June 28?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li HuaWriting 2(2015·新课标全国)假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结语已为你写好。Dear Lucy， Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Lucy，I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li HuaWriting 3(2014·福建 )如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”Sir Winston Churchill内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词数：120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that 【思路点拨】这是一篇话题类作文。要求根据引语，写出对成功的理解。需要写的话题已经给出，需要我们结合自己的相关经历进行写作。过去的经历，用一般过去时，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。【参考范文】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick to it.Writing 4 (2014·大纲全国)一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. 【思路点拨】1.主题：“十年后的我”；2.内容要点：家庭、工作、业余生活三方面。3.段落层次：适当插入连接词使文章层次分明，并且增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，内容充实。4.亮点说明：适当使用多种句式结构，避免句式单一；恰当使用高级词汇，避免尽用“儿科词汇”以增加文章亮点，提高文章档次。【参考范文】I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twentyeight years old by then.I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child.I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I'll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games.On my holidays，I'll travel around the world.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.Writing 5(2014·重庆) 青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：赞同Susan的看法你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么该礼物的意义期待大家回复注意：1.词数不少于80；2.符合语言规范；3.开头已给出(不计入总词数)。I am a high school student from China. 【参考范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love.It does't matter whether it is expensive or not.What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Years ago，I received a gift from a friend on my birthday，who is now living far away.It delighted me at the sight of it.It was a piece of paper cutting，a Chinese traditional art.With the gift，he included a letter，in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself.It took him several weeks to learn to make it.That's why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.Now，it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom.Whenever I look at it，I couldn't help thinking of my friend.However far away we are，we feel close to each other.So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.Writing 6(2013·重庆)请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。A mother said，“My son is always on the phone，sleeping，out with his friends，or in his room.He never has time to talk to me.”要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；2.紧扣材料，有明确的观点；3.词数不少于60。 【思路点拨】此类文章类型主要以论述的方式为主，需要围绕所提供材料的主题，进行举例论证，表达自己的观点和看法，本文属于半开放式作文，让学生举例并对引文的观点进行论证。该类题目要求学生灵活处理所给材料，做到综合分析，辩证思考，归纳要点，提炼观点，力求论点合理，论据充分，论证缜密。【参考范文】Many children often try to appear independent, communicating with their parents as little as possible, which hurts their parents deeply.I think as a child, young or old, we should tell them something about our friends, how we are going in our study or work.At the same time, we can share some interesting experiences with them, thus reducing their concern about us，including our daily life.What's more, we can pour out our troubles facing us, releasing our pressure from different aspects.After all, parents are our best friends.So please communicate more with them.Writing 7(2013·浙江)请以“One Thing I'm Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情经过；2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。One Thing I'm Proud of 【思路点拨】写作之前，考生需认真审题，明确写作要求，可划分写作要点如下：1.令自己得意的事是什么及叙述事情发展过程(注意时态为过去时)。2.从中得到的启发(一般现在时)。同时注意关联词的选用。【参考范文】One Thing I'm Proud ofI still remember how I became a good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good.Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”Writing 8(2013·陕西)假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。I am an 18yearold middle school student， 【思路点拨】本书面表达要点一目了然，层次清晰。考生可根据要点将文章分为三段进行叙述。此外，重要的是要把握好时态。【参考范文】I am an 18yearold middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that，I began to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment，my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was，I never felt so happy.考点二图画、图表类Writing 1(2015·北京) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：一个面团 a piece of dough面人 dough figurine 【思路点拨】本文是一篇图画作文，用图画的形式展示了一个活动过程。写作时要认真审读四幅图画，理清其内在的逻辑关系，交代清楚活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容；同时运用恰当的过渡词，把四幅图画的内容连成一个有机的整体。【参考范文】 Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【亮点点评】1.本文注意使用了过渡词汇first，then，finally等来衔接句子和段落，使文章更有条理，行文连贯。2.时态把握准确，主要运用了一般过去时，文章上下文时态保持一致。3.恰当运用了高级结构，如非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table.；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 等，让文章靓丽起来。Writing 2(2015·福建) 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。 内容包括：1.描述画面；2.概述其含义；3.谈谈个人感想。 凿壁偷光注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：凿，钻：boreIn the picture， 【思路点拨】本文是一篇漫画类作文，要求根据图画展示内容，写一篇120词左右的短文。写作要点：1.描述图画(一般现在时)2.概述其含义(取自中国古代成语“凿壁偷光”，概述其内容，并渗透“刻苦求学”的思想)3.谈个人感想(根据这个成语想到自身如何去做)【参考范文】In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a wellknown story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.【亮点点评】本文简明扼要，要点齐全，信息丰富，条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇，如：shabby, be absorbed in, afford, spare no effort, acquire knowledge, get discouraged, count等，体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上，运用了强调句型，丰富了句式结构；最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用，是一篇上等佳作。Writing 3(2015·江苏) 请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1.The other day, a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, and insisting that it leave the track. The photo drew about 7，000 comments on the social media platform. Despite the thumbsup(点赞) given to the old lady, some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.2.Some riders of ebikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.3.From 2005 to 2014, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million. Currently, China had 15% of the world's total vehicles.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示