Unit 1 Reading for Writing 主题写作课件- 高一上学期英语人教版（2019）必修第一册.pptx

一写作任务 假定你是李华，收到一封 Miss Worried 的来信。该同学在信中诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信 内容包括:,主题写作-建议信,(1)表示理解并给予安慰; (2)提出建议并说明理由。注意:(1)词数100左右; (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Worried,- Yours， Li Hua,二.技法指导(1)一审:确定体裁、主题和结构体裁:应用文-书信建议类主题:缓解压力的建议 第一段交际用语/导人-写信目的结构: 第二段 概括句+2-3 条建议(关联词 连接;建议+必要的细节支持) 第三段祝愿+交际用语(2)二定:确定时态与人称 时态:一般现在时 人称:主要为第二人称(3)三明确:明确写作要点 安慰、方法建议(缓解压力)、祝愿,(1)关键词语 have difficulty(in)doing sth.做某事有困难 be confused about 对.感到困惑 sign up(for)报名参加 attract ones attention 吸引某人的注意力 ease ones pressure 减轻某人的压力 work out a schedule 制订时间表 recommend that sb.(should ) do sth.建议某人做某事 a solution to sth. 某事的解决方法,三.素材整理,(2)完成句子 对于你这个年龄的青少年来说，面对这样的压力和挑战是很常见的。(动词不定式短语作真正的主语)Its_ for teenagers of your age to_ such_ _ _. 向你信任的人讲述你的感受以及你所困惑的事情, 这有助于减少压力和得到专业的建议。(定语从句与宾语从句)Talk to someone you trust about_ _ _and what youre_ _，_ can help reduce your pressure and get_advice.我建议你把你的关注点转移到其他事情上去（宾语从句)l recommend that you_ _your_ to other things,common,face,pressure,and,challenges,how you,feel,confused about,which,expert,should turn,focus,报名加入一些课外的俱乐部或与朋友们玩团队游戏，因为这样的活动可以吸引并转移你的注意力。(sig up,状语从句)_ _ _some extra-curricularclubs or play team games with your friends , _such activities can _and distract your attention.制订一个时间表对于时间管理是一个更好的解决方案。_ _ _ _ is a better_ _time management.我希望我的建议能够有帮助。( find后接复合宾语) I_ youll find my advice _,Sign up for,because,attract,Working out a schedule,solution to,hope,useful,四.高分作文(注:红体部分为本单元的重点词汇),Dear Miss Worried, Sorry to know you have dificulty falling asleep. I can understand your feelings, but its common for teenagers of your age to face such pressure and challenges. The following tips may help you face the challenges well. Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel and what youre confused about, which can help reduce your pressure and get expert advice. Secondly, I recommend that you focus on other activities like signing up for some extra-curricular clubs or playing team games with your friends, because such activities can attract and distract your attention . Thirdly, working out a schedule is a better solution to time management.,第一段:导入话题，表示理解与同情，并提出写作目的。,I hope youll find my advice useful. Im looking forward to your good news. Yours， Li Hua,第二段:提出解决问题的建议。承接第一段，提出 三点建议，分别 用 firstly, secondly/besides, thirdly/in addition 进行连接。,第三段:表达希望，加入交际用语。,五.佳作背诵,教材（人教版)高中英语必修第一册第18页,10 September 2018Dear Worried Friend,You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.,I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.All the best,Suan Luo,1.问题参考答案 1.Worried Friend is worried that her fiend, Chen Lei, plays compute games too oflen and spends too muchtime online 2. I think its useful. Because a friends encouragement can be helpful to him and through talking, he may realise the problem and stop playing computer games. 3. I would tell Chen Lei that he should spend his time more productively (有成果地）with an eye on （考虑到，注意到）his future. For example, instead of playing computer games, he could learn computer programming.Who knows? He might become a great figure in that field when hes older.,2.问题参考答案,1AB 为 Paragraph 1 CD 为 Paragraph 22 I recommend that. I think you should. Why not.?,Passage 110 September 2018 Dear Eric, You wrote that you are worried that your parents wont listen when you tell them things. I understand that you are anxious and feel terrible. I think you must always keep in mind that you have to respect them because they are your parents. Try to understand your parents. Your parents may think differently from you. Tell your parents what you think, what you care about and why. I am sure that if you can put yourself in their shoes, you may find a better way out to communicate with your parents. Best wishes, Susan Luo,3.问题参考答案,Passage 210 September 2018 Dear Xu Ting，You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand that you need parents love and care greatly, which is natural/necessary. I think you can find another way to communicate with your parents Besides, why dont you talk about these feelings with your friends/ teachers? They will be helpful, because they spend lots of time with you and may understand you better. I am sure that in this way you will feel relaxed and much better Best wishes, Susan Luo,1. Why not sign up for some activities to distract your attention? 为什么不参加一些活动来分散你的注意力呢?2. In order to get rid of the bad habits, I recommend that you should alter and work out a new schedule so that your life can go regularly. 为了戒掉不良习惯,我建议你做出改变，制订一个新的时间表,这样能使你的生活有规律。3. Whenever you feel confused about your life, you can communicate with your teacher or friends for advice. 不管什么时候对生活感到困惑了，你都可以和你的老师或朋友们交流以寻求建议。,六.话题写作常用表达和句型,4. It is common for teenagers to meet with such problems and I can fully understand your feelings. 青少年遇到这样的问题是很常见的,我能充分理解你的感受。5. I am firmly convinced that as long as you have confidence in yourself, you can succeed in overcoming the problems. 我完全相信,只要你对自己有信心,你就可以成功克服这些问题。6. So addicted to computer games is he that he has completely lost the balance between study and play. 他如此沉迷于电脑游戏以至于完全失去了学习和玩之间的平衡。,7. It is obvious that everyone should take responsibility for his own behaviour. 显而易见,每个人都应该为自己的行为负责。8.An extra-curricular debate on Internet addiction is scheduled to be held next Friday. 一个关于网瘾的课外辩论将在下周五举行。9. As scheduled, some activities will be held to ease our pressure.按照计划，将举办一些活动来减轻我们的压力。10. As to this problem , the best solution is time management-make a time schedule. 至于这个问题，最好的解决方案是时间管理，即制订一个时间规划。,有些学生在没有很好地把握写作要领的前提下就下笔，容易陷人以下几个误区。功夫没少下，得分却不高。(1)句子越复杂，水平越高有些考生自认为语法学得好，所以大量使用复合句，甚至出现一篇文章只有三句话，一句一段的极端做法。事实上这是不可取的。当一句话中的句子成分过于复杂时，就很容易出错，即使语法高手不出错，也会使阅卷老师感到喘不过气。正常的作文应该是长句和短句相结合，这样读起来才能有起有落，文章更有节奏感。(2)用词越难越好词汇量大不是坏事，但如果一篇一百词左右的作文出现太多的超纲词汇，甚至使用雅思和托福里的偏词、难词，文章就会显得晦涩难懂。毕竟中学生的写作选材大都源自生活，而不是科学研究等专业领域的话题，所以考生应把精力放在考试大纲范围内的词汇上，灵活运用词汇，比如名词动用、形容词的名词用法等，把文章写得通顺流畅，形象生动就可以。,七写作的误区及常见失分点,（3）内容越多越好 有些考生写作时的词数远远超过了题目要求，把答题线占得满满的直到没有空间。事实上，词数过多也是会扣分的，而且词数过多会显得太拥挤,不仅影响卷面美观，而且还占用大量时间。因此最好把词数控制在题目要求的100词左右,内容少了肯定不行，但也不要过于冗长。(4)写作只是翻译所给的内容和提示 作文题目所给的提示只是内容要点，考生须把要点加上相应的内容连贯地写成一篇文章，而不只是单纯地翻译所给的内容和提示。一般直接翻译的文章会存在生硬、缺乏活力和不连贯等特点，那一定是得不了高分的。因此，考生应该把内容要点综合一下，适当增加细节，再使用适当的连词使行文流畅。,除了以上误区,同学们还要注意一些常见的失分点。比如:(1)审题不清 写作时一定不要着急下笔，务必仔细审题，理解出题者的意图，否则就会出现跑题现象。图表类写作一定要看清题目的要求，是只需要分析现象，还是分析现象后还要得出结论;议论类写作已经给出观点的只需客观论证，有的则要求简要说明自己的观点;看图说话类写作要分析几幅图的连贯性和主题。所以，审题是第一步也是最关键的一步,否则后面的工作都是徒劳。(2)语法和单词拼写错误 如果卷面上出现很低级的语法错误或者拼写错误，这一定会让作文质量大打折扣。比如文章出现多处类似于 The students is., He want to.这种最简单的语法错误,这篇作文就不可能得到太高的分数。评分标准规定，好的作文即使出现语法错误也是因为同学们在试图使用高级语法时出现的。因此，针对不确定的语法，宁可简单化也不要出错;拿不准的单词就换一种说法,尽量避免出错。,(3)段落不分 经常有考生用一整段把一百词左右的作文写下来，这样的文章 看起来既没有美感，层次也不分明，势必会影响得分。一般来说，篇作文分成三段，首段和末段三句话左右，中间主体段落由七、八句话构成。这种三段式的英语作文在阅卷老师中最受欢迎，相反，没有段落或者段落过多都会影响作文得分。(4)内容要点不全 高考作文的评分标准对内容要点是否全面是有明确要求的，一类作文需要涵盖题目所给的全部内容要点，并适当增加细节。所以，写作时，考生应先把内容要点罗列在草稿纸上，然后逐一对应写进文章里，千万不要遗漏任何一个要点，否则就给了阅卷老师扣分的最好理由。(5)卷面杂乱 卷面整洁的重要性不言而喻,考生在写作时字迹不但要清楚，还要美观，同时词与词之间的间距既不能太稀疏,又不能太拥挤，一般控制在一个字母左右的词间距最为合适。当一篇字体凌乱的作文呈现在阅卷老师眼前时，即使内容再好也会影响得分，因此，考生在平时一定要注意书写的训练。练字是一个慢功夫,不是几天时间就能写出一手好字的，但抓住字母的特点，做到“上下齐，不突兀，圈要圆，口封死,无死角，无涂改”,就能起到事半功倍的效果。综上所述，同学们只要能做到认真审题、列全要点、不出错误、选词适当、分成三段、语句连贯、卷面整洁,就必能拿高分。,