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.1/11SCI 修改稿回答审稿人意见文模板修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分）List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers comments concerningour manuscript entitled“Paper Title”(ID:文章稿号).Those comments are allvaluable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper,as well as theimportant guiding significance to our researches.We have studied commentscarefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval.Revised portion are marked in red in the paper.The main corrections in thepaper and the responds to the reviewers comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewers comments:Reviewer#1:1.Response to comment:(简要列出意见)Response:2.Response to comment:(简要列出意见)Response:。逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：We are very sorry for our negligence of.We are very sorry for our incorrect writing.2/11It is really true as Reviewer suggested thatWe have made correction according to the Reviewers comments.We have re-written this part according to the Reviewers suggestionAs Reviewer suggested thatConsidering the Reviewers suggestion,we have 最后特意感一下这个审稿人的意见：Special thanks to you for your good comments.Reviewer#2:同上述Reviewer#3:Other changes:1.Line 60-61,the statements of“”were corrected as“”2.Line 107,“”was added3.Line 129,“”was deletedWe tried our best to improve the manuscript and made somechanges in the manuscript.These changes will not influence the contentand framework of the paper.And here we did not list the changes but markedin red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers warm work earnestly,and hopethat the correction will meet with approval.3/11Once again,thank you very much for your comments and suggestions以下是审稿人意见和本人的回复。与大家分享。从中可以看出，这位审稿人认真读了文章，提出很多宝贵的意见。这些意见分布在文章的各个地方。我很诧异有人真正读了我的文章。看到这些意见，我觉得很感激，不是因为接收文章的原因，而是这些意见能真正有助于提高文章的质量。从中还看出，回答审稿人问题的“技巧”。对于回答问题，有的人就是一味反驳，却不加改进。记得 ACS Style Guide 里面说，当审稿人问到问题的，哪怕是他理解错误，这也说明作者这么写，其他读者也会理解错误，引起歧义。因此，作者就是要修改句子，使表达不引起歧义。因此：有时间一味反驳，还不如指出具体改进在第几页、第几段。=Reviewers comments:Reviewer#3:While revising the script,it is to be suggested that authorshould clearly indicate the aim&scope of the study and while makingconclusion,it is to be mentioned how the study is useful for the practicalpurposes.In addition the following are the few suggestions/comments,whichmay be included while revision.4/111.Introduction part first para last line,author must avoid to writeambiguous statement i.e.,much work is still ahead,may indicate properly.2.Author could not demonstrate the reason why,to select the organiccompound such as ethyl pyruvate for this study?3.Experimental part:It is difficult to understand the in-situ RAIRSexperimentswithhomemadeliquid-solidRAIRScell.Moredetailedinformation may be useful for the others those who are working in the area.Photograph of the assembled cell may be included.4.The description given for the experimental set up(page 4)can bepresented by flow diagram instead,as an ease to understand the set up.5.ReslutsPart(Page6):COadlayerswithidenticalmonolayercoverages,the monolayer coverage,is it been performed with someadsorption model?Further,it was suggested that CO-saturated Pt surface,but not mentioned about the saturation experiments.Is it obtained after 60min of CO bubbling?6.Page 12,2nd para:The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 flushing,is itconfirmed by the EtPy peaks?If so,it has to be mentioned clearly in the para.Also in the same para,author referred for Fig.7a and 7b but in the figures,itdidnt appear,only figure 7 appeared.I feel it refers for figure 7,portion A andB,to be corrected.Similarly,in the text referred the fig 2a,2b.etc but on thefigure sheet it is mentioned as 2A,2B.etc.to be corrected.7.Page 14,1st para:contamination of the Pt surface by corrosion of.5/11o-rings in high concentration EtPy,but the statement has not beensupported by other evidence/literature.8.Pages 14 through 17:the observed reactivity of various solvents foradsorbed CO on the Pt surface(figs 3&4)has to be discussed more precisely.This reviewer is unable to follow the reason why they showed differentreactivity,is it principally due to the organic moieties,or due to the impuritiesof commercially available chemicals or a mixed effect.It has to be clearlydemonstrated,however,the only experiment performed with CO/water?CCl4 would difficult to describe it in detail.9.The author try to restrain with repeated arguments in the text e.g.,page 3 para 1:It was generalized that.,also appeared on page 21 firstpara.10.Captions of the figures are too long,the detailed description alreadygiven in the text,hence would not be included here.Captions should be shortand crispy.=Dear Editor,I quite appreciate your favorite consideration and the reviewersinsightful comments.Now I have revised the JCIS-06-247 exactly according tothe reviewers comments,and found these comments are very helpful.I.6/11hope this revision can make my paper more acceptable.The revisions wereaddressed point by point below.general The objective of this research was added at the beginning ofthe third paragraph of Introduction.How the study is useful for practicalpurposes was added at the end of Conclusion as one paragraph.1 Ambiguous statement i.e.,“much work is still ahead”was deleted.2 Ethyl pyruvate was used here as a typical compound(containing twocarbonyl groups)to demonstrate the feasibility of using our diagnosing toolto detect low-coverage CO(coming from decarbonylation of EtPy)at theliquid-solid interface.EtPy is a reactant used in liquid-phase chiral catalysis,and slight decomposition of EtPy to adsorbed CO was reported to influencethe catalytic performance.In addition,by studying that,we can directlycompare our results with previous studies.More details in the first paragraphof Section 3.2.3 The IR cell was designed according to the IR cells used by manyelectrochemical workers.References were added.A photo was given in theSupporting Information.7/114 A flow diagram of the experimental setup was given in the new Fig.1.5 The CO adsorption experiments were performed in the sameadsorption mode,by bubbling CO through a clean Pt surface in differentdays to achieve the same saturation coverage of CO.Initial experimentsindicated that given the CO bubbling rate was 0.85 cm3/min,CO can saturateon Pt after 30-45 min.We bubble CO for 60 min to guarantee the same COcoverage.If we bubble CO for more time,or if we increase the CO flowingrate several times,the CO saturation coverage doesnt change,indicating60 min is already enough.A figure showing the CO uptake as a function ofbubbling time was given in the Supporting Information.6 The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 was confirmed by the removing ofEtPy peaks.The mention of Fig.7a and 7b etc.throughout the text were allcorrected.7 It is known that some solvents such as acetone can corrode the Vitono-ring.We saw the damage of o-ring after using high-concentration EtPy.Areference to the Viton o-ring information was given.8 The observed reactivity trend is due to a combination of both effects,with the accumulation of organic moieties on Pt surface during numerous.8/11flushing cycles the more important reason.A few proper sentences wereadded to clarity this point.9 The repeated arguments in the first paragraph in Section 4.3 weredeleted.10 The too-long captions were significantly shortened.In all,I found the reviewers comments are quite helpful,and I revisedmy paper point-by-point.Thank you and the review again for your help!=结果：dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.jcis.2006.09.005欢迎浏览：Organic Chemistry on Solid Surfaces(Review)Z.Ma,F.Zaera*,Surface Scence Reports 61(2006)229-281.ScienceDirect TOP25 Hottest Articles in Chemistrydx.doi.org/10.1016/j.surfrep.2006.03.001CI 修改稿回答审稿人意见文模板.9/11修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分）List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers comments concerningour manuscript entitled“Paper Title”(ID:文章稿号).Those comments are allvaluable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper,as well as theimportant guiding significance to our researches.We have studied commentscarefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval.Revised portion are marked in red in the paper.The main corrections in thepaper and the responds to the reviewers comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewers comments:Reviewer#1:1.Response to comment:(简要列出意见)Response:2.Response to comment:(简要列出意见)Response:。逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：We are very sorry for our negligence of.10/11We are very sorry for our incorrect writing.It is really true as Reviewer suggested thatWe have made correction according to the Reviewers comments.We have re-written this part according to the Reviewers suggestionAs Reviewer suggested thatConsidering the Reviewers suggestion,we have 最后特意感一下这个审稿人的意见：Special thanks to you for your good comments.Reviewer#2:同上述Reviewer#3:Other changes:1.Line 60-61,the statements of“”were corrected as“”2.Line 107,“”was added3.Line 129,“”was deletedWe tried our best to improve the manuscript and made somechanges in the manuscript.These changes will not influence the contentand framework of the paper.And here we did not list the changes but markedin red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers warm work earnestly,and hope.11/11that the correction will meet with approval.Once again,thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.