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我用的基础写作有点难度第1页，此课件共26页哦Lets correct acomposition!第2页，此课件共26页哦以下是某售票网站上的信息以下是某售票网站上的信息:基本信息基本信息:片名片名:Everyone:EveryonesHerosHero国家国家:美国美国类别类别:喜剧喜剧/动画动画片长片长:87min:87min特点特点:运动运动+冒险冒险影院影院:正大影院正大影院(6.22-27)(6.22-27)折扣折扣:8:8折折提前两天网上预定影票提前两天网上预定影票,我们将免费送票上门。我们将免费送票上门。写作内容：写作内容：请根据以上信息用请根据以上信息用五五个规范的句子个规范的句子写一篇写一篇连贯的连贯的短文短文第3页，此课件共26页哦 Everyones Hero,an American cartoon as well as a comedy,from June 22 to June 27.It was in Zhengda Cinema that it will showing.This film,features sports and adventure,last 87 minutes.What more exciting is that a 20%discount offered.In addition,we not charge for delivery if you booking online two days in advance.第4页，此课件共26页哦Everyones Hero,an American cartoon as well as a comedy,from June 22 to June 27.It was in Zhengda Cinema that it will showing.This film,features sports and adventure,last 87 minutes.What more exciting is that a 20%discount offered.In addition,we not charge for delivery if you booking online two days in advance.第5页，此课件共26页哦Everyones Hero,an American cartoon as well as a comedy,is on from June 22 to June 27.It is in Zhengda Cinema that it will be shown.This film,featuring/which features sports and adventure,lasts 87 minutes.Whats more exciting is that a 20%discount is offered.In addition,we wont charge for delivery if you book online two days in advance.第6页，此课件共26页哦如何写好基如何写好基础写作？写作？1 1、明确写作、明确写作要点要点，确，确定定时态和和语态，正确，正确运用运用谓语和和非非谓语。2 2、提升作文。、提升作文。-如何提升？如何提升？解解题技技巧巧指指导第7页，此课件共26页哦Lets improve acomposition!第8页，此课件共26页哦 2008广东高考基础写作广东高考基础写作 你很荣幸地成为你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目;1904：中断：中断;1928：中断：中断;1932：重回奥运会；：重回奥运会；1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛；：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛；现状：稳步发展，现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有现今有17项。项。第9页，此课件共26页哦 Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport first appeared in 1896,but it was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.The sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.第10页，此课件共26页哦Shooting was originated as a means of survival.It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.Only in the late 19th century did shooting,first as a means of survival,develop into a sport.非谓语动词非谓语动词倒装句倒装句第11页，此课件共26页哦The sport first appeared in 1896.It was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport,which first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport,first appearing in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport first appeared in 1896,but it was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.并列句并列句定语从句定语从句非谓语动词非谓语动词第12页，此课件共26页哦The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.It was in 1932 that the sport returned to the Olympics.Not until 1932 did the sport return to the Olympics.It was not until 1932 that the sport returned to the Olympics.It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympics.强调句型强调句型强调句型强调句型倒装句倒装句句型句型第13页，此课件共26页哦Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.Not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.It was not until 1968 that women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic Games.强调句型强调句型倒装句倒装句第14页，此课件共26页哦The sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.过渡语（过渡语（21期期B4）第15页，此课件共26页哦Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport,which first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic.However,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.第16页，此课件共26页哦1)并列句并列句2)复合句复合句(定定语从句从句,状状语从句从句,名名词性从句性从句)3)非非谓语动词4)强调句型句型 5)倒装倒装句句 6)其他句型及其他句型及结构（如构（如带it的常用句型）的常用句型）要做到要做到-句式灵活句式灵活-学会适当地使用：学会适当地使用：*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips如何提升？如何提升？第17页，此课件共26页哦基础写作的推荐步骤：基础写作的推荐步骤：1、认真真审题 2、归纳、排列信息点、排列信息点 3、确定短确定短语和句型、和句型、连词成句成句4、组句成篇句成篇5、检查修改修改 第18页，此课件共26页哦某某报设有一个求助信箱，有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信息，以根据以下表中列出的信息，以高三学生李高三学生李华的名的名义给Mr.Helper写一封英文短信。信的写一封英文短信。信的开开头和和结尾已写好，不尾已写好，不计入五句入五句话。Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua高高 三三 学学 生生 现现 状状负担过重的原因负担过重的原因每天在校时间每天在校时间约约10小时小时 1.面临高考；面临高考；2.家长期望高。家长期望高。每天作业时间每天作业时间3-4小时小时每天娱乐时间每天娱乐时间几乎没有几乎没有每天睡眠时间每天睡眠时间不足不足第19页，此课件共26页哦1 体裁格式体裁格式2 内容内容3 人称人称,时态时态4 信息点的整合信息点的整合和排列和排列第第1 1步步 审题审题写信写信描述高三学生描述高三学生现状。状。第一人称第一人称/一般一般现在在时6项写写作作步步骤骤第20页，此课件共26页哦第第2步步 整合信息整合信息,译成英成英语。1)每天在校每天在校时间约10小小时。每天完成作。每天完成作业时间34小小时。Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons.We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework.2)每天几乎没有每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。、消遣。a.We hardly have any time for relaxation.b.Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.第21页，此课件共26页哦3)每天睡眠每天睡眠时间不足不足,不利于健康。不利于健康。a.We dont have enough time to sleep,which is not good for our health.b.We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,does harm to our health.4)负担担过重的原因是面重的原因是面临高考。高考。a.The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination.b.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are facing the college entrance examination.第22页，此课件共26页哦5)父母父母对我我们的期望很高。的期望很高。a.Our parents expect too much of us.b.Our parents have high expectations of us.第23页，此课件共26页哦 Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons _ spend at least three to four hours doing our homework._,hardly can we find any time to do what we want._,We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,does harm to our health.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from the college entrance examination._,our parents have high expectations of us.I am looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua第第3 3步步 连句成篇连句成篇andAs a resultWhats worseIn addition第24页，此课件共26页哦Lets summarize how to create a wonderfulcomposition!第25页，此课件共26页哦解题技巧指导解题技巧指导如何写好基础写作？如何写好基础写作？1、明确写作要点，确定时态语态，正确运用谓、明确写作要点，确定时态语态，正确运用谓语和非谓语。语和非谓语。2、提升作文。、提升作文。准确运用非谓语动词、复合句，强调句，倒准确运用非谓语动词、复合句，强调句，倒装句及固定句型整合写作内容中的基本信息点，装句及固定句型整合写作内容中的基本信息点，通篇提升。通篇提升。第26页，此课件共26页哦