英语书面表达之图表作文幻灯片.ppt

英语书面表达之图表作文第1页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二 条形或柱状图条形或柱状图(bar chart)曲线图曲线图(graph)饼形图饼形图(pie chart)图表作文图表作文 要求考生将图表中的数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反映要求考生将图表中的数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反映的情况作出分析或发表议论。的情况作出分析或发表议论。第2页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二1.读取信息。仔细读图，掌握图表上提供的信息2.处理信息。对信息进行分析与对比，考虑文章的布局。3.文章结构。Part 1：General idea(conclusion/tendency)(图表反映的问题或总体趋势)Part 2：Facts(to support the idea)(具体数据或事实)&Reasons(原因分析)Part 3：Solutions/Suggestions(解决问题的办法或建议)第3页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二图表作文写作的步骤图表作文写作的步骤:一、开头一、开头 二、分析数据与原因二、分析数据与原因三三、得出结论得出结论第4页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二开门见山开门见山 点名本图表所反映的主题点名本图表所反映的主题,常见的词汇常见的词汇有：有：table,chart,figure,graph,tell,show.第5页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二实用套语1开头(1)From the graph/table/chart above,we can see that.从上表我们可以看出(2)As can be seen from the table(As we can see clearlyfrom the table).正如从图表中所看到的(3)As is shown by the graph,there had been a rapid increasein.正如曲线所示，飞速增长。(4)From the statistics given in the table,it can be seen that.从表中所给的统计数字可以看出(5)It can be concluded from the graph that there has been agreat decline in.从曲线图可以得出结论，下降了很多。(6)The graph shows/includes that.图表显示/表明第6页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二分析数据间主要差异及趋势分析数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写在描写数据然后描写在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用可采用分类式或对比式分类式或对比式,以支以支持主题持主题,并阐明必要的理由并阐明必要的理由,特别要注意层次清楚，常特别要注意层次清楚，常用词汇有用词汇有:数据分析数据分析compare.to/with,compared to/with,in contrast to.用作比较说明相同点的用作比较说明相同点的:as.as,the same as,similar to,like,equally important用作比较说明不同点的用作比较说明不同点的:unlike,on the other hand,instead,different,from,difference,between(among).第7页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二必备词汇1.上 升：rise,go up,climb,rocket(迅 速 上 升),soar(猛 增),increase2.下降：go down,fall,drop,decline,decrease3.起始：from.to.,to4.程度：by.5.急 缓：slow,slowly;slight,slightly;quick,quickly;steady,steadily;sharp(急 剧 的),sharply(急 剧 地);dramatically(显 著 地);remarkably(显著地)6.趋势：upward trend(上涨趋势),downward trend(下跌趋势)7.不变：stay,remain(依然是)8.其他：account for 30%of the total(占总量的 30%),at the samerate(以相同的速率),average(平均的),annual(每年的),figure/number(数字),amount(数量),percentage(百分比)第8页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二 常用句式结构常用句式结构:Topic sentences.I have recently made a survey among.A research has been made recently among.Im writing to tell you about my research about.Different people have different ideas about.Body sentences Somebodys favorite is.while others.What somebody likes to do most is.Both.and .would like to.As for.,the number.equal.The second largest group would like to.The second choice for somebody is to.第9页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二归纳总结或发表评论归纳总结或发表评论(有时第三步可省略有时第三步可省略)常常用词汇有用词汇有:to sum up,finally,in conclusion,at last,in summary,on the whole,in short,all in all,in a word ,in the end,in other words,therefore,as a result,generally speaking,As I have shown.,As has been stated,得出结论得出结论第10页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二Conclusion sentencesAs I have shown.As has been stated In my opinion.I think.第11页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二三要：三要：1.要找出对比最为明显的突破点。要找出对比最为明显的突破点。2.要找出对比较明显的要点。要找出对比较明显的要点。3.要找出双方非常相似的要点要找出双方非常相似的要点。三忌：三忌：1.忌流水帐式依次描述。忌流水帐式依次描述。2.忌反复使用同一句型。忌反复使用同一句型。3.忌反复出现纷繁复杂的数据。忌反复出现纷繁复杂的数据。柱状图式作文写作要注意：柱状图式作文写作要注意：第12页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二下面是某高中对该校下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。道。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比参考词汇：鲜明的对比striking contrast第13页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二书面表达审题书面表达审题体裁：说明文体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称人称：第三人称第14页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二下面是某高中对该校下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比参考词汇：鲜明的对比striking contrast第15页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二 I have recently made a survey about middle school students choice of their future jobs.They have different ideas about it.The most striking contrast is in teaching.30%of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5%of the boys want to do this job.20%of the boys want to do business and another 20%want to become lawyers while girls take up 15%in these fields.What boys like to do most is to becomemanagers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching,the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers.The number is not small.Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.A possible version第16页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二假设你于 4 月 23 日的“世界读书日”(World Reading Day)在你所在的学校进行了一项阅读习惯调查，以下是其中的一项调查结果。请用英语写一篇短文，说明相关内容及结果等。A买书阅读B网上下载或在线阅读C从朋友处或图书馆借阅D学校阅览室阅读1.调查内容及时间；2.调查结果；3.问题：阅览室的使用率(use rate)不高；4.建议：(1)延长阅览室的开放时间；(2)书店送书到校，方便学生购买。第17页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二 On World Reading Day,we carried out a survey about the reading habits of high school students.According to the survey,45.75%of the students read books they buy and 8.5%of them download e-books or read online.35.75%of the students borrow books from friends or the library and 11%of them read in the school reading-room.From the survey we can see that the use rate of the school rea-ding-room is not high enough.We suggest that its opening hours be extended and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.第18页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二 日前，针对学生的零用钱（日前，针对学生的零用钱（pocket moneypocket money）的消）的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查得出数据如下表。现请你学生进行了问卷调查得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。注意：注意：1 1书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要 抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。2 2字数：字数：100100字左右。开头已给出字左右。开头已给出,不计不计 人人总词数。总词数。第19页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二Dear editor,Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money_.第20页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二Dear editor,Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.In this survey,both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books,sacks and playing games,still some money goes to clothes,banks,sports,and so on.The survey shows that about 44 of seniors prefer books to sacks（37%）and playing games（31%）.On the other hand,only 32 of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books,while over a half buy sacks and 44 spend on playing games.Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks.I thinkI think too many sacks will too many sacks will not onlynot only make us put on weight make us put on weight but alsobut also do harm to our health.do harm to our health.In additionIn addition,if we play games,if we play games without limit,well lose much precious time,which results in without limit,well lose much precious time,which results in low grades.low grades.FurthermoreFurthermore,the money is hard-earned.,the money is hard-earned.I hopeI hope we students value our money as well as our time.we students value our money as well as our time.第21页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二假如你叫假如你叫Jim Lee，你最近对你班，你最近对你班60名同学名同学(男女各半男女各半)进行了进行了上网目的调查。现将调查结果上网目的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示如下表所示)用英语给某报社的用英语给某报社的编辑写一封信报告此事，以引起舆论关注。编辑写一封信报告此事，以引起舆论关注。注意：注意：报告应包括图表所示全部内容报告应包括图表所示全部内容叙述结果时要避免重复使用百分比。叙述结果时要避免重复使用百分比。叙述过程中要适当添加评语。叙述过程中要适当添加评语。词数词数100左右左右。第22页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二学生习作点评学生习作点评Dear editor,My name is Jim lee.I am a middle school student.Now,I did a researchabout the purpose of my classmates go on the line.There are 30%of boys and 20%girls read news on the computer.Have 20%boys and 15%girls send e-mails on-line.There are more girls(about 35%)than boys(about 5%)have a chat.About 10%boys and 10%girls used computers study.More boys than girls play games.Yours Jim第23页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二CommonmistakesCommonmistakes1.Most of the boys in order to play games while most girls in order to have a chat.2.About 10%boys and 10%girls used computer study.汉语式英语汉语式英语？第24页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二1.20%of boys get on theInternet to send e-mails while 15%of girls get on the Internet to send e-mails.2.The number of boys who like to play games is larger than the number of girls.重复累赘重复累赘第25页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二句式单一句式单一,平铺直叙平铺直叙A.30%boys and 20%girls go on-line in order to read news.20%boys and girls go on-line to send e-mails.5%boys and 35%girls want to chat with others.10%boys and girls want to study on-line.Besides,35%boys and 20%girls go on-line to play pare A with BB.Girls favorite is chatting,but few boys like it.What boys like to do most is playing games and girls also like it.Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.As for studying,the number of boys and girls is equal.句式多样句式多样,文章增文章增 靓靓 第26页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二无关联词无关联词1.Most of the girls like to chat.Most of the boys like to play games.2.Computers have changed the world greatly.We should make full use of them.It will become a tool of our study.第27页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二Thank you for being with us!第28页，共28页，编辑于2022年，星期二