英语四级作文评分标准幻灯片.ppt

英语四级作文评分标准第1页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二评分标准n4避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。n 5.字数不足以应酌情扣分。n二、评分标准二、评分标准1本题满分为15分2阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如 8分)相似，即定为 该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。第2页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二分数档n4评分标准2分(33)条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分(39)基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分(45)基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分(57)切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分(67)切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。n注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。第3页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二p4n累计字数 CET-4 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9注：1如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。2规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。nSample:nDirections:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:第4页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二n假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：n1车祸发生的时间及地点2你所见到的车祸情况3你对车祸原因的分析nAn Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accidentn14 points/67nIt was the morning of April 6th,2003.At about 7:30,I went to school by bike as usual.It was a rainy day and the road was slippery.On the way,I noticed a boy riding in front of me,talking loudly with his friends.He didnt wear a raincoat;instead he held an umbrella in one hand,and rode with another hand.第5页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二Sample-1 nAs he turned left to Guangming Road,he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner.Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away.The boy was knocked down by the car.I was completely shocked.nI think the boys absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident.He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike.The weather also played a role in the tragedy.The third cause was the unproperly parked truck,which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn.All these contributed to this accident.第6页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二Sample-2(11 points/57)n It was last Friday morning.The accident happened when I was on my way to school.It was so terrible that I would never forget it.I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the road.Then,with a big sound,the accident happened.The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldnt respond immiditely.The back of the red car was badly damaged,but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.I think the main reasons are as follows:First of all,the red car shouldnt stop suddenly without any signals.Secondly,the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation.Finally,these two drivers were careless.If they had paid more attention to driving,this accident wouldnt have happened.第7页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二Sample-3(8 points/45)n The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock.n The yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened.Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction.There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons:Firstly and the foremost,it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly made the accidents happen.It was not too careful for them when running a car.Secondly,the weather also should be responsible for it.The fog made the vision of drivers vague.Last but not the least,the constructure of the roads was unreasonable.The trafic lights are needed at any junctions.第8页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二Sample-4(5 points/39)n It was 8:00 this morning,I went on my way to school.When I just at the school gate,I saw the terrible traffic accident happend.A student ride his bike in a high speed,and just when he arrived the school gate,a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down.He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground.Surely,the poor boy was hurt very bad.I think there are two reasons for the accident.First,it was just the time we began our first class,the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late,he ride his bike so fast,even didnt low down his speed at the gate.Secend,the truck is too large,and at that time,there were too many people walk through the gate,so the bike driver have no other way to chose,but to ride in the middle of the road.第9页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二Sample 5(2 points/33)n I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road.The Traffic Accident has been at the morning,May 1.Two children by bike went to school.A car is so fast,the streel.And the car touched two children by bike,and the Traffic Accident has happened.One is touched so far way and the other is put down.Mary people come here,and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.Wait a time,The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place.My opiontoin:The car driver is so fast by car,and He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road.Two children by bike didnt heared the car come.All of above,I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.第10页，共10页，编辑于2022年，星期二