高考英语书面表达申请信课件 .pptx

Practical Writing,假如你是李华，正在英国留学。下周你所在的社区将举行以中医为主题的社区活动，目前正在招募志愿者。请你用英文向主办方提出申请，内容包括：1.提出申请；2. 介绍自己的优势；3. 期待加入。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。参考词汇：中医traditional Chinese medicine (TCM)或中药的重要性 Dear sir or madam, I am Li Hua, an international student from China. _ _ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua,(2020 11 宁波 1模),a community activity,a community activity themed traditional Chinese medicine,recruit volunteers,社区活动 以中医为主题 的社区活动 招募志愿者,( some volunteers are wanted /needed ),key words:,Puzzle 1:,a community activity on /concerning TCM,2.your personal experience,1.your interest in TCM,3.your language ability /communication skills,What are your strengths ?,Puzzle 2: Strengths in para.2,4.your quality/personality,outgoing / enthusiastic /warmed -hearted/ responsible /reliable /devoted/confident /determined.,?,/your knowledge of TCM,补充细节：,brief introduction+purpose,Para.1,+,我是李华，正在英国留学。得知下周你所在的社区将举行以中医为主题的社区活动，目前正在招募志愿者我迫不及待地写信想申请这个工作。,语言表达：,连词成句：,I am Li Hua, an international student from China.,+,an international student from China;,a community activities themed TCM; recruit ./be needed,cant wait to do;,apply for the position;,I Hear that _ for the coming community activity themed TCM .,I can t wait to apply for the position.,volunteers are needed,your strength 1 your interest in TCM,Para.2,出生在一个中医世家，我从小就对中医非常感兴趣并且大学花了四年学中医 ，所以我非常了解中医。,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,born into a doctors family of TCM,I was born into a family of TCM .I was deeply interested in it at an early age . I have spent 4 years in studying it at university , so I have a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine.,be deeply interested in . at an early age,spend 4 years studying .,have a good knowledge of.,your strength 2 （your language ability）,我的英语很流利，因此我在与别人交流方面没有障碍。,have a good command of/ be fluent in ;,I have a good command of English, so I have no difficulty communicating with others.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,have no trouble/difficulty in communicating with others;,我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者工作。,enthusiastic and responsible;,I am enthusiastic and responsible, so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,be competent for be qualified for,Strength 3 （ your personality）,Strength 4 （ former experience ）,我之前丰富的志愿者经历使我能胜任志愿者工作。,my previous abundant experience;,my prevoius abundant experience makes me qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,be qualified for,conclusion,由于以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。,As is mentioned above/ All these qualities are mentioned above；I can say with certainty that .,Because all these qualities are mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,express your appreciation and expectation,Para.3,如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。,I would appreciate it if ;,I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,take my application into consideration/ account/ seriously,Looking forward to your early reply.,Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I hear that volunteers are needed for the coming community activity themed TCM . I can hardly wait to apply for the position. Initially, I was born into a doctors family of TCM. I was deeply interested in it at an early age . Later I spent 4 years studying TCM and it enables me to have a good knowledge of it. I can not only explain the theory to the people around, but also tell the stories behind it. Besides, I have a good command of English, so I have no difficulty communicating with others. Additionally, I am enthusiastic and responsible, so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. because all these qualities are mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,I was born into a doctors family of TCM, I _ it at an early age and later I _ TCM for 4 years at university and it enables me to _ some knowlege of TCM.,Tip1:Employ some advanced words and phrases,I was born into a doctors family of TCM , I was deeply interested in it at an early age. Later I have spent 4 years studying TCM at university and it enables me to have a good knowledge of TCM.,Polishing,had a great passion for / was passionate about,was keen on,have majored in,become greater in number or quantity,accumulate,_a doctors family of TCM, I was keen on it at an early age and have majored in TCM at university for 4 years,_ me to accumulate some knowlege of it.,Tip2: Employ v-ing/v-ed form(doing/done.),I was born into a doctors family of TCM , and I was keen on it at an early age. I have majored in TCM at university for 4 years and it enables me to accumulate some knowlege of it.,Born into,enabling,_ the dense atmosphere of TCM family, I am passionate about TCM , so I take a course of it at college and I have accumulated some knowledge of it,I have been exposed to the dense atmosphere of TCM family and I am passionate about TCM , so I take a course of it at college and I have accumulated some knowledge of it.,Having been exposed to,Tip2: Employ v-ing/v-ed form (doing/done/having done.),be immersed in,Immersed in /Having been immersed in the dense atmosphere of TCM family ,I am passionate about TCM .,_ the theory to the people around, but also tell the stories behind them.,Tips3: Use inversion,I can not only explain the theory to the people around, but also tell the stories behind them.,Not only can I explain,Hearing that some volunteers are wanted for the coming community activity themed TCM, _ to apply for the position.,I hear that some volunteers are wanted for the coming community activity themed TCM , I can hardly wait to apply for the position.,hardly can I wait,Tips3: Use inversion,Born into a doctors family of TCM, I am keen on it at an early age and have majored in TCM at university for 4 years,_ me to have a good knowlege of it.,Tip4 : Employ attributive clauses,I was born into a doctorfamily of TCM , I am keen on it at an early age. I have majored in TCM at university for 4 years and it enables me to have a good knowlege of it.,which enables,I have a good command of English, _ it possible for me to communicate with others without any difficulty.,I have a good command of English, so I have no difficulty communicating with others.,making,I have a good command of English, _ it possible for me to communicate with others _,which makes,without any difficulty.,I am enthusiastic and responsible and I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,_, I _ believe that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Tips 5: Use adjs,Enthusiastic and responsible,do,Tips 6:Use special sentences (do/does/did + V原),Enthusiastic and responsible , I do believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Enthusiastic and responsible, I do _ that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Tips 7 :Use noun clauses,hold the belief,I am quite qualified that I have a good command of English, so I have no difficulty communicating with others.,_ is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty communicating with others.,Tips 7 :Use noun clauses,What qualifies me,What makes me qualified,My previous abundant experience as a volunteer distinguishes me from others .,_ is my previous abundant experience as a volunteer .,Tips 7 :Use noun clauses,What distinguishes me from others,Because all these qualities are mentioned above, I cam say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.,_ , I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.,Tips 8 : with +n.+ doing/done /todo,With all these qualities mentioned above,Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming community activity themed TCM , hardly can I wait to apply for the position. Born into a doctors family of TCM, I was keen on it at an early age and have majored in TCM at university for 4 years, enabling me to accumulate some knowledge of it. Not only can I explain the theory to the people in the community, but also tell the stories behind it. Besides, What qualifies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty in communicating with others. Additionally, enthusiastic and responsible, I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,1: some advanced words and phrases,2: v-ing/v-ed form,3: inversion,4: attributive clauses,5: adjs as adverbial,6: do/does/did + V原,7: noun clauses,Tips :,8: with +n.+ doing/done /todo,假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的外国中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1.口语能力2.相关经验3.应聘目的注意：1.词数80左右 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯,A Good Practical Writing,neat handwrting,covering all points,various sentence patterns,proper linking words,tense,no spelling and grammar mistakes,sincere tone,adding some details,Thanks,