高考英语书面表达应用文感谢信课件 .pptx
A letter of appreciation,假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教Mr. Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 描述事情经过；3. 再次表达感谢。,Requirements of the letter,审题四问一问类型:二问人称:三问时态:四问要点:,感谢信-感谢老师,以第二人称为主,一般现在时+一般过去时,描述事情经过，表达感谢。,思考1.语气?2.需要自我介绍吗?,哪个要点使用一般过去时?,事情是如何发生的?,Courtesy,Correctness,Conciseness,Clarity,4C,The structure of the letter,写信目的：自我介绍+表达 感谢,感谢原因（书包丢失过程+ 包内物品意义+心情+失而复得后的感受（+回报）,再次感谢,Im writing to express/convey.,强调句，虚拟语气，定语从句，非谓语,Thanks again,1.语言不得体2. 格式错误，人称后没有逗号3 .单词拼写错误较多， 如gratitude4.语法错误， 主要出现在虚拟语气的运用和词性混乱5.时态错误，帮助时用了一般现在时6.非智力错误 ，后面还有位置没有看到导致字数不够7.语言过于夸张，以至于显得不够真诚,Our problems,单词拼写错误,gratitude,significant,embarrassed,语气不得体(courtesy),语言过于夸张,内容不够充实,表达感谢：1. Hardly could I resist my gratitude when Im given the schoolbag. Conssequently, Im writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you. （倒装）2. Exhilarated to know that you have found my lost bag and sent it to the Lost and Found, Im writing to extend my cordial gratitude to you. （形容词做状语）3. With the exhilaration of having my lost school bag found, Im writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you.（介词短语）,语料积累,Beginning: writing purpose,How to improve your language,描述书包丢失经过：1. Last sunday, I was participating in the school basketball team training. You can imagine, so fatigued and careless I was, that I even forgot to take my bag after the practice.（复合句）2. Absorbed in the happiness of winning, I forgot my bag until I got home. （非谓语）3. So blank-minded was I that I left my bag on the playground last Sunday. What inside it were my student card and purse, without which I even couldnt have access to school. （倒装）4. So exhausted was I that I was keen to return home and have a break, which contributed to the loss of my bag.（倒装，非限制性定语从句）,Body:,描述书包丢失经过：5. I felt it an urge to catch a bus to go back home, so my schoolbag that contained my student card and purse was left behind. （it做形式宾语）6. When I realized the loss of it, I hastily turned back to the playground, but it was gone. (巧用副词)7. I combed(仔细搜寻) every corner of the ground, but in vain. (高级词汇词),Body:,描述心情着急的佳句：1. I was anxious like a cat on hot bricks.(比喻)2. Anxiety dominated / captured me for the whole night.（物称主语）3. So anxious was I that I searched everywhere inch by inch, but in vain. （倒装）4. Totally at a loss what to do to find my lost bag, I had no alternative but to pray for miracles. (介词短语做状语)5. I was brimful of anxiety and regret. 6. My heart sank into an abyss of anxiety.7. I looked for it hither and thither(四处)， which totally messed me up(使心情恶劣).,Body:,描述心情着急的佳句：7. When I was plunged into utter despair, it was you that found it and handed it in, saving me out of the trouble.8. At that time, I was on the verge of tears, because all of my important things were in it.9. I was so twitchy(焦急的，焦虑不安的) and upset.10. After hours of aimless search, I was excessively frustrated.11. So significant was it to me that I was completely overwhelmed by anxiety.12. I was so anxious that I wore an expression of distress all day.,Body:,描述失而复得的心情：1. It was you that extended me a helping hand- finding the bag, dragging me out of the trouble/ which took a load off my mind.(强调句)2. It came as a beacon of hope!3. It were your selflessness and kindness that helped to cut down my loss. What you did was correspondingly set an example for us.(强调句)4. I was in despair. News came that you have handed it to school, which really made me in relief.5. The schoolbag is of great significance for me. Hearing that you had it picked up, my worries faded immediately.,Body:,描述失而复得的心情：6. Im soaked in great happiness when I got my bag back.7. Your kind action will indubitably take deep root in my heart and keep emerging in my mind, which was bound to be a wonderful example for us to learn.,Body:,你的帮助对我的重要性：1. Your seemingly ordinary deed did mean a lot to me.I can never thank you enough for your kindness!2. Had it not been your kindness, I would be more than anxious and faced with piles of issues triggered by losing my ID card.(虚拟语气)3. It is you that save me from a lot of trouble.(强调句)4. It was your kind action that dumped down the heavy stone in my heart and your virtue, needless to say, has taken deep root/ been engraved in my mind.(强调句，插入语),Body:,再次致谢：1. It was obliged for me to voice my thankfulness once more.2. Words failed me when I want to convey my indebtedness again.(物称主语)3. Your kindness urges me to extend my sincere gratitude to you again. Thanks a million.(物称主语)4. Thanks again from the bottom of my heart. Your kindness will always be engraved in my mind.,Ending:,Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. Im writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my students ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the schools Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment! Please accept my cordial thanks for your help. Yours, Li Hua,参考范文,优秀习作一,点评: 该篇习作覆盖了所有要点，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，错误极少。虚拟语气及倒装的使用丰富了文章的句式；triggered这一非谓语动词做后置定语的妙用，彰显学生扎实的功底；高级词汇engrave的使用更是为文章增色不少。全文句式丰富，结构紧凑，逻辑连贯，符合5C原则，不失为第五档(13-15)佳作。,on,优秀习作二,sending,dropping,voluntary,was,点评: 该篇习作覆盖了所有要点，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，虽有一些语法和拼写错误，但是主要是因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所致。拟人手法的使用，panicked非谓语动词的使用，ultimately 副词的妙用，都是全文的亮点。不失为第四档12分佳作。,优秀习作三,so careless was I that I forgot to,would,点评: 该篇习作覆盖了所有要点，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，错误较少, 高级词汇thunderstruck, exhilaration,be confronted with以及 with介词短语做状语使得文章句式丰富，读来让人眼前一亮，可归为第五档(13-15)。,Homework,假定你是李华，暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游Mr. Smith的悉心照顾，回国后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。主要内容： 1. 回忆旅行中美好时光； 2. 遇到的困难和得到的帮助； 3. 邀请他来中国旅游。注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,
