读后续写 复习课件 高三英语.pptx
读后续写,conflict,resolution,crow,beak,conflict,Suddenly , he found a water bottle, but the opening was too small for the crows beak to fit in.,resolution,The wise crow found a lot of stones and put them in the bottle , making the water come up.,behavior,feelings,A peek into the story,Activity : Read for basic information.,before task,characters,first task,second task,behavior,help the plane; show the light,feelings,look after goats,behavior,happy/proud/excited/,promise; cant show the light,nervous/calm/worried/,Marie,French soldiers,German soldiers,before task,characters,first task,second task,help the plane; show the light,look after goats,happy/proud/excited/,promise; cant show the light,nervous/calm/worried/,Marie,French soldiers,German soldiers,Savor the story,Activity 1 : Predict what happened next.,conflict,resolution,Para7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._Para 8: Noiselessly she got out of the cottage and set fire to it. _,Suddenly a good idea hit her.,Activity 2. Present the first sentences of the next two paragraphs to check whether you have a logical guessing.,Para 7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._,Why did Marie feel more and more anxious?And how did the author bring out her anxiety?,Construct the content of the story,Construct the content of the story,Activity: Review the text and find out ways to express the feelings according to the details.,Im helping the plane; wondering,did as told;heard a plane flyingsat still;couldnt show the light;,I wont fail,a large forest;night fell;two German soldiers with guns; forbidden;,Her feelings,happyproudnervousfirmcalmworried,actions,thoughts,words,surroundings,?,?,?,more and more anxious,Construct the content of the story,actions,thoughts,surroundings,words,Activity: Create the details by yourself according to the four ways to express the feelings .,Continue the story,Para 7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._ _,Requirements: 1.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；3.字数70词左右。,Evaluate the continuation,Checklist（ ）Have I included at least 5 of the given words and underlined them？（ ）Have I described people and things in four ways?（ ）Have I used appropriate transitional words（过渡语） to make the paragraph coherent?（ ）Have I used the simple past tense to narrate（叙述） the story?（ ）Are there any grammatical errors in plurals and verb forms?,Para. 7 With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious. She quietly approached the little window，however, the German soldier suddenly turned over. Marie held her breath, standing still. Fortunately, they didnt wake up. As time went by, the anxiety in her heart accumulated. “ Tonight is very important.” the words from the French soldier echoed around her ears. “I wont fail!” she repeated it firmly, thinking about how to show the light instead. Suddenly, a good idea hit her.,1. Polish your continuation writing. 2. Finish the second paragraph and evaluate it by yourself.,Assignment,续写训练,【主旨大意】这篇文章主要描述的是“我”小时候，由于家庭的原因，很少有到室外玩耍的机会，同时，在家里也没有人陪“我”玩耍，由于贪玩，“我”和朋友们一起偷偷跑出去，骑自行车玩耍。 【续写思路】 根据段首语提示，续写第一段，不知道从哪里突然冒出来一个小男孩，此时的“我”正骑着自行车疾驶，为了避免相撞，“我”肯定要采取措施。第二段的段首语写到“我”妈妈匆忙赶去医院，反推第一段，说明“我”受伤了。因此，在第一段中应该主要写“我”受伤的情况，环环相扣。第二段写后来的结果，“我”的伤势应该不严重，但是自行车有损坏。从这件事情上，妈妈和“我”都进行了反思。,【写作风格】 主要抓住动作和心理细节进行描绘。在语句中多使用动词、形容词、非谓语动词进行描写。注意衔接词的运用。重点词汇：meanwhile adv.与此同时 consequently adv.因此 struggle v.挣扎 fortunately adv.幸运的是 severely adv.严重地 guilty adj.内疚的 regretful adj.后悔的重点短语：to ones surprise 令某意外的是 out of control 失去控制重点句型：so.that. 部分倒装; When doing sth非谓语动词； 强调句和定语从句.,Paragraph 1 Suddenly out of nowhere,a little boy appeared in front of me. So nervous was I that I made a sudden turn to the other direction in order to avoid him. （面对意外闯出的小男孩，“我”为了避免撞到他，急打自行车的方向。）However, the bike was out of control. (急打方向导致的结果就是自行车失去控制。) Consequently,I knocked onto a tree and fell over.（自行车失去控制导致“我”撞到树上）When struggling to stand up,I felt my right leg was in great pain,blood flowing out from my trousers.（“我”撞到树上后受伤。）Seeing this,Junil was frightened and he immediately rushed to the grocery store to call up my mom.（看到我受伤，“我”的朋友赶快去给“我”母亲打电话。）,Paragraph 2 About half an hour later,my mom came and drove me to the nearest hospital.Fortunately,I wasnt seriously hurt.Noticing mothers anxious expression,I felt guilty to make her worried about me.(看到妈妈对“我”的担心，我感到内疚。)To my surprise,my mother didnt blame me for going out.Instead,she said sorry for not taking good care of me,which made me even more regretful.（妈妈没有责备“我”，而是反思自己的过错。）Meanwhile,the bike I rode was severely damaged and my mother bought a new one for my friend.（自行车坏了，妈妈买了一辆新的给“我”朋友。妈妈的做法是非常正确的。）It was through this experience that I realized accident may happen any time and that mother is always the one who loves me best.（总结全文，注意安全很重要，妈妈永远是最爱自己的人。）,
