读后续写技能——动作的细节描写（下） 课件- 高三英语二轮复习.pptx

前言,动词是句子的灵魂！古今中外，无论哪种语言，优秀的作家都是动词表达的高手。【作者在写作时，应当精准地、贴切地运用动词，这样可以使不在场的读者时有强烈的画面感，如同身临其境一般。】同学们知道，在记叙文中有大量的动作的细节描写，所以同学们在写读后续写时也要遵循这一特点。本节学案在于观察优秀的案例，从而加强学生们精准运用动词的意识及多用具体动作去表达人物状态，本学案的动词及相关表达需要背诵，请同学们好好学习并加以利用。学生们平时也要扩充词汇量，积累更多的动词词汇。Ms Lee衷心地祝愿每一位高三学生能在续写上有所突破，人人有进步！,通过学习我们发现，原来走路walk的动作可以做到非常具体的表达，为了举一反三，我们把我们身体各个部位的动词进行整合，分别可以学到以下贴切的动作表达，请背诵好并加以利用！,手的动词=提手旁，手字底，单人旁等的中文,此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。,1. Speechless, she smiled radiantly(灿烂的) and gathered her son into her arms. 2. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly. 3. Then, grabbing the tin can, he headed for the shop. 4. He parked down the street and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.5. The man gently wrapped the gift in yellow paper and placed the parcel in Reubens hands.6. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.,把.挽在怀里,挥舞着,抓着,停车,冲出,打包,把.放置,举起/开,她说不出话来，灿烂地笑了 然后把她的儿子抱在她的怀里。,越靠近它，她越是疯狂地挥舞着那件黄色上衣。,然后，他抓起罐头朝商店走去。,他把车停在街上，冲到前门，激动得浑身发抖。,多拉打开盖子，泪水开始模糊她的视线,那个男人用黄色的纸轻轻地把礼物包好，然后把包裹放在Ru的手里。,手的动词=提手旁，手字底，单人旁等的中文,此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。,7. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.8. She didnt say a word, but smiled and held my hand tightly.9. As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were. 10. He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?” 11. She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course .” 12. He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.,敲响着,紧紧握住我的手,和.握手,拍手,轻抚/抚摸,挤压,看到没有其他人注意到我们，我放下了圣诞礼物，敲响了他的门铃。,她一句话也没说，只是微笑着紧紧握住我的手。,当我们与新主人握手时，我告诉他们有多么的幸运。,他拍了拍我的头，询问道：“你有什么特别想要的吗？,她用手指抚摸我的头发，说：“当然。”,他如此使劲捏我的手腕，以致于疼得要命。,此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。,13. He handed the letter to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.14. Stevie pointed to me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.15. “Im Nancy Drew,” she said, holding out her hand. 16. The class clapped warmly as Ms. Lee presented mewith the reward.17. He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.18. Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.,把.递给,手的动词=提手旁，手字底，单人旁等的中文,指着,拉出,伸出,鼓掌,送/颁发,伸进,取出,捡起,粉刷,他把信递给我，我打开信时，三张20美元的钞票落在我的桌子上。,Steve指着我，然后指着他的母亲，然后拿出一条餐巾。,我是Nancy，”她伸出手说。,当李老师给我奖品时，全班同学热烈鼓掌。,他把手伸进口袋，取出一张纸条。,他平静地捡起刷子，又开始粉刷。,脚的动词=足字旁，立字旁，走字底等的中文,此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。,1. Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.2. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.3. Tom rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.4. Something terrible happened when Tom arrived at the factory.5. Then, grabbing the tin can, he headed for the shop.,向.走来,设法,冲,到达,朝.走去,然后丽莎站起来，穿过人群向我走来。,她设法爬上去，耐心地等待着。,汤姆冲到Water Street，吓得浑身发抖。,汤姆到达工厂时, 可怕的事情发生了。,然后，他抓着锡罐，朝商店走去。,脚的动词=足字旁，立字旁，走字底等的中文,此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。此处输入您的内容，选择只粘贴文字。,6. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.7. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.8. I dragged myself through daily affairs, feeling exhausted.9. The elderly man fled away with great panic.10. The man stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.,朝.走去,进入,拖着,逃脱,踏上,失望而沮丧, 这个可怜的人地回到了家里。,突然，那个女人站起来，哭着走进了房子。,我拖着身体， 处理日常事务，非常疲惫不堪。,老人惊慌失措地逃走了。,那人踏上讲台，好好地看了看那些画。,眼的动词=目字旁的中文,1. We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance of his face. 2. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell. 3. Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes.4. The woman was staring at the girl eagerly, trying to make a conversation.5. Then I examined each of the packages. 6. Her eyes fell on the photos of her.7. When he finished he raised his eyes and looked out the window.,看一眼，一瞥,我们都聚集在电视机前，祈祷 看一眼 他的脸。,看到没有其他人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，敲响了他的门铃。,她高兴地唱着歌，用天真的大眼睛 密切注视着周围的环境。,那个女人急切地盯着那个女孩，试图和她交谈。,然后我检查了每个包裹。,她的目光落在她的照片上。,当他说完后，他抬起眼睛向窗外望去。,看到,注意,密切注视,盯着,检查,目光落在,抬起,眼的动词=目字旁的中文,8. She had spotted a man pacing down the hall. 9. When the students stepped off the bus, Jamess eyes widened in surprise.10. We recognized the famous actor on his arrival.11. Feeling nervous, he just stood there staring at me, motionless, wondering how he could deal with the problem .12. Then he jumped up and down, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some gifts.13. I was taking my time, strolling in the park and looking in shop windows.,她看见一个男人在大厅里踱来踱去。,当学生们下车时，詹姆斯惊讶地睁大了眼睛。,那位著名演员一到 我们就认出了他。,他感到很紧张，只是站在那里盯着我，一动不动，不知如何处理这个问题。,然后他跳上跳下，当他跑去拿礼物时，眼睛一眨一眨地。,我慢慢来，在公园里散步，在商店橱窗里张望。,一.马上看见，认出,睁开,辨认,盯着,眨眼,张望,口的动词=言字旁、口字旁等的中文,1. Tom murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.2. “Here, Mum! Here!” Tom yelled out as he ran to her side.3. A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the criminal.4. I was getting ready to blow out all the candles(蜡烛) and shes getting ready to swallow the cake.5. “Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.,楠楠说,汤姆楠楠说了声谢谢，然后一路跑回家。,这里，妈妈！这里！”汤姆边跑向她边喊。,一名年轻人来到警察局，被一群记者包围，声称他已经发现了罪犯。,我正准备吹灭所有的蜡烛，她正准备吞下蛋糕。,该走了。”我低声对女孩说，希望她能马上跟我走。,叫喊,声称,吹灭,吞下,低声说,口的动词=言字旁、口字旁等的中文,6. My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line. 7. I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled, “Please just come to get the ball.” 8. Frank told Belle about his misfortune, and then sighed.9. The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice.,当我冲向终点线时，队友们都在尖叫。,我最后一次拿起球，咕哝道：“请过来拿球。”,弗兰克把他的不幸告诉了贝尔，然后叹了口气。,当时房子里真的很吵，每个人都在用最大的声音大喊大叫。,尖叫,咕哝，发牢骚,告诉,叹气,大喊大叫,口的动词=言字旁、口字旁等的中文,10. The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open. 11. He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “Its up to you.”12. “I havent finished; I need more time,” he begged, not joked.13. She greeted James and inquired. “Are you ready for our trip?” But James didnt respond. 14. “Isnt it?” Mrs. Damon questioned.,张大嘴巴,他脸上的笑容凝固了；他的嘴张得大大的。,他打断了沉默，宣布：“由你决定。”,我还没做完，我需要更多的时间，”他祈求道，不是开玩笑。,她向詹姆斯打招呼并询问。“你准备好我们的旅行了吗？”但詹姆斯没有回答,“难道不是吗？”达蒙太太质问道。,打断,祈求,开玩笑,打招呼,询问,回答，回应,质问,身的动作（部分或整体）-身字旁,1. She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.2. Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cape appeared before him.3. Dr. Beck suddenly found himself in surrounded by a crowd of people when he woke up.4. The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.5. They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.6. One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.,入睡，睡着,她睡着了，梦见了汤姆。,出现（可视的）,突然，一个身穿深色斗篷的高大身影出现在他面前。,发现他自己.,贝克博士醒来时，突然发现自己被一群人围住了。,推,小女孩慢慢地荡着秋千。,坐,凉爽的夜晚，他们坐在外面的木制门廊上，静静地交谈。,靠近，走近,其中一个人走上前来，礼貌地问我是否愿意把球扔还给他。,身的动作（部分或整体）-身字旁,7. Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.8. Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.9. In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.10. For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed (呆若木鸡).,弯腰,为了显得和蔼可亲，我弯下腰，捡起球，眼睛半闭，尽可能使劲地把球扔回去。,蹲坐,一上车，我就蹲坐在座位上闭上眼睛。,消失,转眼间，我的朋友在车里消失了，消失在一片尘土中。,瘫痪；呆,有那么一会儿，我只是站在那里，呆住了。,心理的动作-心字底或其他偏旁部首,1. These events constantly remind me of my fathers absence.2. I picture/imagine him walking through the window, wearing a shining smile.3. Most days I hope that maybe he will show up one day.4. At that very moment, he wondered whether he had gone.5. He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.6. So the young man realized he had made mistakes, and he took the great courage to admit that.,使某人想起某事,这些事经常使我想起父亲不在时。,想象,我想象着他带着灿烂的微笑，从窗户走过。,希望,大多数时候我都希望有一天他会出现。,想知道,就在那一刻，他想知道他是否已经走了。,决心做某事,他决心告诉人们真相，但没有人能听到他的声音。,意识到,因此，年轻人意识到自己犯了错误，他鼓足勇气承认这一点。,鼓起勇气,心理的动作-心字底或其他偏旁部首,7. I focused my thoughts on the research。8. We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other.9. Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father. 10. I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.11. I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would be beaten my someone.12. Then I tried to figure out what I should do.,集中思想；精力,我把思想集中在研究上。,达成一致,理解,我们点头表示同意，相互理解。,有.想法,不知怎的，我有了这样一个想法，那就是把我父亲叫醒会很有趣的。,想知道,我想知道他在哪里。我有一个新笑话要告诉他。,以免,我害怕睡觉，以免被人打。,弄清楚，弄明白,然后我想知道我该怎么做。,心理的动作-心字底或其他偏旁部首,13. There was something I could accomplish there, I convinced/persuade myself. 14. I decided to tackle the problems. 15. From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isnt the money you make. 16. I will cherish the happy memories for the rest of my life. 17. At this hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a bright light. 18. Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.,使.信服；说服,我认为我在那里可以完成一些事情， 我说服我自己。,决定,我决定解决这个问题。,得知，明白,从那次经历中，我明白了生活中最重要的不是你赚的钱。,珍惜,我将在我的余生中珍惜这些美好的回忆,想到一个好主意,汤姆想了一会儿，就要同意了；但他改变了主意。,想,在这绝望的时刻，他想到了一个好主意。这使他心中充满了光明,