九年级英语中考作文话题写作——课余生活 课件.pptx
课余生活,中考作文话题之,My After-school Life 提示：在课余生活中，你通常做些什么？有什么收获？请以“My After-school Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的课余生活。 要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分。_,写作五步法：,1. 审2. 构3. 列4. 连5. 美,文体_ 时态_ 人称_主题_,连字成句，连句成段。增加连接词语，丰富细节，拓展成文。,在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。,依据文章主题，构建文章框架。,依据提纲，列出要点。,1写作目的：_。2时态：介绍平时课余生活的活动，时态应用_。3人称：介绍自己的课余生活，人称应用_。4要点：(1) _； (2)_。,审好题,Step 1,介绍你课余生活的活动以及收获,一般现在时,第一人称,叙述课余生活都做些什么,你的收获,构框架,Step 2,列要点,Step 3,Step 4,连成句、连成段、拓成文,在此句前用It isadj.for sb.to do sth.句型补充说明对于中学生来说有课余生活是很重要的：_ My after-school life is colorful.用频度副词usually、 sometimes改写句子，使句子有主次之分，并补充在放学后看书、听音乐，和同学一起打篮球：I _ read books and listen to music _. I _ play basketball _ on weekdays.,usually,after school,sometimes,with my classmates,It is very important for middle school students to have after-school life.,Step 4,连成句、连成段、拓成文,用either.or合并为一个句子，并增加细节，补充说明和朋友一起看电影，和父母去公园散步：_ _用I think.再次强调主题，来引出自己感觉学习生活丰富多彩的原因，并用not only.but also.合并句子：_ _,I either go to the theater with my friends or take a walk in the park with my parents on weekends.,I think my after-school life is colorful because I not only learn the strength of working as a team, but also stay close with my friends and family.,Step 5,纠错润色，美化文章,1.字体和字数2.句子结构3.语法4.单词拼写5.高分句型,第五档（13-15分）要点全，行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误 （词汇拼写错误2个以内或语法错误1个）第四档（10-12分）要点全，语言可读性强，语言错误少 （词汇拼写错误4个以内或语法错误2个以内）第三档（7-9分）要点全，语言可读性较强，语言错误较多 （与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误6个以内或语法错误3个以内）第二档（4-6分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句子，有3-4个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）第一档（0-3分）要点不全，语言无可读性 （与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）,My After-school Life 提示：在课余生活中，你通常做些什么？有什么收获？请以“My After-school Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的课余生活。 要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分。_,【高分范文】My After-school Life_,It is very important for middle school students to have after-school life. My after-school life is colorful.I usually read books and listen to music after school. I sometimes play basketball with my classmates on weekdays. I either go to the theater with my friends or take a walk in the park with my parents on weekends. I think my after-school life is colorful because I not only learn the strength of working as a team, but also stay close with my friends and family.A colorful after-school life means a lot to me. I will try harder to make my after-school life more meaningful.,HomeworkA Weekend to Remember提示：请以“A Weekend to Remember”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟。要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。,
