高二英语第三次作文训练 课件.pptx
2021年1月浙江高考卷假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；难点3. 表达祝愿+致谢。注意：1. 词数为80左右；2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。para.1-问候+自我介绍+欢迎、para.2-介绍活动安排；(参观校园+在英语角与中国学生交流+参与文化舞蹈表演+享用一顿中国的传统美食)para.3-表达祝愿。,【表示欢迎】1. 首先，请允许我代表我们学校对你们表示热烈的欢迎。（on behalf of）First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school.2. 我很荣幸有这个机会欢迎大家来我们学校参观。be honored to do sth.Im honored to have this opportunity to welcome all of you to visit our school.,【表达祝愿】1. 祝您这次旅途愉快。journeyWish you a pleasant journey. 2. 希望你在我们学校过得愉快。have a good timeI hope you can have a good time in our school.,安排各种有趣的活动arrange various fun activities 校园观光a tour of our school参观英语角 visit the English corner 和学生交谈 提升友谊talk with our classmates promote our friendship 邀请某人做某事 invite sb. to do sth.参加文化舞蹈表演 take part in a cultural dance performance 准备 结束这一天 prepare for end the day,ara.1-问候+自我介绍+欢迎、 Hello to all of our precious guests from New Zealand. My name is Li Hua.First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of the school. para.2-介绍活动安排； For the next few days, weve arranged various fun activities.First，we will give you a tour of our school. Afterwards, you can visit the English corner to talk with our classmates and promote our friendship. Then, we invite you to take part in a cultural dance performance that we are preparing for the upcoming spring festivalcelebration. Finally,adelicious meal of traditional Chinese food will be the perfect way to end the day.para.3-表达祝愿。 We wish you a pleasant time at our school.Thats all ,thanks !,2020年7月浙江读后续写,Polar bears,When?Where?Who?What?Why?,Elli and I; a polar bear,one fall,the town of Churchill,Manitoba,Canada,A bear came to our camp and tried to get in.,Read for the basic information,The bear was hungry.,Read for the plot (情节),Resolution冲突解决,Ending,cooked dinner,tried defense.,kept tearing.,sprayed.,ran.,Development发展,Beginning,Climax 高潮,smelled.bread;to camp.,bit the wire.,？,Predict the end,1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.,2：At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.,saved,Resolution冲突解决,Ending,cooked dinner,tried defense.,kept tearing.,radioed.,sprayed.,ran.,Development发展,Beginning,Climax 高潮,smelled.bread;to camp.,pulled the fence;bit.,headed back,moment,helicopter arrived,Para.1,Para.2,？,？,What happened in the middle of each paragraph?,saved,Design the main points,Paragraph 1：,Paragraph 2：,1. What did the bear do after heading back? 2. What object(物品) did we use to prevent the bear?3. What was the bears reaction?.,1. What did we do then? 2. What about the bear?3. How did we feel after we were saved?.,Tip 1 生动的动词描写,1.它（熊）的吼叫声（roar）在我们周围回响（echo）The bears roar echoed all around us.,Tip 1 生动的动词描写,8.艾利抓起几片蒜蓉面包，把它们扔过栅栏.(grabbed, threw)Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence.14.我抓起相机，拍下了最后一张熊的照片 I grabbed my camera and took one last photo of the bear.,Tip 2 ing + 主谓结构,11.听到直升飞机的声音，我们迅速跑回营地，用颤抖(trembling)的声音呼叫我们的救主Hearing the helicopter, we ran back to the camp quickly, and radioed our savior in a trembling voice.12.听说我们没有受到任何身体伤害，飞行员让我们捂住耳朵。Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury, the pilot told us to cover our ears. 2.看到北极熊逼近，我吓得呆住了，吓得不敢动。 Seeing the approaching of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move.,Tip 3 -Ed+主谓,3.一种强烈的恐惧感抓住了我，我能感觉到手心冒汗。Seized by a strong sense of horror, I could feel my palms sweating.,Tip 4 With 的复合结构,9.熊跑远了，我叹了口气，如释重负。With the bear running away , I signed with relief.14.照了这张照片，我感到既轻松又幸运With the picture taken, I felt both relieved and lucky.,Tip 5,5.我吓得喉咙发紧，双膝发软 (so that的倒装 )I was so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.2.我的心跳得如此之快以至于我几乎喘不过气来。So fast did my heart beat that I could hardly take a breath. 3.尽管我很害怕，但我还是鼓起勇气把喷雾器拔了出来。 Though I was scared, I collected my bravery to pull out the spray.,Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! Attracted by the smell of the bread, the bear ran towards where the bread laid . The bear stopped the attack .With the bear running away , I signed with relief. But it wasnt long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. Elli contacted the pilot over the radio. Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury, he told us to cover our ears.“Thank goodness ，we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene .With the picture taken, I felt both relieved and lucky.we were robbed by a polar bear! What an exciting and unforgettable day ! (续写词数：159),
