《中考英语总复习》万能模板01 记叙文之写人型-备战2020年中考英语书面表达万能模板（解析版）.doc

分析全国近三年的中考题可知，书面表达中对“人物介绍类”的话题考查还是不少的，且形式比较统一。这类话题作文，通常会在背景材料中给出所写人物的基本信息、兴趣爱好、性格特点等关键词，以及在学习、工作、能力方面的经历等相关信息。学生只需认真审题，发生联想，理清思路，就可以轻松应对。我们以2019年广西百色市书面表达为例：假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题为"My Classmate"的短文。提示：1. 他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动； 2. 他乐于助人（举一个例子）； 3. 对他的评价。要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名； 2. 词数80左右。My Classmate_【参考范文】My ClassmateLi Hua is my classmate and my good friendHe is tall and handsomeHis grades are excellent and he always does well in examsHe is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important【高分句型一】（外貌和特长）He is ready to help othersHe often helps me with my English Last year he helped a tenyearold boy who lost his way find his mother（乐于助人）I think Li Hua is a kind personEverybody in my class likes him very much （对他的评价）I hope we will be good friends forever【高分句型二】（愿望）从写作要求和范文来看：首先，介绍人物的外形特征 其次，介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一个典型的事例；最后，提出愿望。我们针对此，对写人介绍人物进行以下剖析：模板介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一个典型的事例介绍人物的外形特征I have made many good friends. （引出人物）is one of them. She is （总体给人的感觉）. She is tall and （身材）. Her hair is （头发）. She always wears （表情）and gives us the impression that （给人的印象）.提出愿望 is always willing to （性格）. She is good at （特长）. Whenever I have problems I . Once （引出事例）. To my surprise, .We will , but I hope （表达愿望）.模板人物介绍（年龄、外貌、身份、性格等）.is a nine-year-old boy. He is very. and. He is very naughty. And he.典型事例（说明性格、品质等）人物评价（喜爱、夸赞等情感）He often. One day he.like him very much. I think he.【写作注意事项】 a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述；b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一；c. 在描写人的外貌时，常用一般现在时，人称常用第一人称或第三人称；d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。【写作方法】 第一段：人物介绍：引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如：年龄、外貌、身份、性格等；第二段： 叙述典型事例：通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等；第三段：对人物的评价：或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等。关于人物描写的英语素材一、描写人物外形的常用词汇难看的 _ 高的 _矮的 _挺直的 _ 大的 _小的 _近视眼的_超重的 _ 圆的 _瘦的 _ 长的 _ 卷发的 _乌黑的 _金黄色_中等身材 _帅 _美丽的 _明亮的 _ 长得好看 _不但年轻而且漂亮 _既不高也不矮 _大约40岁 _ 足够强壮 _一张圆脸 _ 一双大眼睛 _长的直发 _ 【答案】 uglytallshortstraightbigsmall near-sightedoverweightroundthinlongcurly blackgoldenmedium heighthandsomebeautifulbright good lookingnot only young but also beautifulneither tall nor short about 40 years oldstrong enougha round face a pair of big eyeslong straight hair 二、描写人物性格的常用词汇 懒的_ 善良的_严厉的_有耐心的_ 勇敢的_仔细的_粗心的 _ 聪明的_有信心的_不诚实的_容易相处的，随和的_开心的_努力的，勤劳的_助人的，有益的_无助的_ 诚实的_幽默的_ 活泼的_ 外向的_ 有礼貌的_ 受欢迎的_ 安静的_ 羞涩的_可爱的_ 滑稽的_【答案】lazykindstrictpatientbravecarefulcarelesscleverconfident dishonest easygoinghappyhard-workinghelpfulhelplesshonesthumorouslivelyoutgoingpolitepopularquietshylovelyfunny 三、表示人物间关系的词汇 mother _写出表示职业的词汇：student _【答案】 关系：mother，father，parents，grandfather，grandmother、uncle，aunt，schoolmate，cousin，classmate. 职业：teacher，doctor，nurse，policeman，dentist，cook，artist，scientist，soldier，manager，businessman， journalist，official.四、表达情感兴趣和爱好的常用词汇非常喜欢游泳_ 喜爱 _对画画感兴趣_不喜欢下棋 _喜欢，欣赏音乐 _擅长滑冰 _【答案】 like swimming very much love be interested in drawing dislike playing chess enjoy listening to music be good at skating 五、描述人物心情的常用词汇难过的 _ 高兴的 _ 兴奋的 _ 高兴的 _ 满意的 _ 生气的 _ 担心的 _ 失望的 _ 恐惧的 _ 有好的 _ 焦虑的 _ 好奇的 _ 急切的 _ 【答案】sadhappy excited pleasedsatisfiedangryworrieddisappointedterrifiedfriendly anxiouscuriouseager六、表达感恩的常用词汇在方面帮助_帮助某人做_在严格要求某人_鼓励某人做_感谢_多亏了 _【答案】 help sb with. help sb do sthbe strict with encourage sb to dothank forthanks to七、常用句型1. 他名字叫杰克。_ 她叫丽丽。_ 2. 他戴眼镜。_3. 苹果是我/他/她最喜爱的水果。 _4. 她1986年12月12日出生于北京。 _5. 他20岁。_6. 他来自英国。_7. 我爸是个好医生。_8. 他身高1.72。_ 他留短发。_9. 他和我们相处得好。_ 10. 他教我们英语教得好。_11. 他学习努力。_12. 他在二中工作。_13. 她对我们要求很严格。_14. 他在英语方面经常帮我。 _15. 张老师是个22岁、大眼长发的女孩。 _16. 她不但喜欢唱歌而且喜欢跳舞。 _17. 她是那么的友好和乐于助人以至于我们都很喜欢她。 _18. 在他的帮助下，我在英语方面取得很大进步。 _19. 李明擅长滑冰。 _ 20. 他对打篮球感兴趣。 _21. 他喜欢放学后踢球。 _22. 她经常照顾奶奶。 _23. 我感谢张老师帮助我学英语。 _24. 妈妈经常鼓励我学好英语。 _【答案】1. His name is Jack. Her Name is Lily. 2. He wears glasses. 3. Apples are my/his/her favorite fruit. 4. She was born in Beijing on December 12, 1986. 5. He is 20 years old。 6. He comes from England. 7. My father is a good doctor. 8. He is about 1.72 meters in height. He has short hair. 9. He gets on well with us. 10. He teaches English very well.11. He works very hard. 12. He works in No. 2 Middle School. 13. She is strict with us. 14. He often helps me with my English. 15. Miss. Zhang is a 22-year-old girl with big eyes and long hair. 16. She likes not only singing but also dancing. 17. She is very friendly and helpful. So we all like her. 18. With his help, I have made great progress in English. 19. Li Ming is good at skating 20. He is interested in playing basketball 21. He loves playing football after school. 22. She often looks after/ takes care of her grandmother. 23. I thank Miss Zhang for helping me learn English. 24. Mother often encourages me to learn English well. 【篇首句】1. Once there was a. 从前，有一个2. .was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. 出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。3. As a child of.years old. 还是个岁的孩子时4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert.)to be held by.in.(place)at.(time). 一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由举办5. In the past. years. has impressed me deeply. 在过去的年里给我留下了深刻的印象。6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father. 在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。【篇中句】1. .gives us the impression that. 给我们印象。2. .spend his childhood in.在度过了他的童年。3. I was about to. when. 我正要，突然，4. Hardly had I done. when. /No sooner had I done. than. 我刚，就/我一，就5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family. 他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt. 他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive. 她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。8. One day, I . 有一天，我【篇尾句】1. It turns out to be. 结果是2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed. 我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。3. Now I understand my fathers love to me. I will never forget my father. 现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents. 从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。（一）【2019 广西柳州市】假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：年龄与外表16岁；高大健壮兴趣与爱好喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐；最喜欢的科目是英语性格与为人风趣幽默；乐于助人、容易相处注意： 1. 词数70左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇： 高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music 最喜欢的科目favourite subject风趣幽默funny and humorous 乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on withDear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you._I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishesYours, Li Hua【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，介绍陈东的情况年龄与外表、兴趣与爱好、性格与为人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。初写短文。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。【参考范文】Dear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to youHe is a 16-year-old boyHe has round face ，black hair and bright eyesHe is tall and strongHe likes smiling very much（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征）He likes doingh sportsreading and listening to musicHis favourite subject is English because he thinks it is very interestingHe is humorous and funnyHe is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 【要点二，介绍同学的性格】He likes doing sportsreading and listening to musicHis favourite subject is Englishbecause he thinks it is very interestingHe also spends much time taking part in after-school activities（高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on【要点三，介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades【要点四，介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friendWith my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿）Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】高分句型一He likes smiling very much此句是一般现在时的陈述句运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑"注意like后加doing高分句型二He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities此句是一般现在时的陈述句运用短语spendsome time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"短语take part in "参加"此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动"（二）【2019 湖北省武汉市】学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。内容要点如下：1. 三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；2. 父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；3. 分担家务，周末户外活动；4. 相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长；5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。注意：1文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2词数：60 80；3内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： popular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n规矩My FamilyIm Li Ming. _【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。【参考范文】My FamilyIm Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers a