《中考英语总复习》热点 09 共享单车 -2021年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点09 共享单车 共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：共享单车。 【预测题目】（一）共享单车为人们的出行带来了越来越多的便利，可是人们在享用的时候却带来了一系列的问题。比如有人把单车带回了老家，有人使用自己的二维码骗取使用者的钱财，有人随意停放共享单车，有人甚至将共享单车扔到沟里，河里请你写一封倡议书，倡议人们热爱公共资源，保护公共资源，合理使用公共资源，如此，我们的生活才会因为公共设施的改善而变得更加美好。请从以下三个方面去谈：1.共享单车方便了人们的出行，减少污染，有利于环境的改善。2.列举人们对共享单车的破坏行为。3.合理使用共享单车，热爱公共资源，做一个文明的深圳人。要求：1.词数至少80词，要包含上述三个方面的内容，不必字字翻译。2.所给词汇仅作参考，不必都用。3.文章开头已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：QR Code（二维码）, public resources（公共资源）, cheat people of their money（骗钱）, environmentally friendly（环保的），low-carbon life（低碳生活）, civilization（明）, progress（进步）Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. _ _【答案】Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. People can use it anytime and anywhere. Sometimes people work so late that they dont have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. There are also people who are usually busy with work and dont have enough time to exercise. They will share bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.However, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. For example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own QR code to cheat the user's money, someone parked the bike at will, some people even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.I think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. Only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇议论文，主要是针对共享单车给人们带来的便利以及人们对共享单车的一些破坏行为的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，对带来的便利和人们对其的破坏阐述的比较详细，也是本文的重点可以通过三个方面进行阐述。2. 例文点评：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要说明共享单车给人们的生活带来的便利好处，第二段主要写了人们对共享单车所做的一些破坏行为，第三段主要写了一些倡议，提倡人们热爱公共资源。文章结构比较紧密，语言通顺，结构严谨。3. 高分亮点：短语：be busy with；instead of；be beneficial to；a series of；for example；not only but also。句型：so that引导的结果状语从句；who引导的定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；I think宾语从句。（二）共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,Im siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. _Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.Its very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。（一）2018年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, dont bring home要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数80左右。(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think_ Whats your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think its a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. Whats more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes its hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Dont bring it home or keep it your own. Whats your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，whats more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ Whats more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。（二）共享单车（sharing bikes)给我们提供了更健康、更环保的出行方式。但与此同时，种种不文明现象也相继出现。假如你是小记者，请根据以下的要点写一篇关于共享单车的优点以及存在问题的相关报道。1. 短文应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数：80 词左右 (开头:已:给出，不计入词数）Lately, have you noticed something new in our city? They are orange, yellow, blue and greenthey are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular._【答案】Lately, have you noticed something new in our city? They are orange, yellow, blue and greenthey are sharing bikes which are becoming more and more popular.There are a lot of advantages of sharing bikes. Firstly, it can be rented everywhere. It is so convenient. Secondly, riding sharing bikes instead of driving cars can reduce pollution and it is good for the environment. Thirdly, it is cheaper than taking other kinds of transportation and it can help us save some money.However, it is facing some problems now. For example, some people parked the sharing bikes here and there, which is bad for the road safety. Whats worse, some of the sharing bikes were broken or even stolen by some selfish persons.In my opinion, government should set rules to force the users to obey the rules. The person who broke or stole the bikes should be punished by government. Lets try to make bike-sharing, a green way of city transport have a better future.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。（三）现在正在推广使用共享单车， 提倡人们“绿色出行， 低碳生活” 现在某英文网站就此话题征文，根据内容要点 用英语写一篇短文投稿， 谈谈推广共享单车的好处。内容要点：1.首先, 骑自行车出行方便，可以随时租还（rent and return）; 2.其次, 如果更多的人骑自行车， 街道上就不会那么拥挤；3.最重要的是， 骑自行车几乎没有污染， 有助于保护环境。要求：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点， 可适当发挥。2.80词左右， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think its a good thing_ _ 【答案】Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think its a good thing.First of all, its convenient for people to go out by bike. They can rent and return the bikes at any time. Secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work. If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets wont be as crowed as they are now. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution.I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。内容是根据所给的要点 用英语写一篇短文，谈谈推广共享单车的好处。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1. 首先，骑自行车出行方便，可以随时租还（rent and return）；2. 其次，如果更多的人骑自行车，街道上就不会那么拥挤；3. 最重要的是，骑自行车几乎没有污染，有助于保护环境。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。第一段开篇点题，提出共享单车。第二段介绍推广共享单车的益处。第三段呼吁人们“绿色出行， 低碳生活”。 3.高分亮点：短语：first of all；go out；at any time；as we know；go to school；more and more。句型：1. First of all, its convenient for people to go out by bike. 首先，人们骑自行车出门是很方便的。First of all首先；it is +形容词 for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是的。2. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution. 最重要的是骑自行车可以保护环境，因为污染会减少。that引导表语从句；because引导原因状语从句；there will be将会有。（四）最近，“共享单车(bike-sharing)”风靡锡城，大街小巷随处可见五颜六色的自行车。请你根据以下表格信息写一篇关于共享单车的英语短文。种类6种；约4万辆；优势1. 人们使用方便；花费少；2. 得到锻炼，有利健康；3. 减少交通压力；4. 弊端1. 有些人不爱惜自行车；2. 有些人做违法的事；建议1. 使用完，保持自行车排放有序；2. 注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 短文开头已给出，省略号处共须23句话作适当发挥；3. 词数90个左右；4. 参考词汇：减少 reduce；压力 stress / pressureNowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in Wuxi. A large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets。_ _ 【答案】Nowadays, bike-sharing has been popular in Wuxi. A large number of colourful bicycles can be seen everywhere in the streets. There are six different kinds of bicycles. About 40000 bicycles have been/are in service/use. Bike-sharing has brought some advantages. People can use them easily but pay a little. Riding is a good exercise and is good for our health. It helps to reduce traffic stress. It also helps to protect the environment. But it has caused some problems. Some people can't use bicycles properly. Others even do something against the law. I hope that people should keep bicycles in order after riding them. We should take good care of bicycles.【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达共享单车的优点、缺点以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如advantages, be good for, help to do, properly, against the law, in order以及take good care of等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。1. Its our duty to save water2. As we know, water is very important to man,3. We cant live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. But some people dont care about it.6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.7. Its our duty to protect our environment。8. It is very important to take care of our environment9. We should not throw litter onto the ground10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the treesIn recent days, we have to face I pro