《中考英语总复习》热点14-减负-2020中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点14 减负 减负无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来了很大的影响。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：减负。【预测题目】（一）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Jack 听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下列内容，用英语写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。内容要点如下：1. 过去课后常常做很多作业，甚至周末会上课，睡得很晚；2. 现在有很多自由时间读课外书，参观博物馆等；3. 周末不上课，可做自己想做的事情；4. 晚上有时间看新闻，不必再熬夜；5. 补充一两点个人情况。注意：1.书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.词数：60-80； 3.内容要连贯得体。参考词汇： used to v.过去常常 free adj.自由的 museum n. 博物馆 Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again!_ _Lovely yours,Li Ming【参考范文】Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have changed a lot. I used to have to do endless homework after class and attend classes even on weekends. Now I have more free time. I can do some reading and visit museums and so on. On weekends, I can follow my own interests such as going for a movie and visiting friends. In the evenings I can watch mews on TY. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. Lovely yours Li Ming 【解析】本文是材料作文，关于中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，文章的要点都已经给了出来，因为是对比减负前和减负后的情况，所以要注意时态，减负前用过去时，减负后用一般现在时，描写的时候要以时间为顺序，选择合适的单词或短语、句型把要点的含义恰当的表达出来，考生还需要用恰当的连接词把各要点连接成流畅的文章，同时要变换使用各种句式，丰富文章的结构。（二）减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time MoreMeaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。注意： (1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacyHow to make our spare time more meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?_【参考范文】Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, whats more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（一）为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了中小学生减负措施（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你站在中学生的立场从下面几个方面向你的英国笔友Mike简单介绍其中的内容，并谈谈你自己的看法。1.作业方面：初中家庭作业不超过90分钟；2.电子产品方面：严禁学生将手机带入课堂；3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；4.你的看法注意：1.词数80100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,In order to improve students health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce （减少） students' pressure （压力）. Let me tell you something about them._Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mike,In order to improve students heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少）students pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them.Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students. Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.Secondly, mobile phones shouldnt be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文，作文内容是向笔友介绍中小学生减负措施，提示给出三个方面：作业方面、电子产品方面和习惯方面。除介绍这三个方面外，还需要发表自己的看法。字数控制在80-100字。根据提示可知，文章主要人称是第三人称，时态为一般现在时，题材为说明文。例文点评：本例文采取多段式的写法，第一段总领全文，以“Let me tell you something about them.”开头，引出下文对措施的介绍，第二、三和四段采用分条分段的方式，分别从作业方面、电子产品方面和习惯方面三个方面介绍，第五段以“In my opinion”开头引出自己的想法。这样分段条理清晰，表述明确。上下文的连接过渡词使用得当，文中多次应用被动语态、从句和一般将来时，为文章增色。高分亮点：短语：be expected to；go over；in time；so that；in my opinion；be helpful to；as well as。句型：And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.；Secondly, mobile phones shouldnt be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.；If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.（二）最近,为了给学生减负,部分地区出台了一系列政策限制学生上各种各样的补习班。对此,家长和学生持有不同的观点。请你以“Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?”为题,参照表内提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。Parents ideasYour ideas1.strengthen(巩固) what is learned in class1.2. be good for their future2.3. learn a lot3. 要求:1.所写内容必须包括表格中家长的观点和你的至少三个观点。2. 词数:80词左右。_【参考范文】Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?Nowadays, some parents stop pushing their children from class to class, but some dont. Because they want to prepare better lives for their kids. And they believe it can help them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, know-ledge is life.However, I don t think so. On the one hand, we students need organized activities. On the other hand, we are under too much pressure, so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ourselves.So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselves.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求写要不要给孩子上各种补习班，为什么家长要给孩子上补习班，最后给出自己的观点。2.例文点评：例文通过对要不要给孩子上各种补习班，为什么家长要给孩子上补习班，最后给出自己的观点等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3.高分亮点：stop doing，prepare for，it做形式宾语；非限制性定语从句；after all，谚语know-ledge is life，On the one handOn the other hand，by ourselves等。（三）现如今很多学生都在抱怨学习压力太大，以此为题，写篇不少于80字的文章。_【参考范文】As a student I am very pleased to see that the burden of learning have reduced .Endless homework and classes made me crazy and we all hate learning,but we have no choice but to accept them . Now days the burden of learning gradually reduce: we need not to go to school so early, we have fewer jobs, on weekends and holidays we don't need to worry about making up a missed lesson . We can have more free time to play games together with students and friends , have more time to rest, to see our favorite films and television, to read some interesting books. Have a good rest help us to meet the lessons more of spirit. Of course,we can not be completely study free time means that we can make full use of time to improve learning with in all it is surely that reducing burden benefit all students.作为一名学生，我很高兴看到学习负担减轻了，没完没了的家庭作业和课堂作业让我疯狂，我们都讨厌学习，但我们别无选择，只能接受。现在学习的负担逐渐减轻了：我们不必这么早就上学了，我们的工作更少了，周末和节假日我们不用担心补课。我们可以有更多的空闲时间和同学们一起玩游戏，有更多的时间休息，看我们最喜欢的电影和电视，读一些有趣的书。好好休息，帮助我们更多地吸取精神上的教训。当然，我们不能完全研究自由时间意味着我们可以充分利用时间，提高学习效率。所有这一切肯定是减负惠及所有学生。（四）写作要求：1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。_【参考范文】The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.1. So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study.2. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. 3. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.4. In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.5. In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.6. In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.7. Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. 8. We are young and we have young hearts. 9. We love study as well as amusements. 10. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. 11. How nice to hear from you again!12. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? 13.In order to improve students heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce students pressure.14. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.15. Recently Ive made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our schoolThe topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三).From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（一）你校为推进素质教育，进行了教学“减负”活动。假如你是学校学生会的学习部长，对“减负”前后的情况进行了调查，调查情况如下图，请根据此图写一篇文章发表在校报上。注意：1.短文必须包括图表内容； 2.可适当增加评注性语言； 3.词数100左右； 4.文章的第一段已经给出，不计入总词数。 Recently Ive made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school_