《中考英语总复习》热点06 共享单车-2020中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.docx

热点6 共享单车共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：共享单车。【预测题目】（一）假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车mobike很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。注意：1. 词数不少于80；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code_【参考范文】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter.Its very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua（二）共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸 多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。来源:学。科。网Z。X。X。诸多优势1. 随处可见，出行方便2. 有益健康，减少污染3. 费用不高，负担得起存在问题1. 未及时归还2. 占道挡路你的观点我认为参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1. 短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2. 表格中你的观点一栏用23句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。 3. 词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _ _【参考范文】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cant return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, its a way of living a green life.（一）作为共享经济的新形态，共享单车（mobikes）极大方便了人民，请你结合图示写篇关于共享单车的短文_【参考范文】With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into peoples lives and become increasingly popular. It is very convenient for you to use. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time. It has some advantages. You also can exercise by riding Mobikes. Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.When you ride a Mobike, you should follow some rules. For example, youd better wear a helmet to keep safe. And you should follow the traffic rules. When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldnt make a call because it can be dangerous. If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary.【解析详解】这篇作文要求我们对共享单车的流行进行介绍，题目中利用图表的形式，展示了文章的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括三个方面的内容：首先介绍人们选择共享单车的原因，列举了两个；接下来介绍的是骑共享单车时应遵循的一些规则，包括三个具体内容；最后介绍一下如果发生了事故应该怎么处理。学生们可以更加这一图表的提示，列出文章的写作提纲，并充实细节内容，组织语言，用正确的英语表达出来。这篇短文应使用一般现在时或现在完成时，第二人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先合理安排文章内容，注意分清层次和结构，主次要分明，应有具体的细节内容，不能写得太笼统；其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可使用简单句结构，穿插并列句或复合句的结构，提升作文档次。同时注意文章的连贯，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者介绍了共享单车的情况。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，层次清楚，包括了题目中所有的要点。短文主要从三个方面进行介绍：首先介绍了共享单车流行的原因；接下来介绍了骑共享单车时应遵循的规则；最后介绍的是如果发生了事故应该怎么办。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文水平。文章中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into peoples lives and become increasingly popular.、Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.、When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldnt make a call because it can be dangerous. 、If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary.等。（二）你喜欢骑自行车吗?你听说过共享单车（shared bikes）吗? （ 共享单车,即有需要的人通过扫描单车二维码，就可以租骑的一种共享自行车。）现在电台的"Today"栏目就共享单车这一话题,向我们征集稿件。请根据以下提示，以Shared bikes为题,写一篇短文。要点提示:在青岛,有许多共享单车,且越来越受欢迎。原因: 1. 骑单车花钱少,出行方便; 2. 有更少的污染;3. 有益于健康。问题:1. 到处停放,难以保持城市整洁; 2. 弄坏单车,甚至偷走或带回家。要求:1. 内容必须包括所有要点,并谈谈你的看法;2. 词数80-100。Shared bikes_【参考范文】Shared bikesDo you like riding bikes? Have you ever heard of shared bikes? In Qingdao, there are so many shared bikes,and they are becoming more and more popular with people. Now more and more people enjoy riding bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities. Because riding bikes is very convenient and costs less money. It can not only keep the city's environment clean, but also can be good for our health. But in our life , it causes some problems as well, for example, some people put them everywhere and make the city in a mess. Some people break them, and even steal them away. I think if the government takes action to deal with these problems, our city will become more and more beautiful.【解析详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，表达如今共享单车受欢迎的原因以及存在的问题。在写作时，注意时态的准确运用以及不要遗漏要点。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：单词短语：be popular with，比较级and比较级，instead of，be good for，in a mess，not only.but also., as well, for example。高分句型：I think if the government takes action to deal with these problems, our city will become more and more beautiful中I think后引导宾语从句，在宾语从句中，if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be popular with，比较级and比较级，instead of，be good for，in a mess，not only.but also., as well, for example等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（三）共享单车为人们的出行带来了越来越多的便利，可是人们在享用的时候却带来了一系列的问题。比如有人把单车带回了老家，有人使用自己的二维码骗取使用者的钱财，有人随意停放共享单车，有人甚至将共享单车扔到沟里，河里请你写一封倡议书，倡议人们热爱公共资源，保护公共资源，合理使用公共资源，如此，我们的生活才会因为公共设施的改善而变得更加美好。请从以下三个方面去谈：1.共享单车方便了人们的出行，减少污染，有利于环境的改善。2.列举人们对共享单车的破坏行为。3.合理使用共享单车，热爱公共资源，做一个文明的深圳人。要求：1.词数至少80词，要包含上述三个方面的内容，不必字字翻译。2.所给词汇仅作参考，不必都用。3.文章开头已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：QR Code（二维码）, public resources（公共资源）, cheat people of their money（骗钱）, environmentally friendly（环保的），low-carbon life（低碳生活）, civilization（明）, progress（进步）Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. _【参考范文】Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are making our travelling in the city much more convenient. People can use it anytime and anywhere. Sometimes people work so late that they dont have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. There are also people who are usually busy with work and dont have enough time to exercise. They will share bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.However, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. For example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own QR code to cheat the user's money, someone parked the bike at will, some people even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.I think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. Only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.【解析详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇议论文，主要是针对共享单车给人们带来的便利以及人们对共享单车的一些破坏行为的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，对带来的便利和人们对其的破坏阐述的比较详细，也是本文的重点可以通过三个方面进行阐述。2. 例文点评：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要说明共享单车给人们的生活带来的便利好处，第二段主要写了人们对共享单车所做的一些破坏行为，第三段主要写了一些倡议，提倡人们热爱公共资源。文章结构比较紧密，语言通顺，结构严谨。3. 高分亮点：短语：be busy with；instead of；be beneficial to；a series of；for example；not only but also。句型：so that引导的结果状语从句；who引导的定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；I think宾语从句。（四）共享单车(bike-sharing)被誉为中国现代新四大发明之一。如今厦门的大街小巷也随处可见共享单车的身影。请你根据表格内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。DevelopmentFirst used in Holland,1965introduced in China in 2007been popular since 2016Instructionscan the QR code(二维码)unlock the smart lockpay the billOpinionhealthy,.blocking(堵塞) the way,.要求：1.必须包含所提示信息，字数100词左右；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示词：shared bikes 共享的自行车_【参考范文】With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used in Holland in 1965. It was introduced in China in 2007 and it has been popular since 2016.How can we use the shared bikes? Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them.Secondly, when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.Different people have different opinions about shared bikes. Some people believe that riding shared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. Whats more, we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.【解析详解】这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据表格中所给出的内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。文章时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第一、第三人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。1. Its our duty to save water2. As we know, water is very important to man,3. We cant live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. But some people dont care about it.6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.7. Its our duty to protect our environment。8. It is very important to take care of our environment9. We should not throw litter onto the ground10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees11. We should plant more flowers and trees。12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.14. Trees are very helpful and important for us.15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.16. Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment.In recent days, we have to face I problem_A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _（说明A的现状）. Second,  _（举例进一步说明现状）. Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,  _（解决方法一）. For another _（解决方法二）. Finally, _（解决方法三）. Personally, I believe that_（我的解决方法）. Consequently,  Im confident that a bright future is waiting us because _（带来的好处）.（一）Title：Are shared bikes good for our city life?你认为共享单车进入我们城市生活里，是利是弊？请表明你的态度，并详细写出理由。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2. 短文包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；3. 词数80左右。_