《2022年高考英语一轮复习讲练测》专题12 作文（解析版）.doc

专题12 作文（2020届河南省名校联盟高三联考）52假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Frankie给你来信，说现在越来越多的外国人也开始庆祝中国的春节，他希望能对春节有更多的了解，请你就此给他写一封信。要点如下：1. 庆祝春节的传统方式；2. 目前庆祝方式的改变。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Frankie,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Frankie,How is everything going? Knowing that more and more foreigners are holding celebrations for Chinese Spring Festival, Im more than delighted to share with you more about the festival. Traditional Chinese Spring Festival is a big day for family reunion, when people eat dumplings, set off firecrackers, watch Spring Festival Gala and get red envelopes from the elders. But now people have a wide range of choices. There is a growing trend for people to eat out and give or grab red envelopes on WeChat. More people prefer to travel around the country or even across the world with their beloved ones over the Spring Festival. Chinese Spring Festival has seen its growing popularity in more countries and regions, and I sincerely invite you to experience this traditional event in China. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，告诉美国笔友Frankie关于中国春节的一些情况。这是一篇书信类作文。你的美国笔友Frankie给你来信，说现在越来越多的外国人也开始庆祝中国的春节，他希望能对春节有更多的了解，请你就此给他写一封信。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.书信格式要正确，信件开头结尾格式基本固定，根据题干要求对写信对象进行调整。例如本篇作文中，收件人是Frankie，写信人为Li Hua。2.书信一般要开门见山，交代下写信件原因，便于读信人了解书信重点，点明了这篇书信话题是关于“中国春节的风俗的介绍”。通过审题可知，这篇作文需要使用第一人称，一般现在时进行写作。3.要点要齐全。本文主要有2个要点： (1). 庆祝春节的传统方式；(2). 目前庆祝方式的改变。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。4.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把各方观点叙述清楚，特别是注意阐述自己的观点，细节把到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。（2020届河南省濮阳市高三第二次模拟）52假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Peter来信询问你大学想学的专业。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 告知你将选择中医专业；2. 解释你选择此专业的原因。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How are you doing? I'd like to tell you that I want to major in Chinese medicine when I go to university and become a doctor in the future.As you know, Chinese medicine is part of our Chinese traditional culture, whose value is gradually recognized by the world. More and more people are turning to Chinese medicine when they are not feeling well. That is because it does less harm to people. Besides, during the fight against COVID-19, Chinese medicine is also making a great contribution and has effectively eased the patients' pains. So I decide to pass down our traditional treasure and let more people benefit from it.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter写信，告知他要选择的专业以及选择该专业的原因。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 你将选择中医专业；2. 解释你选择此专业的原因第二步：列提纲（重点词组）major in/ be glad to do sth./ turn to/ do harm to/ fight against/ make a contribution to/ ease/ pass down/ benefit from/ look forward to/ hear from第三步：连词成句1. How is everything going?2. I am delighted to tell you that I want to choose Chinese medicine as my major when I go to university and become a doctor in the future.3. As you know, Chinese medicine is part of our Chinese traditional culture, the value of which is gradually recognized by the world. 4. More and more people are turning to Chinese medicine for help when they are not feeling well. 5. The reason for this is that Chinese medicine does less harm to people. 6. What's more, during the fight against COVID-19, Chinese medicine is also making a great contribution and has a good effect on easing the patients' pains. 7. So I am determined to pass down our traditional treasure and let more people benefit from it.8. Looking forward to hearing from you.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）（2020届河南省郑州市第三次质量预测）52假设你校打算为留学生举办“穿汉服，学书法”的中国传统文化体验活动，请根据以下内容以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。1.时间：6月10日下午3点；2.地点：留学生服务中心；3.内容：体验穿汉服、学写毛笔字、展示作品、交流体会、拍照留念等；4.要求：6月6日前到学生会找李华报名，并告知自己的服装尺码。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.通知的格式已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇：汉服 Han-style clothes(Hanfu)；书法，毛笔字 calligraphyNotice_Student UnionJune 3【答案】NoticeTo help overseas students experience traditional Chinese culture, our school is going to organize an activity called “Wearing Hanfu and Learning Calligraphy” at 3:00 p.m. on June 10th at the International Student Service Center.During the activity, you can not only wear Han-style clothes, but also learn how to write calligraphy with a Chinese brush, and then, you have a chance to display your handwriting. Whats more, you can share your feelings with others and take photos for memory. If youre fond of the activity, please sign up with Li Hua at the Student Union and tell your clothing size before June 6th.Dont miss such a good chance. Youre sure to benefit a lot from this activity.Student UnionJune 3【解析】本篇书面表达是一则通知。假设你校打算为留学生举办“穿汉服，学书法”的中国传统文化体验活动，请根据以下内容以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.时间：6月10日下午3点；2.地点：留学生服务中心；3.内容：体验穿汉服、学写毛笔字、展示作品、交流体会、拍照留念等；4.要求：6月6日前到学生会找李华报名，并告知自己的服装尺码。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：help overseas students experience traditional Chinese culture，be going to organize an activity， not only wear Han-style clothes, but also learn how to write calligraphy，Chinese brush，have a chance to display your handwriting，share your feelings with others，take photos for memory，be fond of the activity，sign up with Li Hua at the Student Union，tell your clothing size，a good chance，be sure to，benefit a lot from this activity。可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：eitheror，neithernor，or，as well as，bothand。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of ，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，at the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not onlybut (also)，whats more，whats worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。（2020届黑龙江省实验校高三第二次模拟）52假设你的名字叫李华，正在伦敦某中学做交换生。校友Chris正筹划一场关于中国文化的演出活动，但他在演出内容方面遇到了瓶颈，因此来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1. 说明写信目的；2. 提出建议；3. 表示期待。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语和结尾语已为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Chris,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Chris,I'm sorry to hear that you have had trouble with programme contents of the Chinese culture show. Don't worry. I'm very pleased to give you some advice.Chinese culture is becoming more and more popular around the world. So this is a good opportunity for the students in our school to experience it. As for the content, I recommend Chinese traditional culture like Beijing Opera and Chinese Shadow Show. If necessary, I'd also like to help you with the preparations because I know several Chinese exchange students here who are fond of Chinese traditional culture. I believe their participation will make the culture show more attractive.I hope my advice can be helpful and I' m looking forward to the Chinese culture show.Yours sincerelyLi Hua,【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你的名字叫李华，正在伦敦某中学做交换生。校友Chris正筹划一场关于中国文化的演出活动，但他在演出内容方面遇到了瓶颈，因此来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1. 说明写信目的2. 提出建议3. 表示期待第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，说明写信目的。第二段，提出建议。第三段，表示期待。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: opportunity ,recommend ,have trouble with，opportunity，help sb with, be fond of.第四步：确定较为高级的句子: because引导的原因状语从句和who引导的定语从何If necessary, I'd also like to help you with the preparations because I know several Chinese exchange students here who are fond of Chinese traditional culture. 省略that的宾语从句I believe their participation will make the culture show more attractive.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides，however，in conclusion.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。（2020届湖南省怀化市高三第二次模拟）52假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,Im always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge. And your advertisement about the summer camp caught my attention.I am a student in China. Would you be so kind as to tell me more information about the camp. First of all, Id like to know when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week? Second, how much do I have to pay for the course and does the cost cover the accommodation? Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?I would be most grateful if you could send me the information. Looking forward to your immediate response.Yours sincerely,Li Hu【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：dream of (梦想)；be admitted to(录取)；University of Cambridge (剑桥大学)；catch my attention(引起我的注意)；accommodation (住宿)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。（2020届湖南省长沙市雅礼中学高三模拟一）52假如你是李华，你校迎来了美国姊妹学校的交流生，他们将在你校学习生活一周。为帮助他们忙适应学校生活，校学生会将举办一个欢迎仪式。请你代表学生会用英语在仪式上简短致辞，内容包括：1、表示热烈欢迎；2、简要介绍学校；3、学习课程及实践活动安排：了解中国文化，组织包饺子比赛等。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,_【答案】It is my great honor to stand here and make a speech. First of all, on behalf of our school, I would like to warmly welcome the students who are from our American sister school. During your study, we will have a lot of communication and know each other. As we all know, our school has a long history and many excellent graduates who are now studying in the key universities in China. At the same time, we offer a variety of courses and all kinds of extra-curricular activities.During the week of exchange, we have also arranged various courses and practical activities for you. Through the course provided, you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture. In addition, we will organize a dumpling making contest.Finally, I hope you can have a good time in our school.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份发表简短致辞欢迎来自美国姊妹学校的交流生。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.表示热烈欢迎。2.简要介绍学校。3.学习课程及实践活动安排：了解中国文化，组织包饺子比赛等。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）on behalf of；long history；offer；have a better understanding第三步：连词成句1.First of all, on behalf of our school, I would like to warmly welcome the students who are from our American sister school.2.As we all know, our school has a long history and many excellent graduates who are now studying in the key universities in China.3.At the same time, we offer a variety of courses and all kinds of extra-curricular activities.4.Through the course provided, you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：提出欢迎；介绍学校；表示祝福2.表示并列补充关系：First of all；During；As we all know；At the same time；In addition；Finally第五步：润色修改（2020届江西省赣州市高三二模）52假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David来信说在学汉语时遇到一个不懂的词语愚公移山。请你写封回信简述这个成语故事及其寓意。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear David,Im glad to hear from you. And Im particularly delighted that you still keep on learning Chinese.As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese peoples daily life. Behind the idiom there is an interesting story. It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience. So he decided to move them away by using hoes and baskets. Day after day, year after year, Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to